Interesting. Nice start so far and a nice amount of content as well. Renders are fine and the music is relaxing too and enjoyable. The glossary is great too. Some lore gathering is always appreciated.
It feels like this game was made more for a male MC than a female MC though. There are times in dialogue where Val talks to the MC like they are a male, yet you are playing a female MC. Like the conversation about how bravery can be sexy to us girls. It's like, yeah. I'm a girl. You don't have to tell me about girls. Just you can tell a lot of the dialogue is geared more towards male than female, regardless of the MC's gender. Even some scenes with the arms of the MC in view, you can see they are male arms.
One thing I did like is how the MC actually freaks out a bit over this whole situation at first. Too many games make the MC act like these types of things are normal and it doesn't affect them at all. It's nice for once to see an MC who doesn't just accept all these things happening to them and brush them off as an every day situation for once.
But yeah, the writing is good and the story is interesting so far. The little training stuff with Val is nice and unique (for me at least). Curious where this is going to go. Best of luck with your project and thanks.