Ren'Py Raven [Segment 05] [Midnight Stories]

[huy7644]

pass PC , help me !

 

[MrD812]

pass PC , help me !

The very best advice to date for this:

 

[Irrfan007]

pass PC , help me !

if not wrong it's "perv"

 

[7empest5teele]

I made a post and deleted earlier about the dialog lacking, which was dragging the entire story down for me.
That was merely the beginning though, since it quickly cleared up and is currently mighty smooth and natural.
The humor, yeah keep that as a constant, it really helps with the emersion and flow, but PLEASE just minimize the amount everyone uses the word "Bro" like its the only name he has.
It is excellent how intelligent the entire family and extended family are, how you can see the wheels turning in their minds and that POP when you know they figured something out.
I was so enjoyable to read along with the MC as he figured out the process they were taking to come to their conclusion.
So I am invested in this story now, and have it on my list of favorites.
Well done.

 

[FirminoisGod]

Been awfully quiet in here, has been been any recent developments?

 

[Nulldev]

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Dec 01, 2024 07:05 pm

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Heya,

Things are progressing well, and I think it will be over soon.
During this whole month, I must have done about twenty animations and learned from my mistakes (gravity, squash and stretch, breast jiggle, ...). I think I'm good now. I am sure this try will be the last one (I hope so...).
The release should be coming soon.

Thank you for your patience,
Midnight.

 

[sourabh77598]

save file pls