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It's a good start, and I'm looking forward to future updates. If I have one constructive criticism, I would say that the story can be a little hard to follow at times, when not enough information is provided. Like, when Soyung offers the protagonist the job to pay his debts. A little explanation of: "I know of a fighting tournament that you could do well in... if you're willing to try something for my uncle." would go a long way.
Also, it says in Jessie's bio: hates "Ezor", even if you change the name.
Also, it says in Jessie's bio: hates "Ezor", even if you change the name.
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I will do it later because I have a lot of trouble with that and the guy who helped me to port it can't help me right now.
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I will say no. But right now, to compare to Jessie. You can't. Cause MC is a nerd. (Not next year, promise. Maybe 2 years)I have a couple of questions: Will the MC always be weaker than the LIs, or will he eventually surpass them? Also, the game is so good that I don’t think I can wait another year for the next update!
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I will try to fix it later cause that's the picture, not a code so I can't fix depend on the player's name
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Since it's the MC's info about the character you could just change it to "Me" since he knows she hates him.I will try to fix it later cause that's the picture, not a code so I can't fix depend on the player's name
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Unofficial Android Port of:
Reconstruction [v0.2] [Rebelion]
My android port has an alternative save location, the save will remain intact when you uninstall the game so don't worry about starting over. And my port has a textbox opacity slider and text size slider and added change name to the main menu.
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Reconstruction [v0.2] [Rebelion]
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as to motivate me and get me going to do more ports, and help me pay for mega storage, thanks
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I had the same reaction; what the hell just happened and why is the MC not asking Jessie a ton of questions?
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There is like a huge chunk missing. The whole battle and going from Jessie refusing to train MC to him on the street drinking and then when he talks to the skinny friend (Soyoung?) that he already fought against someone in the arena and he lost (a fat guy according to Soyoung)?.
At least there is confirmation that there was indeed renders missing:
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I got disappointed with 0.2, and especially so because the previous version was so good. The scene transitions in general didn't go as smoothly as 1.5 which I played before, which got in the way of the story imo.
I had to stop my first playthrough and go back just to try and understand what the hell was going on in case I missed something and most of it just wasn't shown. Megumi (this is the one that going back clarified something but she's still completely different from the first version) treats MC like shit even if I decide to help after bumping into her, out of the blue Soyoung starts talking about how MC's constitution is different from normal and he can abuse stronger drugs that most people can't take even 5% of with literally no build up or explanation, MC and Soyoung start talking about some fighting arena as if it's common knowledge for us again with literally 0 explanation, MC asks Jessie to teach him fighting moves with there being no indication whatsoever that she's a skilled fighter after just seeing her with a baseball bat in hand threatening a sexual harasser before, MC taking the drug that Soyoung warned him would come with severe temporary side effects in public in the middle of Joy's bar in front of everybody like a dumbass. None of this makes any sense.
MC was a punching bag for everyone in the entire episode, especially Jessie's which only made me hate her more. The only cool part was him punching that thug into the garbage.
I had to stop my first playthrough and go back just to try and understand what the hell was going on in case I missed something and most of it just wasn't shown. Megumi (this is the one that going back clarified something but she's still completely different from the first version) treats MC like shit even if I decide to help after bumping into her, out of the blue Soyoung starts talking about how MC's constitution is different from normal and he can abuse stronger drugs that most people can't take even 5% of with literally no build up or explanation, MC and Soyoung start talking about some fighting arena as if it's common knowledge for us again with literally 0 explanation, MC asks Jessie to teach him fighting moves with there being no indication whatsoever that she's a skilled fighter after just seeing her with a baseball bat in hand threatening a sexual harasser before, MC taking the drug that Soyoung warned him would come with severe temporary side effects in public in the middle of Joy's bar in front of everybody like a dumbass. None of this makes any sense.
MC was a punching bag for everyone in the entire episode, especially Jessie's which only made me hate her more. The only cool part was him punching that thug into the garbage.
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Thanks, my friend. After all your explanation. I made a lot of mistakes, especially about the "Show don't tell" stuff.
I will try to fix the issue that I made. Thanks for your comment. I very much appreciated it.
I really like the artstyle and setting. But as others before me already said, the pacing of the story is all over the place, youre lacking a lot of information, and the conversations jump all over the place. Its a good beginning, but you should try and improve your english - spelling is fine, but telling a story lacks a lot of things. If you can improve on this aspect, your VN has a lot of potential
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Thanks for your reply. I still make a lot of mistakes in 0.2. Missing kind of a lot of things. I will fix those things soon. Thanks for letting me know.
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There was very little context as to why he asked Jessie for training to begin with too.
The LIs seem to have superpowersI have a couple of questions: Will the MC always be weaker than the LIs, or will he eventually surpass them? Also, the game is so good that I don’t think I can wait another year for the next update!