VN Ren'Py Reclaiming the Lost [v0.9] [Passion Portal]

[Passion_Portal]

I agree that the writing on that scene could be punched up a little. Like if Liz had something local that kept her from being able to easily relocate like she was taking care of her sick mother or something. It would make the impasse that she and MC were at make a little more sense. It would also make her decision to not take on parental responsibility make more sense if she was already a caregiver and had no one who could help her (since her father also seems to have problems).

I just finished the game, and one thing stuck out to me -

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I understand humans are irrational, and that not every decision is purely logical - but it seems out of place to have that as the reason. Especially with the hints about a conspiracy teased later on.

He could have done things differently, but then, it wouldn't be the main character's fault. He loved her, but being young, he didn't really get how much, and he didn't value what he had. Yes, he just wanted to leave and break up. Many people make mistakes when they're young.

 

[Filipis]

He could have done things differently, but then, it wouldn't be the main character's fault. He loved her, but being young, he didn't really get how much, and he didn't value what he had. Yes, he just wanted to leave and break up. Many people make mistakes when they're young.

I think the problem with that scene is, the narrative doesn't prepare the player well enough to understand why MC decided to end a, by all accounts, healthy and loving relationship over a simple job offer. Especially when the girlfriend was more than willing to move with him and enable him to chase his dream.

From the start, the MC gives off the impression that he himself thinks of Elizabeth as 'the one that got away', so it is puzzling to see him just drop her like hot coal because of a career opportunity.

If we got more of an explanation and BTS look of MC's & Elizabeth's relationship, then maybe we could empathize. As it stands now, it's a bit jarring to learn.

 

[Passion_Portal]

I think the problem with that scene is, the narrative doesn't prepare the player well enough to understand why MC decided to end a, by all accounts, healthy and loving relationship over a simple job offer. Especially when the girlfriend was more than willing to move with him and enable him to chase his dream.

From the start, the MC gives off the impression that he himself thinks of Elizabeth as 'the one that got away', so it is puzzling to see him just drop her like hot coal because of a career opportunity.

If we got more of an explanation and BTS look of MC's & Elizabeth's relationship, then maybe we could empathize. As it stands now, it's a bit jarring to learn.

There are reasons why. This is not the last memory of her

 

[pizbia]

Disagree with the above since people end relationships based on vague feelings all the time. I thought the writing was clear and the scene was good. People say stuff like that all the time after months of dwelling on it.

Actually, the whole game was incredibly good. It's always nice to have a game come out and instantly jump right up into your top 5. The renders are gorgeous, the woman and Olivia are both great characters, and it does a great job of creating sexual tension rather than just going straight to sex.

 

[Gabriel1628]

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I enjoyed the game, for a lovely and charming dressing sexy to live with a 30+ guy.


I had played the game for several version, I think i have no problem with the plot, as different person have different mentality and thinking, just like you dont know why some superstar will commit suicide as everyone think they should be life-winner all the time, as someone cannot figure it out why MC give up a lovely girl for a job, maybe there is something behind the plot just await us to find out


MY problem is that, why you create a hot girl (COVER GIRL) always tease MC but nothing happens, i think you would plan for a dramatic sex scene begin with a dramatic turnaround for the story for them, maybe a gun shoot escape from the gang etc.,) but i still crave for


Another problem (not complain) is, can I wait longer for much scene to play, not a rush but little and little scene come out, i hope our wait deserve more return (just a humble request), LoL

 

[FalconLover420]

I feel like I need a walkthrough because I felt like I missed a lot of paths going blind.

 

[Deleted member 5988643]

Hey, I wrote a Walkthrough for myself, hopefully it's a little help.

Why you call it a .dot file, that's a word document template, not a doc. Well it still has contents....

 

[S4nshine]

Yes, you have to be careful to choose. It's good to experiment with which choices lead to which results but basically there are 2 paths, a romantic love based path and a lust dominated path.

 

[FalconLover420]

I wrote a Walkthough for myself. Hope it's a little help. This time this zip contains a file in *.doc format.... sorry

Thank you for the walkthrough!!

 

[chris18911]

Great game, can´t wait for the next update

 

[ronniq_390]

I wrote a Walkthough for myself. Hope it's a little help. This time this zip contains a file in *.doc format.... sorry

Hey a bit confused. in your walkthorugh the motel details are before the car scene and uh hence I hace 0 clue how anyone can get to the beauty lesson in the car - can you make a correction to the doc?

 

[ronniq_390]

I corrected the document, thanks ronniq_390 for the feedback. Here is the revised version. If there is anything else, please let me know.

Thanks for the update. Still clueless as to how you get 2S by the time you converse in the car and get to the beauty talk option. The only option to S points in your walkthrough (and what I am have observed in the game) till that point is in the car convo only re:chess/actiong games. I have 0 idea how you can activate the beauty option otherwise.

 

[ronniq_390]

You need to pick the sub choices....Cafè: beauty, later in car: tell you're an action..... and after that you can pick the second beauty choice.

tried that once before - hoping 2nd time's the charm

 

[ronniq_390]

sisa2023 if u could add this into the walkthrough
+ share it as a pdf

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[Woodstock_1983]

They really need to create a walkthrough for this game with points. How can I get her to stay? The dev shouldn't block any choices and just let the players decide.

 

[Woodstock_1983]

It's better if you make the game you want to play than to try to make the game others want to play. You can end working on something you're disgusted with if you're too focosued on what kinks are popular among alt accounts.

Another thing you can do is make the game you like and just have avoidable things that some players like or don't like. That way you please everyone.

 

[Elduriel]

They really need to create a walkthrough for this game with points. How can I get her to stay? The dev shouldn't block any choices and just let the players decide. View attachment 2811360

if you make some not so obvious choices and be a littler more aggressive (not a nice guy all the time) you will have the second option available. Not sure if it's a single choice that enables this or the overall score of previous choices.

 

[Krull]

Fan Sig:

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[Lavet]

First of all, the game is quite good, both for the plot and the character design.
But now with the subject of the possible daughter, we have a total of 3 characters with the possibility of being the daughter, this is not counting the fact that some more characters could be added in the future.
Next, I will make a list enumerated as I think it is more or less likely that it is his daughter (any typos are due to the fact that my native language is not English):

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[snow123789456]

While I really like the game, a good WT mode is required!!!!!