Ren'Py Rediscovering Maria [Day 1 Final] [Panamsimp]

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ForeverLosing

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First of all, I love your game. Maria is the perfect thiccness physically and has an adorably playful personality. I can feel the love between the two main characters, and I like what you're doing with the regaining her confidence angle in terms of her getting on board with netorase.

My little suggestions to do with what you will:
- Give the characters different colored names in the text window. I think it would help with readability if Vince/Maria/Darius/etc all had their own unique colors.
- Break these longer sentences up into two or more sentences. It flows better with the engine imo. There aren't many, just a couple.
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Love the different routes you're setting up btw. I'll be trying every one of them out on Day 2, that's for sure.
 
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ForeverLosing said:
First of all, I love your game. Maria is the perfect thiccness physically and has an adorably playful personality. I can feel the love between the two main characters, and I like what you're doing with the regaining her confidence angle in terms of her getting on board with netorase.

My little suggestions to do with what you will:
- Give the characters different colored names in the text window. I think it would help with readability if Vince/Maria/Darius/etc all had their own unique colors.
- Break these longer sentences up into two or more sentences. It flows better with the engine imo. There aren't many, just a couple.
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Love the different routes you're setting up btw. I'll be trying every one of them out on Day 2, that's for sure.
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Aw, thanks for your kind words and helpful suggestions. I have tried to keep the sentences thing in mind for Day 2 after I noticed them in Day 1. Also, yeah, the color scheme is a good idea. It also gives me the chance to subtly tell you a bit about the personality of the characters by the color they are represented by. I've already implemented the changes for Day 2 Beta.
 
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Panamsimp said:
Aw, thanks for your kind words and helpful suggestions. I have tried to keep the sentences thing in mind for Day 2 after I noticed them in Day 1. Also, yeah, the color scheme is a good idea. It also gives me the chance to subtly tell you a bit about the personality of the characters by the color they are represented by. I've already implemented the changes for Day 2 Beta.
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When public release?
 
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Monty10 said:
and when Day 2 will be out?
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Alpha is already out for two of the subscriber tiers, the Beta should be out for the highest tier patrons at most in a couple of weeks, the final version should be out a week after that. So I wanna say the public release should be in 5-6 weeks from now.
 
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4.30 star(s) 6 Votes