After seeing some of the art other folks cooked up I'm stating to think interesting thing might down the road. Cause inspiration can strike anywhere.
Don't tell me I gotta wait 2 months for the conclusion! AHH can you even imagine waiting so long for an update!... wait...I didn't finish writing it, but in my head, it's a wild scene, which ends up with Morticia in the middle of the bed, cuddling the two sleeping, and shagged out Summers, as they nuzzle on her breasts.![]()
Dammit Janet! I half thought you were joking, when you talked about wanting to go ahead with this scene, but I've been thinking about it the last day or so, and I was thinking of doing just this (and surprising you with it), i.e. writing the script, and doing a story board, and it looks like you kinda read my mind, as I was going to add a bit about wild Summer's new night wear. 300 lines is a lot. I'm not sure if my version would have gone that far, but perhaps it would. Right ya bugger, you're forcing my hand then. I will spend a couple of hours today, doing my version. I have it all in my head, and it won't take that long to put it to paper. What I'll do is write the script that's in my head and also do a quick pen on paper thumbnail story board. We can then compare notes, and see which version you prefer, or do a combined version, etc. I'm not sure if I'll be able to do all the art work, but I was thinking of trying to keep the story board as simple as possible, so not too many images are needed and also maybe hoping if I thumbnail the story board then others that are quicker and better at it than I am could maybe help do the final images. I have a couple of things to do first today, but as soon as I get home, I'll start on it. So check back in maybe 6-8 hrs from now, and I'll hopefully be able to show you what I have.wibbled
Alright, well, I couldn't wait and I finished writing the rest of the scene today.
Here is a very tiny peek at the intro bumper. (as I literally have no other artwork for it, just text)
Next step is to do the storyboard and figure out if I actually have the art to support the scene. First draft is about 300ish lines and would need a fair number of images if I did go forward with it. Not sure if I will/can make it happen (creating art is always worrying for me).You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Additionally, it is stumbling into the dangerous "future" scene territory. Although I doubt Ferdafs ever planned to do anything with Morticia heading to The Summers room, as I mostly punched up her excitement for it.
Anyhow, all of that is a problem for future me to figure out, and seriously, fuck future me! That person is the worst! Also, past me, they are the cause of all my problems!
I think the game layout actually does match with the show. Which... is problematic for a lot of reasons.Started working on it. Doing some preliminary drawings, and trying to figure out the layout of Summer and Morty's rooms and the adjoining wall. I think this floor plan below is the most accurate I can find.
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There is this image below, but I think the door is wrong. From the floor plan, this looks more like a closet or small balcony. Plus, this is an image from a false memory, so maybe it's deliberately wrong. I think the entrance door is really to the left side of this image, as shown in the floor plan.
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As far as I can tell, the wall behind Snuffles, erm I mean Snowball, is the adjoining wall to Morty's room, and this is what I'm going to use as my reference for the pic of Morticia eavesdropping. I have three rough draft images so far. It's going to take me a bit longer than I expected, as usual, but I'll keep working on it tonight until I have a full script and drafts of all the images I think that will be needed for my version of it. So, give me a few hours, and I'll come back and show you what I've done.
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Yea, they are hidden. Turns out the whole family are shy poopers.... they have no bathroom(s)!)).
Sounds good, I've got another scene to finish up anyhow. Just let me know when you're ready.I've been working on this on and off of this most of the night so far. Rather stupidly, I started working on the sketches of the images I think that will be needed, which was taking quite a lot of time. Then I went and had a nice long hot shower, and cogitated. It came to me, that I am approaching it wrong. Instead of waste time on images, I think the first and most important thing for me to do is write out the full script and scene description, as I see it. That way, you can have a read and get an over all feel, with images descriptions, and see if you like it ... before I go ahead and do the images.
It also occurred to me that I can make my job of producing the images a lot simpler if I do some prep first. What I'll do is go through the game and grab tons of screen caps of a large variety of poses, and facial expressions, that way I can catalogue and easily access them to use as references and possibly re-edit. It will make the job so much easier and quicker.
I'm kinda tired now and could do with a kip, but I don't have anything on tomorrow, so when I wake I can finish the script. I want to go over it a couple of times before I submit it, as I always like to self edit a bit first. I might even wake up during the night and work on it. So, if you don't mind waiting a few more hours, I'll post my finished script as soon as I'm done. You can tell me if you like it, and if you have any suggestions or changes. Once we agree, I can start work on the images. I think if I approach it the way I described above, I should hopefully be able to produce the final images required.
I get the references, but not sure why in this context, which is fine. I'm more curious about who is who though. I think I'd rather be Rick than Stan.Not going to lie, after reading all this I swear it sounded more like Stan Pines and Rick we're having a debate on something.
We tried the aux input, but it has two colors.I get the references, but not sure why in this context, which is fine. I'm more curious about who is who though. I think I'd rather be Rick than Stan.
I think we are probably more like a pair of Jerrys trying to get the sound coming through the stereo instead of the TV.
You went a slightly less subtle route than I did with it, although an overall similar theme. Here is my script for it, keep in mind it's already formatted for renpy.I'm still not finished, but I'm kinda getting close. I should have finished by now, but I had some distractions, including a couple of long phone calls. Below is where I have got to so far. I still have a bit more I want to add, and I'll include scene image descriptors in/with the final version. You can give me feedback on what I have so far, if you like. I'm also curious as to how much mine varies from what you had imagined. So far it's about 100 lines, and might include up to 50 more, so not as long as what you said you had done. If you don't like it and prefer your own, be honest, I'm happy to finish mine, or let you go ahead and do your own version. I want to go crash out for a bit. I'll finish it when I awake.
[cut to the Beth Scene, where she is comforting Morty, at the end of the Planetina story]
Beth: Would it help if Mommy made it feel better here?
Morty: Really? W-what about Morticia?
Beth: It's okay, she's sleeping in the Summers' room tonight. Actually, she was oddly excited about it.
[cut to the Summers' room]
The two Summers are in bed together, chatting, laughing, and being a bit flirtatious with each other
Summer: Your new nightwear looks hot sis!
Summer gives Wild summer a wink. Wild Summer looks slightly embarrassed, but smiles.
On the other side of the room, Morticia is sitting against the wall, that separates that room from Morty's.
She is gently pressing her ear against the wall, trying to listen to what's going on in Morty's room.
Summer: Hey Morticia, I told you, you don't need to sleep on the floor, you can sleep in the bed with us.
As she is saying it, Summer suddenly realises that Morticia is eavesdropping.
Summer: Hey you little perv, are you listening to our brother masturbating, again?
Morticia: E-erm (Moticia blushes)
Wild Summer: God, she really is a little perv.
Morticia: I'm not listening to him masturbating. Beth is in there with him.
Both Summers stop grinning and look shocked.
Summer: Oh my god, is he fucking her again?
Morticia: Not yet, but it sounds like he might be just about to. Do you wanna watch?
Summer: No way, I'm not getting caught, peeping through the door on my Mom and brother having sex.
Wild Summer bites her lip, as she thinks about it.
Morticia: we don't have to peep through the door, Rick invented a one way viewing portal, that allows him to see into other dimensions, but it doesn't show up on the other side, and it works on walls too.
Summer looks stunned and doesn't reply.
Wild Summer bites her lip and softly says
Wild Summer: Fuck yea ... erm, I mean, Dr Wong said it would be good for me to watch someone else have sex.
Morticia sits back against the bottom of Summer's bed, pulls out an odd-looking portal gun from her night bag and points it at the wall. The wall suddenly becomes see through. They can see Beth and Morty sitting on the bed, with his head deep between Beth's exposed breasts, while Beth starts stroking his cock.
Morticia bites her bottom lip as her hand instinctively reaches between her legs. On the bed, the two Summers look on in stunned amazement at the scene in front of them.
Both The Summers lean forwards to get a closer look at the scene unfolding through the portal.
Wild Summer looks at Morticia and realises she is already masturbating.
Wild Summer: [thinks] Fuck, I can't resist. I need to rub my pussy too.
Summer looks at Morticia, and also notices her masturbating.
Summer: Damn Morticia, you have no shame! You're openly masturbating in front of your older sisters?
Summer looks to Wild Summer, expecting her to join in teasing Morticia, but sees that she is also touching herself.
Summer: Fuck! ... You too?
Summer can't resist any longer, she joins in and starts playing with herself.
Morticia: Oh my god! Mom just told Morty she wants his dick inside her, and that he can fuck her raw!
Morticia starts shuddering as she has an uncontrollable orgasm.
Both Summers now have their hands inside their pants, and are fingering their pussies feverishly.
Morticia looks behind her, with extreme lust on her face, and says ...
Morticia: Would you two like some help?
Summer: Help?!
Wild Summer looks a bit confused.
Morticia: [blushing] Well, you seemed to enjoy it the last time I fingered you.
Wild Summer looks a bit shocked
Wild Summer: [thinks] Oh my god! What is it with this family?
Summer blushes
Morticia: Well?
Summer: Yes please ... little sis.
Morticia climbs on the bed and pulls Summer's pants off, and starts to finger her big sister's dripping pussy. As she does it, she gives Wild summer a lustful look.
Wild Summer blushes too, but doesn't hesitate to slide off her pants.
Morticia starts fingering both her horny older sister's tight, wet pussies.
Summer: Oh gawd ... I'm getting close. Don't stop fingering me little sis, make me cum!
Morticia: How about I finish you off with the dildo that Morty bought you, you can pretend your little bro's cock is fucking you to climax.
Summer blushes heavily. Unable to speak, she nods her head.
Morticia reaches under Summer's pillow and grabs the dildo. It slides easily into Summer's soaking pussy.
You went way deeper into it than I did, pardon the pun. I just glanced over it. I'll read it properly later. I guess you don't need any more input from me?You went a slightly less subtle route than I did with it, although an overall similar theme. Here is my script for it, keep in mind it's already formatted for renpy.
WARNING the following contains spoilers for a possible future scene, read on at your own risk. The scene is in early production (this is the first draft) and contains both typos and things that might change when/if I actually do images for it. Additionally, this is not set in stone and may not be added to the game at all.
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Let me know if you enjoyed it!
Not necessarily, it's not a done deal as my focus is a bit elsewhere at the moment I haven't definitively settled on anything. Still not even sure if the scene will go in the game as with either version there is a bunch of artwork to be made and don't know if it will get done by either of us, so...You went way deeper into it than I did, pardon the pun. I just glanced over it. I'll read it properly later. I guess you don't need any more input from me?
That's what she said? Or the title of your sex tape?Besides, I'm always open to input!
Yeah, no special annotation for Wild Summer does make things WAY more confusing, hopefully less so in context. I'm not sure how many images are gonna actually be needed (that's the next step of story boarding to find poses that match), but below is a rough~ish guess of how I saw the scene while writing it.... I was trying to keep it relatively simple, so it would require not too many new images. I am a little confused with your version, as to where all the characters are positioned in the room and all the images required.
I'll certainly take help with any of the images if you (or anyone else) want(s) to give it a shot. If the above is enough to get you started (i.e. I was clear enough in my ramblings), then pick one you want to start with and let me know. I'll also start working through the images no one claims as well. If it's not clear, I'll most likely have a basic storyboard done in a few days.Conclusion, I like it, but if I'm to do the images, I need to be able to picture it better in my head, and know how you envision it.
Both.That's what she said? Or the title of your sex tape?
To Answer who is who on who Stan or Rick. Mirrors sadly gets Rick Rolled on this one. Also have you thought of a scene or concept where Morticia goes wing woman for Morty after she learns of the whole Vegas trip and temps Tricia into becoming a part of Morty's little so called harem. Where they will fulfill every depraved fantasy Tricia has every had.I get the references, but not sure why in this context, which is fine. I'm more curious about who is who though. I think I'd rather be Rick than Stan.
I think we are probably more like a pair of Jerrys trying to get the sound coming through the stereo instead of the TV.