probably one of the most weird stories for a game like this i've seen so far. It's not bad, it's just too much gangster shit and not enough everything else. It made zero sense for MC to not just send Rick a text message why the fuck was did he go through all that shit for when all he had to do was send a text massage, he already did it once or was that just another dream?
so many things in this game was just mc's dreams, wasted a sex scene on a pointless dream sequence instead of having one that actually happened in the story. Pointless effort is what I call that. It was a good scene though, but still pointless.
All he needed to do was send another text message and say to him to meet him somewhere. That was all.
This whole danny the dog storyline was cool and all but why?
You seem to have way too many side stories cooking at the same time. Oh well maybe when the games completed it won't be annoying to play.
A small suggestion though. Change the story so his phone broke instead. That plot hole is bigger than an old granny who used to be a sexworkers vagina.
I get that the MC isn't the most intelligent person out there but give even him a break he's not that stupid.