dakale
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- Mar 19, 2018
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Thanks for the feedback. I dont mind honesty as long as its respectful.Hey, just some quick constructive criticism, I noticed that you try to avoid changing the outlines on the girls and stick to changing the shading for that toned effect. It may be better if you make changes to the linework here and there like on some of their arms to make it look mor like biceps than being sickly lol. Also some of their abs look a bit weird if you look for too long, namely jean and rogue... Sorry if this came out as harsh but I want to see this be the best it can be, so keep up the hard work!
I know what you mean about the abs, im not particularly a good artist, those are the best iterations i came up with. The reason i dont change the outlines is coz i dont want to mess up the layers. If i give for example, biceps on their arms, i would have to also redraw the clothing layers to reflect that. Thats a lot of work and is why i abandoned the Laura remake.
I might give the abs another shot, alongside Kitty, since some people have requested her. It all comes down to Onis initial drawing, some of them have odd shading, some of them have weird proportions. I cant really complain since im not better than him at drawing but yeah, ill try. Cheers