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Conviction07

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But hey the game Writer confirmed that the game will not have NTR. So I guess we can calm down now
Wouldn't that be nice...
I read literally every comment on this thread looking for legitimate feedback because I find it invaluable when it comes to writing future stuff, but the incessant, all-encompassing NTR talk really does get tiring.
 

shadowr19

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Wouldn't that be nice...
I read literally every comment on this thread looking for legitimate feedback because I find it invaluable when it comes to writing future stuff, but the incessant, all-encompassing NTR talk really does get tiring.
Even I'm starting to get tired of talking to about the subject. So Let's change the subject, I love how the story is going so far (there's some spelling errors here and there but not too much) So far I like how it's going keep up the good work and I wish you the best of luck
 

Hellster

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Does your game launch with "Bonus Content is ON" and no way to switch it off or to enter a new code? I'm guessing this bug might be related to that.
Could be, the 'show girl unclothed' button in the top right of the screen doesn't work either
 

Ranting Old Man

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Wouldn't that be nice...
I read literally every comment on this thread looking for legitimate feedback because I find it invaluable when it comes to writing future stuff, but the incessant, all-encompassing NTR talk really does get tiring.
The only legitimate feedback I can give, i already kind of gave, which is don't make me wait another whole season for MC and Mia to get together. Given the fact that SWM1 pulled this, as well as EoL1 a pattern has emerged that's concerning. Yeah people aren't being "blueballed" so to speak but it's still frustrating that 2 titles from Inceton games is currently using that same model, although both tell a unquie and interesting story. I myself can't handle waiting for a 3rd act in either game to get to the desired content. I'm grateful that you as a writer are willing to understand this frustration and recognize that even though it works as a good plot device over exposure can be inherently bad. Once the desired outcomes are achieved there are still plenty of ways to tell a interesting believable story with alot of drama and anticipation. I wish you luck and ping me if you ever want ideas, sometimes it doesn't hurt to have a fresh pair of eyes.
 

The ArcKnight

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Wouldn't that be nice...
I read literally every comment on this thread looking for legitimate feedback because I find it invaluable when it comes to writing future stuff, but the incessant, all-encompassing NTR talk really does get tiring.
Sorry for perpetuating things.
I just got a crap ton of conflicting comments when I asked the forced sharing question and I hard avoid certain tags like that but I enjoyed the crap out of Echoes of Lust so figured I'd ask for clarification and replies kinda snowballed from there man. lol.

I'll be back once I get a chance to play both games, so long as that craps avoidable I anticipate i'll like this one as much as EoL.
 
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Malicre

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New person here, quick question, do you have to romance mia and is she the end girl? I only ask because most games that have a girls name in the title usually force you down that girls route while offering no real other endings. I instantly dropped Halfway House when i found out bland Emily was the only girl getting an ending so i just wanted to make sure i wasn't wasting my time with the same situation here before i started playing episode 1.
 

Ursus4321

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I'm glad you mostly enjoy it. I understand it's not everyone's cup of tea, but I definitely know there are people who enjoy some dirtier content like this that doesn't fit into the main storyline. And on top of it being optional, Grace also mentions embellishing some aspects, so it's open to interpretation for the player to decide just how much of it actually happened. But these kind of scenes won't be in every episode, either. The next episode for instance, won't have it.
You say "the next episode won't have it." This means that there are many possibilities of having it in future episodes then? And I do not mean the immediate next but the following
It would be good if this is clear now to know
 

linkinn

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You say "the next episode won't have it." This means that there are many possibilities of having it in future episodes then? And I do not mean the immediate next but the following
It would be good if this is clear now to know
Hes talking about Optional scenes where the Aunt tells her sexual adventures in the past.
 

Hellster

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Anybody know what this jammy is? I can get it to light up, but that's all.
I'm using ShaddyModda's walkthrough mod but don't think it applies here.

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It's supposed to give you a swing around view of the girl IIRC, but it's not working, and neither is the red button (top right of screen in some scenes), which is supposed to show the girl on the screen unclothed
 
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Conviction07

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New person here, quick question, do you have to romance mia and is she the end girl? I only ask because most games that have a girls name in the title usually force you down that girls route while offering no real other endings. I instantly dropped Halfway House when i found out bland Emily was the only girl getting an ending so i just wanted to make sure i wasn't wasting my time with the same situation here before i started playing episode 1.
There will be various endings, but Mia is a big part of the game, so if you don't like her, then it might not be for you. Having said that, she definitely won't be a boring character.
You say "the next episode won't have it." This means that there are many possibilities of having it in future episodes then? And I do not mean the immediate next but the following
It would be good if this is clear now to know
Can't answer that for sure, but I don't really understand how it would be a deal breaker either way.
 
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Malicre

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There will be various endings, but Mia is a big part of the game, so if you don't like her, then it might not be for you. Having said that, she definitely won't be a boring character.

Can't answer that for sure, but I don't really understand how it would be a deal breaker either way.
Who's this hot milf, if you tell me i can get an ending with her you will have a loyal fan for life. :ROFLMAO:

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criestoomuch

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Try not to judge her too soon. I have a feeling you're eventually going to change your mind about her.
I'm sorry but, there's no fucking way. I don't give a shit what happened in her past. She doesn't have any reason to treat MC the way she does. I mean it's cool that your fleshing out her character. So, I have to give you respect for that. But, I can't begin to tell you how infuriating it is to watch that childish bitch steal the phone, hang up and have him do her a favor immediately after. It doesn't make any fucking sense and it makes MC look like a fucking idiot. I'm so fucking happy she approves of Sadie by the way. Yeah, right. As if I give a shit about her opinion. I don't care what that interaction sets up later. I don't care for that girl either. I fucking hate Vivian more and more with each interaction.

Great job writing the story otherwise. I really like the pacing and tone of the overall story so far. The dialogue is consistently good even when it's driving me up the walls. I'm very curious to see the different ways the story will unfold on the different paths. Even if I think every ending is going to suck to some degree.
 

albul

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I gave this a try, and I have to say I like the setup. The writing is good enough that the characters feel "real" and felt the need to keep a save where the MC doesn't fool around with Cindy & Vivianne (also my main save). Making Sadie a lovable girlfriend complicates things a lot with Mia, which is obviously the heroine of the story, so I am curious how that will unfold. Vivianne is annoying for now, but we got a glimpse on why she is the way she is, so she might get more likable in the future. Didn't check Grace's stories, so can't offer an opinion on that.

All in all, a good start and I am looking forward to where this is going.
 
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