VN Ren'Py Reclaiming the Lost [v0.9] [Passion Portal]

[Skylaroo]

My small criticism for this game (and also for other games in general) is when the dev tries to write descriptions of what's happening as if we're reading a book and cannot see what's happening. It's worse when what's written doesn't really match what's shown. An example is when they got into the hotel room and the description was "It was a small, cramped space, with two beds pushed up against opposite walls." while the picture clearly showed that the room is quite spacious and the beds aren't pushed up against opposite walls.

Other than that small but consistent issue, I think the game looks interesting enough.

 

[kratos1234]

My small criticism for this game (and also for other games in general) is when the dev tries to write descriptions of what's happening as if we're reading a book and cannot see what's happening. It's worse when what's written doesn't really match what's shown. An example is when they got into the hotel room and the description was "It was a small, cramped space, with two beds pushed up against opposite walls." while the picture clearly showed that the room is quite spacious and the beds aren't pushed up against opposite walls.

Other than that small but consistent issue, I think the game looks interesting enough.

Well with the text I think that the creator can avoid some renders and also describes some things that still do not appear exactly the same in the game

 

[kratos1234]

Am I the only one who likes the expressions of the characters?

 

[Yngling]

Am I the only one who likes the expressions of the characters?
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No, you are not the only one!
They are exceptionally well done here. I'm told it's not so easy in Daz to do this.

 

[cylek1]

Am I the only one who likes the expressions of the characters?
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You aren't
Passion Portal has made an amazing job with facial expressions

 

[Deleted member 5606666]

Am I the only one who likes the expressions of the characters?
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Nope, you're not, there a lot of us. This game's premise is not bad. It's actually a very interesting start too.

 

[LSC82]

Am I the only one who likes the expressions of the characters?
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The dev did a pretty good job with the facial expressions indeed.
You can see the secretary changing from worried to pensive to happy.

With Chloe there's a nice moment where you can see some shame in her face if you question her streaming.

I wonder, am I alone, if the first thing I thought when I saw that girl, that they would end up together in bed, and that they later find out it's his daughter ?

A dirty mind is a joy forever...

My mind certainly went there... i don't think we are the only ones.

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[pothb]

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[Yngling]

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No idea but sometimes such traits skip a generation. And even though something may be considered dominant, that also doesn't seem to be absolute.

And, perhaps, we are thinking a bit too deeply for a porn game.

 

[Ichigo Kurosaki Shiba]

Walkthrough?

 

[G0DZillA]

Can't wait to see what the future holds for this game, female MC? The daughter? Good luck.

 

[martaprzych]

Guys...after downloading, in .rar is version 0.1, not 0.2 SCAM! No, really, fix this :V

 

[HentaiKami]

Guys...after downloading, in .rar is version 0.1, not 0.2 SCAM! No, really, fix this :V

Or just typo in the folder inside the rar, since i downloaded it and it had the 0.2 content regardless of the naming.

 

[pavel.smrcek]

Am I the only one who likes the expressions of the characters?
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No absolutely not :-D

 

[Zeeye]

This is by far the most realistic beautiful milf i ve seen on this site so far :O wow

Totally agree!!!

 

[sickqt]

This is a very promising start of the game! Keep it up good job

 

[dabuzzkiller1]

This is a very promising start of the game! Keep it up good job

Second that.

 

[Newhell]

Good. Pretty picture.

 

[GingerbreadMan]

Hey Passion_Portal .

I like the beginning of your story! Keep going.

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Just one little thing - you're switching between present and past tense.

You're using present all the time, then comes 'With a steady hand, you picked up ...'
Then when going for a coffee, suddenly it is 'You walked ...' This time you keep past tense for three images before returning to present.
The first is completely off, the second occurrence could be like telling the overarching stuff in past, while now zooming into the story again and continuing from the point in time you were in that café.
But there is nothing indicating that kind of structure in your story, and at least for me it throws me off like hell when in a story there are such random changes in the used tense seemingly without reason.

Edit: OK, after the start of the café scene it seems to continue mostly in past all the time. I find that much better to read. Maybe change the very beginning to be all past too?
On the other hand, while I mostly like stories written in past tense better, I think I actually prefered the beginning written in present tense here. During the cafè scene, I was always thinking 'This would sound better/more natural if it was present.'^^
We seem to play from the MCs present perspective after all.

Besides that, you're adding little details and descriptions to the text creating a nice image and atmosphere.
It reads very well. I like it a lot.
Eagerly waiting for how it will continue.

 

[battali0n]

Your game looks interesting but I will have to pass. The renders are great and the story premise looks good but one of the Li's being a cam-girl was a complete turn-off for me. I've seen several creators do it and it always ruins the LI for me. Maybe you will do it differently but the fact that you are adding in a male character as a big part of the story and then making it multiple protagonists is just too much. I wish you success and I'll check back to see what you do next.