Ren'Py Abandoned Rehabilitation [v0.02 Alpha Demo] [DrSweets]

[Drsweets]

Overview:
You take the role of a trainer that helps mold women into whatever you may desire
Inspired by the old Slavetrainer games
Currently just a demo to playtest and sample​

Thread Updated: 2022-02-09
Release Date: 2022-01-27
Developer: DrSweets F95zone -

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Version: 0.02 Alpha Demo
OS: Windows, Linux
Language: English
Other games: Ketchems
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[Weimanno]

Looks promising bro keep it coming

 

[telotelo]

HTML myass tag them properly
talking at evening will reset the time of the day (not advancing them)
and i'm the one cleaning the house, who tf need rehabilitation here again?

Spoiler: hmm

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[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[<NoRmal>]

Pls tag as ren'py. Looks good for a demo. Go on.

 

[Justaregularcat]

Thanks

 

[Drsweets]

HTML myass tag them properly
talking at evening will reset the time of the day (not advancing them)
and i'm the one cleaning the house, who tf need rehabilitation here again?

Spoiler: hmm

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I didn't tag html and I'm not sure where it came from.
But thanks for letting me know, I will try to fix the talking bug.

 

[LJRibbons]

From what I played, not bad but will try it again after updates etc but one suggestion I have is maybe put names of places of the icons to make it easier to know what place is what

 

[rKnight]

EXPECTATION:
You take the role of a trainer that helps mold women into whatever you may desire.

REALITY:

 

[Donald_Punch]

thanks for share

 

[Dalbert33]

I think it has potential....keep it up and develop it to a full game

 

[Jonah Arkon]

Really nothing really here and homestily not with the time at this point. And the actresses are not that great either. Nothing but rip offs from other sites thrown in and called a game very sad. But To each there own this is just my view point alone. Best of luck but its not for me.

 

[Dalbert33]

Really nothing really here and homestily not with the time at this point. And the actresses are not that great either. Nothing but rip offs from other sites thrown in and called a game very sad. But To each there own this is just my view point alone. Best of luck but its not for me.

To be fair.....all real porn in game is just porn you can find anywhere....but if story is good...I can ignore that

 

[Drsweets]

EXPECTATION:
You take the role of a trainer that helps mold women into whatever you may desire.

REALITY:
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I will try to clear things up so players have a better idea how to get to sex scenes (Defiance too high)

Really nothing really here and homestily not with the time at this point. And the actresses are not that great either. Nothing but rip offs from other sites thrown in and called a game very sad. But To each there own this is just my view point alone. Best of luck but its not for me.

I address the lack of content in both the OP and in-game as well as noting that this alpha demo is mostly for bug fixes and such.
But I thank you for trying out the game and hopefully in the future when it has more content you can come back to try again.

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[docclox]

OK, feedback.

Good stuff: I love slave trainer games, so I'm always glad to see a new one. The game is visually appealing, well laid out and clear buttons. And I like the modular girls which hints at the potential to take user mods adding new girls. So far, so good.

Not so good: The big problem, for me, is that the player POV is all over the place. I got the initial impression that the player character would be a guy training these girls, but the next thing it says is "choose your character" and it gives me a list of girls to choose from, which makes me wonder if I'm playing the trainee. That's not helped by activities such as cleaning, which looked like the guy was doing the cleaning. It's all a bit confusing, and the "Talk" option that might clear things up is just a placeholder.

That's made worse by the ambiguity of some of the stats. Is Defiance the girl's ability to resist the trainer, or the trainer's skill at dominating the girls, or is it both? It's not clear at all. It also means that when you choose housecleaning, it's not clear who is affected by the stat changes.

Nice idea, and I'll watch the game's progress with interest, but it needs to clear up who is doing what at any given time, and who is affected by the results. Otherwise it's going to be very hard to play.

 

[Drsweets]

OK, feedback.

Good stuff: I love slave trainer games, so I'm always glad to see a new one. The game is visually appealing, well laid out and clear buttons. And I like the modular girls which hints at the potential to take user mods adding new girls. So far, so good.

Not so good: The big problem, for me, is that the player POV is all over the place. I got the initial impression that the player character would be a guy training these girls, but the next thing it says is "choose your character" and it gives me a list of girls to choose from, which makes me wonder if I'm playing the trainee. That's not helped by activities such as cleaning, which looked like the guy was doing the cleaning. It's all a bit confusing, and the "Talk" option that might clear things up is just a placeholder.

That's made worse by the ambiguity of some of the stats. Is Defiance the girl's ability to resist the trainer, or the trainer's skill at dominating the girls, or is it both? It's not clear at all. It also means that when you choose housecleaning, it's not clear who is affected by the stat changes.

Nice idea, and I'll watch the game's progress with interest, but it needs to clear up who is doing what at any given time, and who is affected by the results. Otherwise it's going to be very hard to play.

Thanks for the feedback.

In the game you should be playing as the trainer, so I will try to look over some of the phrases in the game and clear them up.
all the stats in the game refer to the girls stats, because player stats are hidden... I will also try to clear this up in game.
A large reason I made the modular girls was so players (like yourself) could easily create new characters with very little impact on the game as a whole, then import them into the game for a new experience each time.
Also, in the tutorial it explains how the stats work (like defiance).

Thanks again for taking the time to reply and letting me know what you think.

ps. the cleaning photo is a woman.

 

[docclox]

In the game you should be playing as the trainer, so I will try to look over some of the phrases in the game and clear them up.

That would help. I chose clean and it says "You clean the house", which in combination with a fairly gender-ambiguous photo makes it sound like I'm doing it.

all the stats in the game refer to the girls stats, because player stats are hidden... I will also try to clear this up in game.

Again, as an example: if I go to the therapist and choose "Defiance", I'm told that I become more dominant. Nothing wrong with the mechanism, but the phrasing needs some work.

A large reason I made the modular girls was so players (like yourself) could easily create new characters with very little impact on the game as a whole, then import them into the game for a new experience each time.

Good stuff. Nice to see someone designing in modability from the get go

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

This my personal opinion,
I'm not liking this type of VN, to me, it's taking the easy way.
Using real people is ok, they should actually be acting the dialogue and not just place cards taken for porn sites.
There is one here on F95, I can't remember the name, the guy is a person with agoraphobia and doesn't leave his apartment.
it's done very well I think.

 

[Drsweets]

This my personal opinion,
I'm not liking this type of VN, to me, it's taking the easy way.
Using real people is ok, they should actually be acting the dialogue and not just place cards taken for porn sites.
There is one here on F95, I can't remember the name, the guy is a person with agoraphobia and doesn't leave his apartment.
it's done very well I think.

Thanks for trying out the game.
I'm not quite certain what you are referring to in your post, since this doesn't count as a 'VN' (or any type of novel because I excluded the story from this demo), but also what you mean by acting the dialog.
Could you please explain what you mean more clearly?
Thanks for your time.