It is possible for Mystique to change to other girls forms during having fun. What about Raven form?
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winter0s
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Trying to post this as constructive criticism, I hope you take it as such.
Her face is alright, but chin needs to be less masculine. It is too square right now.
Shoulders are too wide, arms are too thin. Waist is too high and thin.
Legs are way out of proportion. Those are very long legs for a smallish torso. Her right knee is higher than left knee. Also, she needs a pair of thighs, calves, ankles, hips and butt.
It could have worked better if this was for Something Unlimited, as your style and proportions are closer to DCAU art than Oni's. Keep practicing!
I think the face is pretty good...I lifted it straight from character models for the X-men Evolution series. I was planning to redo the legs once I got a pretty good idea of how the whole body went together, proportion-wise. I compared a lot of Oni's artwork, and proportionally, much of his figure work is pretty close to this. I think it's only Emma who has bigger hips, and Storm has a different build than her anyway--just saying don't expect Storm to look like Emma. Her legs are left intentionally unfinished because the bottoms of them will end up being out of panel anyway. Oni's art is the same way if you look at the sprite models...
One of the major problems is that the character models from the show are pretty elongated, so I already had to fill in quite a bit of meat. I had to build it up from the body for it to look right with clothes on, and then I'm going to reconstruct it at the bottom to look more natural and smooth (notice the straight lines). I also plan to erase a lot of the lines that are there as guides right now, so that should help it look a little cleaner.
Thanks for taking a look at it. I'm still working on the art, so it was not meant to be finished at all anyway. Plus, I'm just learning how to do a bunch of it, so I've been figuring out ways to simplify and improve things as I go along
It's a really good start man. Would love to see some more girls and kudos if you can help with that.
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Can anyone here with renpy experience answer a question please?
I'm familiar with some Java script, but don't know too much about renpy. Would it be a simple task (or not) to edit some of the script to increase the animation speed of handjobs, blowjobs, foot jobs etc...? Although the animation frames themselves are fine and movement is good, They are honestly rather slow regardless of which speed option you choose. They would be much more appealing if it looked like the girls were putting in effort to make you cum rather than it looking like they are just teasing you.
Thanks.
I'm familiar with some Java script, but don't know too much about renpy. Would it be a simple task (or not) to edit some of the script to increase the animation speed of handjobs, blowjobs, foot jobs etc...? Although the animation frames themselves are fine and movement is good, They are honestly rather slow regardless of which speed option you choose. They would be much more appealing if it looked like the girls were putting in effort to make you cum rather than it looking like they are just teasing you.
Thanks.
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Hey guys, I was a big fan of this game and am very happy to see that there is more work being put into it atm.
I am, unfortunately, running into a problem while in the shower with 2+ girls. It seems that every time another girl "notices" and wants to join in, the game crashes. I wanted to know if there is anything you guys could do to help me fid it, and also - is there actually a 3 way scene in the game?
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I am, unfortunately, running into a problem while in the shower with 2+ girls. It seems that every time another girl "notices" and wants to join in, the game crashes. I wanted to know if there is anything you guys could do to help me fid it, and also - is there actually a 3 way scene in the game?
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Hm, i can not really help you with this, im not the code magician, i'll guess you have to wait till @Shanks_Aka shows up, maybe he can help. Sorry!
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Not really just some Text that the third girl is kissing the other and stuff like that while you are at it with the other, no real pictures for the girls together.
So did you read the post? It tells you where to put the file!
thought the post only applied to mods being added to the base game, not the modded one. so same shit applies to any other mods whether the game is modded or not?Not really just some Text that the third girl is kissing the other and stuff like that while you are at it with the other, no real pictures for the girls together.
So did you read the post? It tells you where to put the file!
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Yes! thats why i write the instructions to every post when i upload something and instructions are needed! I want to make it as easy as possible for every one to use!
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Maybe i will make a new one with my updated files when im trough with everything from Mystique, got no news from Shanks or Olive what they are up to at the moment, so i can not say when a new verison of the mod is coming!
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I like the full outfit of storm, it looks superb! but when she naked she looks a bit unproportional and her nipples look awkward.... otherwise continue doing the lords work!