VN Ren'Py Restore Her Career [v0.30] [Kalyha]

[Avaron1974]

Never said MC was going to be an angel.
Now you know the story is not about love ;]

Already gathered that with the tags and lack of romance tag and the fact he's a creepy bastard.

I think what DA was getting at is why he's such a creepy bastard when they hadn't done anything to warrant him doing that to them.

 

[DA22]

Never said MC was going to be an angel.
Now you know the story is not about love ;]

True, that was clear enough. Still he is very far gone on the psychopath scale with only having two emotions working, lust and jealousy. Yeah part what Avaron said, but that could be in his backstory in his time with his father that we know nothing off. It is more that most people are rounded out a bit more emotionally, even most psychopaths, he is extremely focused on only one thing

 

[BlakeDarko]

I get it, everyone hast their own opinion and that is absolutly fine. But i dont get the talk about the MC being a dick. This is a corruption game. Its Fantasy, fetish. I dont want the mc to be like "how are you feelings today? How did you sleep?" i came to fap. Maybe its not for everyone but i dont think it shouled me my place to tell the creator, who somehow, has a vision for his game, how the main character should or shouldt behave.

Just my two cents

 

[Avaron1974]

I get it, everyone hast their own opinion and that is absolutly fine. But i dont get the talk about the MC being a dick. This is a corruption game. Its Fantasy, fetish. I dont want the mc to be like "how are you feelings today? How did you sleep?" i came to fap. Maybe its not for everyone but i dont think it shouled me my place to tell the creator, who somehow, has a vision for his game, how the main character should or shouldt behave.

Just my two cents

Nobody was complaining, it was just an observation.

Nobody at all told the dev how anyone should act. Where the fuck you pulled that from I have no idea.

 

[haha mm]

I get it, everyone hast their own opinion and that is absolutly fine. But i dont get the talk about the MC being a dick. This is a corruption game. Its Fantasy, fetish. I dont want the mc to be like "how are you feelings today? How did you sleep?" i came to fap. Maybe its not for everyone but i dont think it shouled me my place to tell the creator, who somehow, has a vision for his game, how the main character should or shouldt behave.

Just my two cents

Even if the developer has a vision for the game, players can help them hammer out the details and point out inconsistencies or deficiencies without changing the overall vision. Critique is definitely healthy.

Anyway, the (anti)-protagonist is for sure one(two?)-dimensional. But it works in similar games in Corruption and I think it will work here too. I guess it's a matter of taste. I can suspend my disbelief; I don't need a backstory or motivation for why the MC acts the way like he does. But more complex personality isn't bad either as it makes it possible to write more intriguing scenarios. I think The Tyrant did that well, for example (not talking about the NTR shit), while still maintaining a "psycho" MC.

I'm lenient towards the developer because it's his first game, and trying to do too much too early may result in failure.

 

[gomesa]

Restore Her Career BY TURNING HER INTO A PORN STAR WOULD BE NICE

 

[Sheppard3rd]

So every day that passes he is getting more ready for a chamber with 4 wals, the start was good and the choices where disturbing sometimes.
Its getting wilder and wilder i dont know i like the way its going. I like some slave or coruption game but this is gonna be suicide central at this rate.

 

[Johntheloner]

Already gathered that with the tags and lack of romance tag and the fact he's a creepy bastard.

I think what DA was getting at is why he's such a creepy bastard when they hadn't done anything to warrant him doing that to them.

I dunno, why did any given serial criminal psychopath do what they did? Because they felt like it. That's generally the answer. They had the impulse, so they did it. Or they thought it would get them something, so since they don't have any real level of empathy or remorse, they did things to others for their own advancement.
I've been told by a psychiatrist that I have strong sociopathic tendencies, and can say with some certainty that my brain functions on pretty alien logic to 'normal' people sometimes.

It's entirely possible the MC is straight up a psychopath who has just reached that point of 'I want, so I will do what I can to have, no one else matters'.

 

[ElPiti]

Dev dude, just want to recognize you are doing a great job and working incredibly fast.

I really like your VN, MC reminds me of the protagonist of Death Note.

Keep up the good work and wish you a lot of success with your game.

 

[Kalyha]

Restore Her Career BY TURNING HER INTO A PORN STAR WOULD BE NICE

Relax ;P

Dev dude, just want to recognize you are doing a great job and working incredibly fast.

I really like your VN, MC reminds me of the protagonist of Death Note.

Keep up the good work and wish you a lot of success with your game.

Thanks a lot

 

[Frank Rosario]

Update 22/02/2021

Here is the Italian translation of "Restore her career" version "0.14".
This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan".

The translation is provided in two formats: .exe (self-extracting) and .zip. It is not necessary to use both.

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Ecco la traduzione italiana di "Restore her career" versione "0.14".
Questa traduzione "non e' ufficiale" e "fatta da un fan".

La traduzione viene fornita in due formati: .exe (autoestraente) e .zip. Non e' necessario utilizzarle entrambe.


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Update 08/02/2021

Here is the Italian translation of "Restore her career" version "0.13".
This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan".

The translation is provided in two formats: .exe (self-extracting) and .zip. It is not necessary to use both.

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Ecco la traduzione italiana di "Restore her career" versione "0.13".
Questa traduzione "non e' ufficiale" e "fatta da un fan".

La traduzione viene fornita in due formati: .exe (autoestraente) e .zip. Non e' necessario utilizzarle entrambe.


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Update 02/1/2021

Here is the Italian translation of "Restore her career" version "0.12".
This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan".

The translation is provided in two formats: .exe (self-extracting) and .zip. It is not necessary to use both.

The link is:

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Ecco la traduzione italiana di "Restore her career" versione "0.12".
Questa traduzione "non e' ufficiale" e "fatta da un fan".

La traduzione viene fornita in due formati: .exe (autoestraente) e .zip. Non e' necessario utilizzarle entrambe.


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Update 21/12/2020

Here is the Italian translation of "Restore her career" version "0.11 DickuraCut Mod".

Note: It also contains the translation of the DickuraCut Mod. IT DOES NOT CONTAIN THE MOD but only its translation.

This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan".
The translation is provided in two formats: .exe (self-extracting) and .zip. It is not necessary to use both.

The link is:

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Ecco la traduzione italiana di "Restore her career" versione "0.11 DickuraCut Mod".

Nota: Contiene anche la traduzione della DickuraCut Mod. NON CONTIENE LA MOD ma solo la sua traduzione.

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" e "fatta da un fan".
La traduzione viene fornita in due formati: .exe (autoestraente) e .zip. Non e' necessario utilizzarle entrambe.


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Update 02/12/2020

Here is the Italian translation of "Restore her career" version "0.11".
This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan".
The translation is provided in two formats: .exe (self-extracting) and .zip. It is not necessary to use both.

The link is:

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Ecco la traduzione italiana di "Restore her career" versione "0.11".
Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" e "fatta da un fan".
La traduzione viene fornita in due formati: .exe (autoestraente) e .zip. Non e' necessario utilizzarle entrambe.


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Update 29/10/2020

Here is the Italian translation of "Restore her career" version "0.10".
This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan".

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Ecco la traduzione italiana di "Restore her career" versione "0.10".
Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" e "fatta da un fan".


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Update 06/10/2020

Here is the Italian translation of "Restore her career" version "0.9".
This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan".

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Ecco la traduzione italiana di "Restore her career" versione "0.9".
Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" e "fatta da un fan".


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Here is the Italian translation of "Restore her career" version "0.4".
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Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" e "fatta da un fan".

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E se questa traduzione vi piace, non dimenticate di mettere un Like, sempre ben accetto!

 

[Kalyha]

Damn I even have a fan made italian translation. What a day to be alive!

 

[steelsmiter]

All I'm sayin' is I like that the creepy bastard will end up fuckin' the mom and aunt, even if it's not really anything "new" or "imaginative". P.S. am totally on board with "by turning her into a porn star" as a subtitle.

 

[thessaya]

For some reason I'm liking this way better than I thought I would. The Mom just needs a bush though.

 

[EdgeOfShadow]

Kalyha I just started the game and I must say that you should ask someone to proofread the text, i'm not a native english speaker but i noticed 3 errors in just the first 6 screens i saw

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I don't want to be nitpicky but it gets pretty annoying when errors happen so often.

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Overall it was still pretty good and i enjoyed this game.
I think there should be a rape tag.

 

[gregers]

Spoiler: Hyperhydrosis is a serious issue

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Spoiler: Sweaty or not, the MC seems to have deloped a nasty rash

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[Kalyha]

Kalyha I just started the game and I must say that you should ask someone to proofread the text, i'm not a native english speaker but i noticed 3 errors in just the first 6 screens i saw

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I don't want to be nitpicky but it gets pretty annoying when errors happen so often.

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Overall it was still pretty good and i enjoyed this game.
I think there should be a rape tag.

Hello,
Thanks for the info, I've modified it. Problem with proofreading is that it takes a lot of time for the person who wanna do it haha.
Now if anyone wanna report me some text errors, feel free to let me know so I can change them.

 

[taru]

this needs animation stat!! lol

 

[steelsmiter]

Problem with proofreading is that it takes a lot of time for the person who wanna do it haha.

That's only true within certain contexts. If they're just given the plain text of the script, it's a matter of loading up MS Word or a processor that has a similarly robust dictionary, turning on spelling, grammar, and style, running spellcheck a few times... and of course either motivation, or private conversation with dev.

If you give them a file that won't go into a word processor, sure, it'll take a lot of time.

 

[bigguy_foryou]

That only solves simple syntax problems and doesn't make writing sound native.