VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Rightful Ownership [v0.5.0] [RNGR]

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About time we got a game focusing on BWC themes instead of yet another bbc cuck game thing. The dialogue is decent in general, the dialogue with MC father is golden lol. The girls are mostly cute and nicely done. There are some lewd scenes, and the plot is progressing to build the MC's harem. Looking forward to where the DEV is taking things in the future.

hi just wanted to say that i love this game !! i can't wait for more i love dom/sub games since it's my kink XD any way for the review : i love the art and character models i can say that a lot of love was put into them also not one character was duplicated or taken from other games i played and that's a good thing also the writing is good since the story is just starting i can't wait for more and lastly i wanted to thank you for your efforts! love this game

Good graphic quality and above all the plot, one of the few erotic novels that I read where the white man is not left as a beta and a cuckold asshole. The submissive woman in love and procreation are topics that excite me when reading a novel and there aren't as many as I thought there should be. The story of each character, the protagonist influenced by his father, or Karla with her mother, the legend that is related to the protagonist makes this novel one of the best I have read and looking forward to seeing more. I think it is a novel that can set a trend, a story like this was needed.

Rightful Ownership [v0.4.5]
I wanted to try this after a few updates. Raceplay in particular doesn’t turn me on or off, but the redhead in the banner and the tag of male domination was the one that drew my attention. But I was mostly disappointed by it.

Pros:

• The renders are decent
• The male domination part was decent

Cons:

• The characters. They have no depth
• Some of the models are very dolly shaped and most of their faces look somewhat weird
• The story is weird
• The MC is very cringe
• The dialogues are cringe

Overall, if you are very much into raceplay, the chances are, you will probably love it. But if that particular thing isn’t to your tastes you will be left disappointed.

I think it's great! I'm curious where the more religious/magic side is going, but ultimately the game advertises itself as what it is: tongue-in-cheek raceplay. None of the bigoted or racist views held by characters are portrayed as normal or acceptable, in fact quite the opposite: they're made fun of. The models are great, the sex scenes (not many atm) are good, and I'm interested in seeing more!

Genuinely using my account for once to write a review on this website, mostly due to my raceplay fetish. I'm genuinely glad someone made a game like this, after all the other raceplay games where it's the other way around. Also due to this, I don't get why people complain about racism... And then go off to worship the qos games...

The only thing I dislike about this game, is the look of the MC, but I get why it's done. Ultra chad mc banging everyone left and right. Nothing different from the other side though so I won't even complain about it too much.

What I absolutely love, is the worship from the latina, it's over the top sure but that's how I like it. Don't kinkshame me. I enjoy the models of the characters, except for Lamonte. Sure he's made that way for the fetish, but I'm only seeing balloons into his body, but changing all that would mean a rework of the game and I ain't that patient to wait for that to finish.

I sincerely hope the dev will continue with this project, and hopefully not get too much abuse over it by the zealots of qos (I have seen it happen before)

Keep it up boyo, I'm supporting you all the way!

I am enjoying this one so far.
It has some beautiful renders, and the girls are good-looking.
to top it off, A real chad and a dominant mc.

The girls look unique as well adding some diversity. And it
looks like most of the LIs will be virgins so that's always a plus for me.

This one has some humor and I like it doesn't take itself
too seriously which adds to it. I sometimes feel a lot of VNs try to take themselves too seriously, So it's good to have one that can
lean towards not trying too.

There are not many choices right now, And pretty linear.

Bleaching or any raceplay is not my thing, but I still find myself
enjoying this one so far.

I can also appreciate that raceplay Is the main theme, But it still gives some background and tells somewhat of a story.

The story is nothing much so far tho.

All I gotta say is if you cannot get past the central theme of the game, then this one isn't for you.

But I can still enjoy this one for the renders, women, mc, and the humor alone.

The MCs dad is the GOAT by the way.

100% Recommend.

Keep up the good work dev.

Interesting, on a visual novel level:
Graphics: Well, from my point of view, the girls are quite sexy.
Sound: none
Animations: there are none, or they can be improved.
History: considerably interesting, although it focuses on a specific "theme" it tries to give it a background, that makes it much better.
Regarding the theme in question, it would be pathetic to cry over this if we take into account that there are at least 10 games with the same theme but seen from the opposite side (queen of spades), however, I have no doubt that this will end up having more audiences, Is this because of the theme? NO, simply because here it is the MC who is dominant over the girls and it is not ntr, simple as that.

For the dev: Good luck, the project looks great.
For those who don't like the "theme": Avoid the game or create a game with the opposite theme but with a black protagonist, it would surely work well.

as of v0.4.0 Part one
Heed the warning if you don't like the dominant white male theme that pretty much degrades other races. (I'm mixed and don't really identify as any race so it's my cup of tea)
The black guy was done dirty. Buff, takes steroids, short, and micro penis. He also says nothing when ridiculed to his face. I don't really find this to be a problem since the opposite of this scenario is super common.
2 sex scenes
very linear gameplay so far with only one decision that matters so far ( not really because this is a porn game and that decision just cocblocks you)
Good renders.
a bit funny
pretty short, I think ~ 30 minutes

I really liked what this game has thus far, though that only speaks for the Karla content mostly since, y'know, thats mostly whats there.

So far Iv enjoyed the small changes you can make toyour characters personality, or at least how he responds to things, like not being n utter douchebag to Lemonte,I hope we get more of that and that it effects the story. Maybe more options on how much we internalize our dads words.

Very promising game!

Listen I'm not going to lie. The story and writing overall are not the best. But that's honestly a part that can be overlooked by most people. The real reason people will like this game is the niche fetish. The graphics and renders are solid with a sense of style that doesn't put the models in the uncanny valley(mostly). the humor is there if you enjoy that. the thing I appreciate is the choice it gives to lean more or less into certain areas of interest for the player. hope to see more content from the developer

Honestly, I went in skeptical with the theme and lack of animations, but I was pleasantly surprised. It may not have many scenes now but all the girls have sexy designs with a wide variety of types.

The characters are basically stereotypical objects, but the game gives you backstory on their family upbringing which ranges from harsh to wicked and abusive which fleshes out and humanizes these characters, even though some of them are satirical . This, along with perfectly timed humor (even when a crazy bitch breaks into your house and watches you sleep) plays well into the ridiculousness of race fetishes. The game definitely benefits from not taking itself too seriously.

TLDR:10/10 Elsa Best Girl

Nothing of value to be looked at in its abandoned state. The game is far too short to provide anything of interest and it won't go anywhere with it being abandoned, so there's no reason to read it.

Even what's here isn't too high quality (though it can be quite hilarious depending on which lens you view it through).

I will change the review once the VN is a bit more advanced in the development, as despite being a 0.4 there is not so much content. However, what is there is intriguing, if the tags are your thing, and it is all so brought to the extreme that it is obviously ironic, which I like. Besides, the author seems to have a clear view on the direction that the story should take, and the roles that each character should have, and I can't wait to watch it unfold. If the premises are respected, then this is going to be very good.

hehe this had mu chuckle alot ... its pretty well writen .. its a comedy take on a gigachad story .. the humour is subtle sarcastic and ironic as hell ... all the female models are unique and none of them look the same ... the amination .. well there are none no clue why it has thr animated tag tbh .. but dont let that put you off ... there isnt too much so far but its funny and unlike a lot of games i read every single word and found myself chuckling a lot ... i can recomend this to anyone who just wants some well done comedy for a change and a game thats tongue in check from the off ... i wish the dev luck and hope he keeps the same humour .. i gave this 4 stars would be 5 if it had actual animations .. but its ok i enjoyed it alot

v0.4.0 Part 1
Dad character is amazing, almost every time he showed up made chuckle.

It's a bit of a shame that only girl that has scenes in this version is basically a living billboard poster with all tattoos, but I guess it can be considered hot by some people.

Overall I liked this game and I am looking forward to more.

I can't say this game deserves 5 stars for now, but I'm giving 5 stars for support the dev.

Writing a little bit silly-ish. Graphics are good. One of the most important thing is Heleyna. I can't wait to have content with her. You are trying something different, hope you can be successful.

It's so over the top it's kind of endearing.

The premise is funny, I'll admit I'm learning a lot of new words after noticing this game. I assumed the ideas existed but it's not something I ever really thought about. It seems all the HTML games on here with a female protagonist is all about BBC that the idea someone would make a game where it's flipped on its head is quite novel.

The game.... has a few issues. The renders are a bit odd in places. The female models are fine but the guys look like they need a few sliders tweaked. The eyes are also odd, The colouring of some make them look almost unnatural. The issue with the way some of the characters look doesn't appear to cross over to the women though. With the exception of the eyes the models all look varied and interesting. Going forward I only hope the dev keeps the group tight and doesn't fall down the rabbit hole of feeling the need to have a cast of thousands.

The issues aren't THAT bad. It could be argued the visuals are an aesthetic choice as opposed to it being problems with the models, and to be circle back to my initial point, the game's so over the top it's funny. Like some of the lines of dialogue made me burst out laughing. At least... I kind of hope the writer is being intentionally funny. If some of the dialogue is meant to be serious that.... that's a different thing. There's potential for a good game here, needs a bit of polish with some of the renders, in a few instances the "camera" is RIGHT up in the persons face, but beyond that it's interesting.

v0.4.0 Part 1 review -
Never heard of the term bleaching used in the game or played a game with story involving bleaching before , first time trying it ,and have to say I liked what I played in addition to great renders and dashing main charecters and diverse , stunning female models with simple gameplay of choices . It was definitely a fun game to play , added to watchlist and looking forward to future releases .

Love the animations, the girl models are pretty. Honestly it's just refreshing to see the game that doesnt go around "BBC" "sissy" all that stuff. I wanna see how the plot will evolve. So far, i love it, but may need to be a bit serious, like i get that it's a good comedy, but still, whatever dev decides. The renders are good