VN Ren'Py Reclaiming the Lost [v0.9] [Passion Portal]

[SoulSwipre]

Damn. The story sounds so good, renders look nice. But it's pretty disappointing to get even more branches. It usually slows down development and we end up having to play through same scenes multiple times to get all the scenes.

 

[ClockworkGnome]

Actually, I disagree. there is not a single direct hint of this. People started thinking that because she's on the poster.
But if she's not daughter, who should I put on the poster? She's the main character. That is why she is on Poster.

I'll be honest, when I read:

"...a man sets out on a journey to find his lost daughter.

In his search, he meets a strange and compelling young girl. Together, they delve into the mysteries of the past, following a trail of clues and half-remembered moments as they try to track down the daughter he never knew he had."

...right in the intro, my immediate assumption after years of experience with stories and knowing how tropes and plot twists work, is that the girl he's looking for is going to be the one he's with the entire time. That's about the most blatant assumption possible.

 

[desmosome]

I'll be honest, when I read:

"...a man sets out on a journey to find his lost daughter.

In his search, he meets a strange and compelling young girl. Together, they delve into the mysteries of the past, following a trail of clues and half-remembered moments as they try to track down the daughter he never knew he had."

...right in the intro, my immediate assumption after years of experience with stories and knowing how tropes and plot twists work, is that the girl he's looking for is going to be the one he's with the entire time. That's about the most blatant assumption possible.

Maybe the real daughter was the friends we made along the way.

 

[Passion_Portal]

Harem ? Passion_Portal

Yes

 

[OnlyFriend]

how many daughters he has ? hmmm

 

[omgx123]

Overall, there are certain moments in the game where I concealed an important plot point. I won't disclose it; perhaps someone will discover it and write about it. But even with this hint, it will not be possible to definitively say who is who

what hardware do you use , and how much avg time does it take to create a full finished render?

 

[Deleted member 5988643]

except for the part where old content was removed if you are not a creep

Yeh okay, you are right, I didn't like that part anyway, but I noticed it was removed in the scripts. If you extract the rpa files or so, those images where you touch your daughters ass, are still in there...

 

[Deleted member 5988643]

Overall, there are certain moments in the game where I concealed an important plot point. I won't disclose it; perhaps someone will discover it and write about it. But even with this hint, it will not be possible to definitively say who is who

I would suggest, the girl has the same color hair and the same eyes as his ex. That father of his ex, also sees Elizabeth in her, but then he says before that if only she had her eyes, which she clearly does...

Next version need to read it again...

 

[SimpleGamer]

just realize you need to tell the daughter to use her beauty to get a scene later. I think the requirement is a little bit strict for that.

Also prefer to unrpa the script if you want to unlock certain options. There are lots of relation and boolean value check inside it.

 

[brankom]

You need only 4 lust points to get it. And no need to be a creep to get them.
You can get them by
"Wait and listen" in Chloe bedroom.
"Say her she looks sexy" while video call
"Try to peek" in hotel room
"Don't look away"

Yeah, because it's not creepy hearing a private conversation, I never saw the option to say she looks sexy, no creepy at all trying to peek at someone in the bathroom or looking away at a person coming out of the shower that you just meet, sorry but your definition of being creepy is way off, I have no problem with the creep thing, is the writing that make it feel off, like that monologue where the mc gets home and comment about Bob's figure, that was just dumb.

 

[Passion_Portal]

what hardware do you use , and how much avg time does it take to create a full finished render?

RTX 3070TI. Depends on what's in the render. On average about 3-4 hours if I want to get a good result.

 

[Passion_Portal]

Yeah, because it's not creepy hearing a private conversation, I never saw the option to say she looks sexy, no creepy at all trying to peek at someone in the bathroom or looking away at a person coming out of the shower that you just meet, sorry but your definition of being creepy is way off, I have no problem with the creep thing, is the writing that make it feel off, like that monologue where the mc gets home and comment about Bob's figure, that was just dumb.

In live yes. But in game it is not creepiest thing we've ever seen

 

[jem00]

no compressed ver ?

 

[operamini]

can now reject the new girl awesome

 

[Pick_A_Name]

Agreed... "Silence of the" ...who?

 

[dirtyoldmanlol]

some of the renders look like photo's and not perfect model photo's either. Really good attention to detail. Really impressed

 

[Faxo]

Spoiler: Her name is not...

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[RYOUSC]

She's the main character. That is why she is on Poster.

I do hope the main girl is related to MC in some way, even if she's not the daughter. Nothing would make their chemistry hotter than a blood-relation. That's just my wishful thinking anyway. Good job on your writing, I'm so invested in the plot. Can't wait for the eventual reveal about who's who.

 

[Jazzgeoff]

Yeah, because it's not creepy hearing a private conversation, I never saw the option to say she looks sexy, no creepy at all trying to peek at someone in the bathroom or looking away at a person coming out of the shower that you just meet, sorry but your definition of being creepy is way off, I have no problem with the creep thing, is the writing that make it feel off, like that monologue where the mc gets home and comment about Bob's figure, that was just dumb.

I agree, I tend to take a roleplay approach to AVN's, I never choose the creep on the girl in the bathroom option. If it turns out that I needed to act like a creep in order to unlock later content then the game is probably not for me..
Also a choice is not really a choice if one option unlocks, and the other option locks out content.

 

[Passion_Portal]

I agree, I tend to take a roleplay approach to AVN's, I never choose the creep on the girl in the bathroom option. If it turns out that I needed to act like a creep in order to unlock later content then the game is probably not for me..
Also a choice is not really a choice if one option unlocks, and the other option locks out content.

I will try to balance points by next update, to make it more easy to get them.