Rate my 2nd character: Priscilla

[Bullgano10]

What do you think about the new result?
Does she look more adult and MILF like now?

PS: The images are in the OP.

I am sorry but I am gonna be honest with you..I wanna fuck your MILF so badly, she is hot asf!

 

[Mastur Bar]

I am sorry but I am gonna be honest with you..I wanna fuck your MILF so badly, she is hot asf!

Hmm, nice!
So maybe I hit the sweet spot this time.

 

[Deleted member 1536527]

Ohhh nice, definite improvements cuz of the bigger boobs, wider shoulders, and extra thiccness. Her eyes are prettier as well. I personally like the tied up hair better, I think it suits the "landlady" look more. But that's just me. .

 

[Fatalmasterpiece]

Hehe, I took a look at your project.
Seems like you get your characters from celebrities.
I identified Avril Lavigne, Rihanna and Madonna there.
Cool project, I'm looking forward to play it!

Talking about my character: She was made to be the MC's landlady.
While I want her to be pretty, I don't find it interesting that she's a top model, you know?
I'll be creating other characters soon that will have the model-esque and post them here.
The intention is to listen the public opinion to know if there is nothing in the character that bothers future players a lot and to make small adjustments that can be interesting.

By the way, thanks for the feedback!

Thanks, yeah I'm definitely going for a bit more of an idealistic fantasy.
I don't think most people appreciate how much effort it takes to make a good, "normal", realistic person. In many ways it is easier to aim for an unrealistic top model. You have definitely got some skills and your characters looks great! I like Luna the best so far. It is also good that you're doing your research and being smart about your creative process. Looking forward to your game as well!

 

[Mastur Bar]

Thanks, yeah I'm definitely going for a bit more of an idealistic fantasy.
I don't think most people appreciate how much effort it takes to make a good, "normal", realistic person. In many ways it is easier to aim for an unrealistic top model. You have definitely got some skills and your characters looks great! I like Luna the best so far. It is also good that you're doing your research and being smart about your creative process. Looking forward to your game as well!

You're right!
People seem to want all the characters to be model type, which sometimes makes me unsure about making normal characters.

I'll keep bringing the characters here so you can rate them.
I'm glad you liked Luna!

 

[Yngling]

(TLDR)

She's beautiful but in my opinion the eyes are too red. The iris should probably be darker, or with less saturation (more towards green/brown. The whites should be whiter, or white with some red veins, if you prefer.

 

[Mastur Bar]

(TLDR)

She's beautiful but in my opinion the eyes are too red. The iris should probably be darker, or with less saturation (more towards green/brown. The whites should be whiter, or white with some red veins, if you prefer.

I'm glad you liked her.

The eye color is kind of problematic to hit the "sweet spot" because some like the lighter iris, others think darker looks more realistic.
The intention was to give her hazel eyes and apparently other people in that thread liked the eyes.
If you look at the old version, you'll see that it had darker iris as you're talking, but the others suggested giving her lighter eyes.

 

[Yngling]

The eye color is kind of problematic to hit the "sweet spot" because some like the lighter iris, others think darker looks more realistic.
The intention was to give her hazel eyes and apparently other people in that thread liked the eyes.
If you look at the old version, you'll see that it had darker iris as you're talking, but the others suggested giving her lighter eyes.

Maybe you should try to go more towards brown-green?

Personally I prefer the darker version.

 

[RomanHume]

Maybe turn down the bump map on the lips a bit to get rid of some of that pinching, but otherwise, great stuff!

 

[EverSeven]

looks too young but its a good model, a MILF needs to look at the minimum 40 years of age

 

[Mastur Bar]

Maybe you should try to go more towards brown-green?

Personally I prefer the darker version.

I think I'll keep the eye color as it is, as lighter eyes tend to get more people's attention.
Just one question: Does this bother you a lot or is it something more like "fine tuning"?

Maybe turn down the bump map on the lips a bit to get rid of some of that pinching, but otherwise, great stuff!

I think this is being caused by a specific morph, I'm going to mess with that and the problem will probably go away.

looks too young but its a good model, a MILF needs to look at the minimum 40 years of age

Hmm, I don't know...
While you're right, some people may complain about the worsening in appearance to give her the appearance of an older woman.
I think this is one of the cases that is more worth sinning for the excess of beauty to stay in the safe zone.

 

[RomanHume]

I think this is being caused by a specific morph, I'm going to mess with that and the problem will probably go away.

Well if you have a 'lip wrinkle' morph then yeah, I guess that could work.

But when messing with morphs doesn't fix it, try turning down the bump map.

 

[Yngling]

I think I'll keep the eye color as it is, as lighter eyes tend to get more people's attention.
Just one question: Does this bother you a lot or is it something more like "fine tuning"?

To be honest it bothers me enough to think she's supernatural / vampire (or wearing coloured contacts).
Perhaps it's also the lighting.

But how do you feel about:

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[Mastur Bar]

Well if you have a 'lip wrinkle' morph then yeah, I guess that could work.

But when messing with morphs doesn't fix it, try turning down the bump map.

To be honest it bothers me enough to think she's supernatural / vampire (or wearing coloured contacts).
Perhaps it's also the lighting.

But how do you feel about:

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I know it took me a while to answer, but I made some fixes on her.

These are the changes that I made:

• I removed the lips pinch
• I made her hazer eyes subtly darker

What do you think about the changes?

PS: Images are on the OP.

 

[Yngling]

Much better!

 

[Bullgano10]

I know it took me a while to answer, but I made some fixes on her.

These are the changes that I made:

• I removed the lips pinch
• I made her hazer eyes subtly darker

What do you think about the changes?

PS: Images are on the OP.

You are really good at that, keep going and create your own game. I know its not that easy as like I say but you will be successful!

 

[Mastur Bar]

Much better!

You are really good at that, keep going and create your own game. I know its not that easy as like I say but you will be successful!

I'm continuing development right now.
I just wanted to hear an opinion as to what I should improve on the characters.
Thanks for all the feedback!

 

[Jaike]

Just commenting that I think the version with loose hair is more attractive, though the other one is not bad. Imo buns are in general a bit overused as milf signifiers, but this bun looks better than the regular Daz milf bun.

 

[PietruccioTheHilander]

looks too young but its a good model, a MILF needs to look at the minimum 40 years of age

moreover the stereotype of the milfs foresees bigger breasts and a little waning because they have breastfed.

 

[Mastur Bar]

Just commenting that I think the version with loose hair is more attractive, though the other one is not bad. Imo buns are in general a bit overused as milf signifiers, but this bun looks better than the regular Daz milf bun.

To be honest, the 2 versions will be used: both loose hair and bum hair.
It's like 2 modes of the same hair that will appear as the renders are being done.

moreover the stereotype of the milfs foresees bigger breasts and a little waning because they have breastfed.

That's true.
But I plan to use this body setup for another character, who will also be a MILF, so I prefer to keep this one with a more balanced body.