I enjoyed what you made so far. It's probably a pain in the ass but going through and spell checking the script would definitely do a lot to make the experience more enjoyable. What I do with my VN is I play through it myself and read everything. This is something I see a lot of up and coming devs not do correctly. My first impression of a game is more likely to be negative if there are a lot of grammatical issues. If English is not your first language, I hope you don't take any offense to this
Looking forward to your updates in the future. Best of luck.
No offense taken! Thank you for your advice.
English isn't my native language, nor my 3D-Artist's.
So it's always a little bit difficult to just play through it and fix everything. Especially grammar mistakes.
But, we're toying with the idea of getting someone to proofread everything.
In the meantime, I will try to do my best and fix the mistakes I can find.
We're happy you enjoyed it so far.