Oh for FCK SAKE!
The couple have been MARRIED FOR A FCKING DECADE!
...Who is THIS guy with the camera?
Oh he is my BROTHERS SON (NOT my Nephew though??), they died in a car accident.
SHE never heard of this, its all a revelation to her, the DEATH OF HIS BROTHER SLIPPED his mind?
LOOK Dev, write out the FULL script to this Kinetic novel, read it fully and slowly so you can finalize it, THEN put it to digital here.
Its VERY clear you are only writing as you fcking go, and THAT will bring you to boredom VERY soon, which will have you ABANDONING this project.
Oh and why is this loser alcoholic husband naked in the kitchen while the wife ISNT??