-Edit: This was a review of Version 0.21.3. I believe the dev is actively improving the game and reducing the grind (that got me so triggered) in future versions.-
I feel a little bit like I'm kicking a puppy as the dev seems really nice but I guess if someone is going to ask for support on Patreon then I'm going to give an honest review, I think it's fair.
The game has a very amateurish vibe immediately. The first thing you notice is that the perspectives are all totally off when navigating the locations, it's like you are playing as an oompa loompa or tiny child. Also there isn't any logic to which arrows send you to which parts of each location without having to read them every single time. Otherwise from the start it seems like your stock standard amnesia story made in RenPy with Daz models. No surprises yet although there's some mystery about your Dad (and I have to assume, being your average RenPy game on this site, at some point down the line you accidentally bone your sister or mum or something haha).
Obviously I found the ui stuff and perspective annoying but I could overlook it if the game wasn't so mind numbingly grindy. I really don't understand why devs insist on making their games like this, I've completely lost interest in the story once I've found myself clicking the same few icons over and over again to get money for 20min, only to discover I only have $1000 and still need $4000 more to unlock the next bit of the story. I understand a little bit of grinding to add a feeling of achievement but this isn't what is happening. All interest I had in finding out what comes next has dried up. And that isn't even talking about the lock picking and hacking jobs.
So lets take the lock picking skill for example. To level it up you need exp. There are 8 levels of perks you can get. To get one perk point you need 100xp. You get 10xp with each success. Success isn't gauranteed but lets ignore that for a moment, to level up and get all your perk points you need to, bare minimum, do the job EIGHTY TIMES. But of course it will be more than that because you can't succeed every time. Not only that you can at first only do the job 3 times a day. It's insanity. Your restaurant job nets you a little more money but with that you have to deal with navigating the green arrows everyday and that just adds insult to injury, making it about the same amount, if not more mindless clicking.
When 80% (conservative estimate) of the game time is clicking the same couple of buttons over and over seeing the same couple of scenes over and over to get to the actual content, I'm out.
Ps. why 2 stars and not 1? Because it might have redeeming features you can get to after an hour and a half of grind but I'm not willing to give up that much of my time to find out. Sorry if this seems unreasonable dev but grind like this absolutely triggers me, I think I find it disrespectful of the player or something. I'm definitely willing to give the game another shot if grind is drastically changed at some point in the future.