VN Ren'Py Reconstruction [v0.2] [Rebelion]

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Overview:
A future world - where everything develops quickly and especially in Medicine. With just one pill, all the wounds will be healed immediately. And right now, you’re living in that amazing world. But ironically, your parents, they have disappeared for no reason. Only to make your life more difficult because you have to pay off the debt left by your parents. You thought everything was deadlocked. But with a glimpse of hope shining on you, you have been adopted by Cara and together you have paid back the amount owed. And many others will always help you when needed. And then, you realize… you have to live in a harsh world, not the wonderful one as many people think this is.​

Thread Updated: 2024-11-23
Release Date: 2024-11-21
Developer: Rebelion
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Censored: No
Version: 0.2
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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Old saves won't work. You need to start from beginning.
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nc 38.jpg gohome9.jpg cara 11.jpg joy 22.jpg cara 101.jpg nc 85.jpg ​
 
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I know this is inspired by Eternum the style is obvious. This thing takes time and consistency to create kindly take you time to create this don't rush it and make sure you can feed yourself while doing this start with 3 months per update so people would see progress if you have a stable following make it 4-6mos of updates but make the play time lengthy. If this POPs off it's rewarding if not it's a Big L. Good Luck Have Fun developing this game.
 
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Why does the MC call all these girls "sis"?
Why does Max call Joy the MC's sister in one scene, then his friend in the next?

Really cool scene with the bar and those options, especially the little jukebox option.
Some of the options that look like they should be thoughts aren't presented as such - they look like spoken dialogue.
Also, somethings appear to be tagged with the wrong person saying them... I think. English was rough enough to make question who should have been saying certain lines.

Overall, pretty well put together. There are some hard cuts that can be a bit jarring, and the English needs some polishing, but looking forward to the next chapter.
 
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Getting really tired of the old 'you have to pay off this dead person's debt' bullshit. No. You don't. Their estate is responsible for their debt, and if it doesn't have enough liquid assets to cover it, then non-liquid assets are sold off to cover it. And if that isn't enough, that's too damn bad for the debt holder. Cause NO ONE is responsible for a debt they did not take out and sign a contract for.
 
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ryansFLYIN said:
Why does the MC call all these girls "sis"?
Why does Max call Joy the MC's sister in one scene, then his friend in the next?

Really cool scene with the bar and those options, especially the little jukebox option.
Some of the options that look like they should be thoughts aren't presented as such - they look like spoken dialogue.
Also, somethings appear to be tagged with the wrong person saying them... I think. English was rough enough to make question who should have been saying certain lines.

Overall, pretty well put together. There are some hard cuts that can be a bit jarring, and the English needs some polishing, but looking forward to the next chapter.
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Well, I think because it's my habit that I always call "sis".
Thanks for your cmt. I'm fixing bugs right now.
 
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joryh said:
Getting really tired of the old 'you have to pay off this dead person's debt' bullshit. No. You don't. Their estate is responsible for their debt, and if it doesn't have enough liquid assets to cover it, then non-liquid assets are sold off to cover it. And if that isn't enough, that's too damn bad for the debt holder. Cause NO ONE is responsible for a debt they did not take out and sign a contract for.
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I'm sure if you calmly explain that to a criminal organization they will 100% back down and forgive the debt.

OH WAIT
 
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