I really need feedback on this because although (I think) it is on style
I think it looks damn good! (see notes below)
Chiseled amazon tummy or tone it down?
I agree with
aaronminus about the abs and I think the Korra image is a perfect example. Summer's abs should be toned way back. She is lean, and muscular, but not a body builder. And doesn't need cum gutter (Morty is going to finish inside anyhow! (or pull out, whatever the player chooses)).
Wild Summer scene it is! It's the most sensible scene to have on the pool day and the one that the game would benefit the most.
I won't tell you how you write the scene (because I have no idea) but as I said before, I don't think only a cunnilingus scene for Wild Summer would cut it and I'm open to any ideas for a hardcore sex scene follow-up. So If you are ok with how things are going, please tell me how would you like me to draw the scene.
Usually my biggest limiter for what I can do in a scene is the existing poses I can adapt/reuse (and future story concerns, but Wild Summer didn't even come to the water park (pool) in the Unity version, so I think this one isn't a big worry).
If you're up for doing more art/poses that does open things up, but I also don't want to overload you with dozens of image requests. I'll start work on a draft of the scene and work with my editors on it, so it will take a few days.
I did not include the pubes because I really disliked how it was going and I will try something new tomorrow. Looking at the game files it seems that I'm not the only one having problems with Wild Summer pubes, the art is all over the place, sometimes her bush is a solid color, sometimes has multi-colored details, and other times it has an outline.
Woah, woah, woah, are you saying the art is inconsistent in this game?! Because you would be absolutely right. Usually it is small details (and some times I try to fix it (when it's a big thing (that's what she said))), but yes, details do seem to be very inconsistent (especially when I fuck with the art).
I'm doing blinks right now (holy shit, so many eyelids to draw), and sometimes eyelids have shadows, sometimes not, sometime eyelashes move, sometimes not. And I keep finding other minor issues (some I'm fixing, some I'm not).
So, my point is, don't fret this detail too much, most people won't notice. I think the style you picked for her main bush is fine, but I would like to remove the stubble in the first image (doesn't fit style wise). The second image, because of the angel, I feel can omit her pubes if you want, but I'm also fine if you want to add them, no stubble though.
Also, the realistic vagina spirit lives in me and I can't distinguish between reality anymore. Did I overdo it?
The scene is supposed to have a high focus on her genitals...
For Image #2, I agree that because the main focus is on her vagina (specifically inside), that more detail in this image works perfectly fine. And I have no notes or changes for image #2. I think it is dead on style wise.
I think it's on style but like the abs, this gape feels overkill.
Abs dialed back for sure, but I think the gape is fine, especially if you add fingers for Morty to be spreading her open.
A suggestion is to have a closed vagina as well (on it's own layer), so that I can transition from closed to open (i.e. Morty spreading her open).
Also a tongue in several licking (penetrating?) positions would be very nice too. I tend to make simple animations (3 frames, up, middle, down (because I suck at art)), but Ren'py can handle more complex animations if you want to give additional tongue poses a try. 100% up to you and what you want to make here.
...and I plan to finish the scene with a squirt (I skimmed over the game and I don't think there is any squirt scene, there is one urination scene though), I think given the "detail" and focus of this cunnilingus scene, a squirt is an appropriate climax.
There are two squirting scenes I can think of off the top of my head, both with Jessica but with minimal imagery. The first is in the locker under the original non-molest path. The second is at the end of the Valentines day date. I'm fine with having her squirt Morty (although it may be an optional moment for players (i.e. "Make her Squirt" "Make her Cum" choices, will have to write it and see the art before I know)).
I can export to a .psd file and pngs without a problem on a zip, but I do have a question.
A master file (for each pose) will be easiest for me to work with (over rendered flat files) since it would give me the ability get any layer/part I need. I suggested .psd because the screen caps looked like photoshop to me, but I haven't used it in years. Still, most major art applications (mine included, Clip Studio Paint) accept .psd files, so that makes it an ideal format for preserving layer information.
What about the facial expressions? Should I send a blank face with optional expressions to go over it or send it as it is and you edit it?
Blank face is the best for me to work with (then I don't have to do slicing, or make a mask to draw new expressions), and having each part of the expression as it's own layer/folder simplifies things a lot. So mouths, brows, eyes, and eyelids (and any other part) should all be separate, and have separate layers. Brow Left and Right (same with Eyelids) can share a layer.
The Roleplay scene with Morty and Morticia at the Pumpkin Dance is a good example of the way I use layeredimages in renpy and the parts I'd prefer to work with. Once I have a script that should hopefully give you a good idea of the needed expressions, and you can include them in the delivery.
As for a possible extension, I'd love that! I think the most natural place to go for her character is to make her feel better about being feminine... she's embarrassed about her swimsuit and she looks more masc than normal Summer. So maybe missionary would make the most sense (She's already done 69/doggy)? But NM's call there.
Agreed, if we are going to include sex here (and I think we should (if
sassy_mendigo is up to draw it)), she should do it in a new position. Missionary works for me, but I'm mostly fine with anything that sassy_mendigo is up for drawing. I would say the only poses we should avoid is standing/holding her up, since Beth and (normal) Summer scenes are already sort of that exact pose.
). It should at least look attractive.
