VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Rightful Ownership [v0.5.0] [RNGR]

Well this was an interesting vn, I like the new style of story idea the dev has chosen to go with, I like the Li and I can see for some like Karla? it makes sense for her character to be very straight forward and it also helped showing us some backstory of her, though the sex scene did surprise me, it was pretty good, this is one ill be supporting soon

(if it turns out the girls we've been introduced to so far are all virgins then this will give crispy chicken a run for his money, given the way the dev has written most of the girls so far it kind of seems like they all are Sooooo, damnnnn!! eh hem I'm looking forward to your future RNGR)

no ntr/sharing and most other unsavory fetishes so that's just, great

As of v0.3.2
Amazing game with good renders and gorgeous female charecters and finally a Main charecter who looks good and acceptable as a 26 year old and not a midget who we see in most games . There isn't much content to play for now but from what I played story is interesting and writing is excellent and I love the humor in certain areas . Overall 5 stars for me , game has huge potential . Highly recommended and looking forward for future updates .

Pro: the graphics. Sorta. If you are into very exagerated proportions for some characters.

Con: I'm going to skip any comment on "humor" and "incel/chad/based" - it has been debated in other reviews. It may or may not be your thing and is very subjective.
Even if you ignore all that or have no problems with it, the writing is abysmally poor. This is about as deep as a teenager power fantasy. There is not much of a story or a game. Hard pass.

This game is a ham-handed, masturbatory self-insert fantasy with too much incel monologue and no sexual buildup.

It opens up with you, the MC, under-performing in bed. After admiring your naked dorito shaped husk, you go for a walk in an empty city where you complain about being 26 and unemployed. In the next scene, you go to an empty gym and pound dumbbells from several camera angles. Afterward, you're given the option of taking off your shirt, flexing and admiring... yourself.

Fast forward to the next scene, you go to the gym, again. You are presented with a heavily tattooed latina woman who comes on to you immediately, takes you into the back room and removes her clothes to reveal white supremacist tattoos. This heavily tattooed, beautiful latina woman then explains to you that she is a virgin. After a somewhat hot sex scene, it is revealed that the weeks and years spent on those tattoos staying pure was some complicated exotic latin race magic ritual.

If you're asking is this game racist? Yes. BBC stuff is racist too. Raceplay is a kink, and kinks can be hot - but this is cringey self-insert trash. I hope the writing improves, I hope the author becomes somewhat self aware, because the sex scenes are remarkably tame for such edgy content.

My suggestions for improvement would be the removal of the monologue about the justification of being an incel narcissist, and the removal of the "are ya winning son" flashbacks. You can leave in the flexing scene as a joke, maybe add more angles of the MC doing weights, then hey, you can make a whole game about jerking off to yourself.

2 stars.

It's not really my thing, I guess, but it's not a bad game.

First off, I do not think this is a racist game, it's clearly humorous AND centred on one particular kink, basically the opposite of BBC.
Honestly, if you consider one of them not racist, then both aren't racist, because one is just the other trope switched around.
Personally, I do think it probably isn't the best idea to have fetishes based on a specific race, if I like fe. a BBC story, it's more about making women fall for corruption and sex, the primmer, the better, I don't care if the guy doing it is White or Black, really.

I thought the same could be true as well, but this isn't that type of story (so far) where fe. you would have a proud Latina, Black or Asian woman who doesn't want sex with a White guy and the MC conquers them with their dick, nope this is the kind of story where the women throw themselves at the MC (so far), one of them is so hot and hungry for his BWC that she is crazy, period.
Incidentally, for some reason, she also leads the poll.

Personally, I prefer the three younger black women and the Asian girl by far. The Black ladies are the only ones I find really attractive in this one.

Now, for the actual ratings, the girls for the most part are just okay, not really great looking, but kind of average for this type of games, so a three-star rating is perfectly fine.
The writing has some humour, but isn't particularly engaging or interesting.
Even though this is a pretty short game so far, it still had lengths and scenes I just skipped through.
So, it's not horrible or impossible to understand, but it's not really good and there definitely are some mistakes as well.

If you are sensitive to kinks involving race, this probably isn't for you, just like BBC games aren't for you, but if you are actually into this stuff it might make the weaknesses less important for you and you will probably enjoy it way more than I do.

I would ask you, though, not to get your knickers in a bunch over this game.
This fetish is as bad or good as others, given the humour this game has, I really doubt it has anything to do with real racism.
Hell, even the BBC comics and stories sites have the odd one out, where the parts are reversed and suddenly this ugly, fat white dude has a magic dick that makes all the ebony beauties fall for him.

It might work for you, or it won't, but don't take it seriously.

This thing is short. I dont know what 0.3.2 stands for, probably the number of frames.
It centers around a very specific kink: race play.
I like try different kinks. This one since it is insanely insulting we dont get to see it a lot.
I was ready to give it 4/5 stars because it was different but i stoped.
I dont get why is a latina burnette so keen in being impregnated by a white supremacist. These things are white people madness so it doesnt fit. Since i touched the subject, why would that white supremacist want colored kids? I dunno, unless you have darker kinks incoming.

Very well made renders, though the game is clearly a fetish hole. All of it based around a singular Bleached style fetish, it states it in every place. It seems utterly bizarre that people turn around and complain about the game when it doesn't pretend to be anything else. But I digress.

The story, sides with the cliche but not in a negative way. It's humorous with the flashback interactions of an intense father figure having discussion with a nerdy son. The choices at the moment appear to not make much difference but at the very least there was some stuff worth a chuckle through out.

The renders are very good, well made and working well within the context. Again, a clearly fetishized one included in that list. The models are intentionally oversexualized, large tits, large ass, all the above.

This appears to be a fun game, though it is worth noting that the current direction is clearly focusing one sexual interactions. With story put on the backburner for it. Time will certainly tell how it goes!

I honestly don't understand some of the criticism here. It's a porn game it's amazing to me what the people here will tolerate - they will tolerate rape, incest, characters who are "18", blackmail, and on and on.

But as soon as there is a game that has any sort of comedic content that deals with race they go ballistic. It's comical that such people exist in real life. Almost as funny as the game.

The black cuck (sorry for the spoiler) with the micropenis was hilarious. The latina who only wanted to white sperm was also hilarious. It reminded me back to the 90's when Howard Stern and Opie were allowed to be raunchy before the PC police turned the world to shit. Keep at it dev don't allow the criticism to change what you are creating.

As for the nuts and bolts of the game it is short so far but the renders are well done. The story and writing is interesting and unique. The characters are not realistic but are laugh-out-loud funny.

Version Reviewed: v0.3.2

Overview: White Power!

Story: You are a playboy that has grown tired of random hookups so you move to a small town to find someone worthy of your glorious white sperm just as your dad taught. You go to the gym and discover a crazy redhead that runs up to you and barely asks your name before she's jumping on your dick for a full creampie.

Gameplay: It's a VN, although you can skip scenes if you so choose. There are a few choices but they don't appear to make any difference as of yet.

Graphics: It's Daz, but with some pretty whacked out body sliders on some of the girls. Overall the graphics are clean and the game seems competently put together.

Conclusion: If the game is alright why the low rating? The reason is that it's the most embarassingly cringy game I've played in years. The racism is blatant and it's not being used as a joke or anything, you are just the superior race and everybody knows it and won't stop talking about it. Your dad warns you against race mixing. As of this version the game is pretty short, maybe 30 minutes at most to play through all of the content. There is one bit of obvious padding where you have to click through the entire workout routine one frame at a time. Normally when a game is competently designed and grammatical I'll award at least 3 stars, but this one loses points from the repeated facepalming I had at the dialog/monologues.

10/10 comedy

this game takes nothing serious, but in the best way possible.

zyzz our lord and saviour is a deity, theres some sorta reverse blacked content and if this is what y'all enjoy about blacked content maybe i get it more as its so dumb you cant help but love it.

Warning, the first thing you notice is the overt racism, which can be a mood killer. We start with a flashbacks with the mc's dad and choices for four main potential love interests. Other then this, there is not much direction of the plot unless it's just a simple bleached game. The dailogue is cringe and is riddled with grammer errors if you care enough for that. Also too few sexy scences and the scenes that are available have cringe dialogue dealing with the bleached kink. Only positive is the art models. With everything considered, this project has little potential.

Damn surprisingly funny, the deadpan cuts to our bro gym buddy as the protag made fun of him again and again sent me.

Great model design and overall 3dwork, and the writing in general is great. Very much looking forward to more content

Rightful Ownership [v0.2]

Good game with good renders. For now there isn't that much content. But writing and dialogues are funny. MC is a chad looking guy, a white stud. Girl models are good there is a redhead, asian, blonde, latina, and ebony. My fav is asian jade but there isn't that much content for her. And there is cute and hot read head. Then there is crazy latina Carla she seems crazy and fun. MC is a little asshole depending on your choices. There isn't that much content now but I enjoyed the game so far. So I'm looking forward to next updates. And waiting know more about other girls as well. Keep up the good work dev

wow, amazing !!!

Writing: 10/10
Imagery: 7/10
Gameplay: 10/10
Kinks: 10/10
Overall: 9/10

not boring or vanilla , love the psycho aspect of things , Karla was just the best VN that I have seen so far (maybe better than Kat from no-more money), virgin with those tatts beats the best of them. And the racist stuff just WOW.

lots of potential!

[Reviewed: v0.1]
At this point there's barely an introduction here. We meet the protagonist (complete with flashbacks to earlier times with his dad) and have brief scenes with the four main potential love interests. A few choices are presented that score the protagonist's -- possibly the girl's -- interest in each other.

There is no sound or music yet. The visuals are good enough. However, the story text is riddled with "careless" issues. For example: inconsistent capitalization, poor punctuation, spelling errors, and silly repeated letters. Take "justtt. likeee. thattt." from the first scene. Unless this is supposed to be stuttering, the duplicated letters here cannot work, especially the E, as it's silent.

I've rated this as average (3 stars), biasing a bit upward as there's just so little here so far. Please get a proofreader before the next and future updates.