I just finished playing, and I have to say it was a really interesting “experience.” The animations might be meh, expressions are simple, but at least the textures look decent—nothing fancy, but solid enough. Since it’s a VN, that’s not really a problem. Probably the worst thing is the total lack of audio.
But the writing… hats off, man! You kept me hooked the whole time. The plot is really engaging. Probably one of the best out here. Narrative from a psycho’s perspective—it’s such a cool and rarely used concept. I am not usually into THAT, but hey. Trying new things is fun. I adore the subtle humor sprinkled here and there. The characters? Well, that’s a bit more personal. They may not be very attractive to me, but they’re written in a consistent and coherent manner. Abby has such a punchable face. But Mommy and Asian's daughter? Definitely the sexiest.
The “Landlady” storyline is probably the strongest card here. Her inner mental struggle was, for me, the highlight of the game. I definitely prefer this kind of mental torture and psychological violation over plain sex, which gets boring pretty quickly when there’s too much of it. I wish there were more of that “vanilla abuse.”
As for Jessica, her raptus had such a huge potential, but it was rushed into just one sentence. BUT, I can totally see it becoming a whole new story branch. She could be a great addition to Martha’s arc. Mommy's mental breakdown could be explored even further, especially since Jessica’s accident was her fault. Here’s a random idea: maybe this could trigger Landlady’s maternal instinct to go into overdrive as a coping mechanism. She might start treating stubborn and hateful Jessica like her own baby, even breastfeeding her (an extra fetish here). Dunno. Such silly concept.
Whole sandbox/freeroam idea is kinda meh. I would prefer to get less rushed and more polished story. Overall I’m grateful for what you’ve made so far. Great job, man!
I really hope you can evolve this project into a solid game with proper animations and solid voice acting in the future.