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My suspension of disbelief tends to be set at the level of the least believable thing. Which in this story should surely be the activity that goes against all known laws of physics and is therefore not simply implausible but literally impossible.
There is one pair of scenes (one follows the other) that should be rewritten for the canon non-incest story. They present something as a taboo that no rational person would consider taboo. But everything else works well without the patch.
There is one pair of scenes (one follows the other) that should be rewritten for the canon non-incest story. They present something as a taboo that no rational person would consider taboo. But everything else works well without the patch.