RPGM Completed Rookie Knight Mina - City of The Succubus [Final] [Roman]

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Overview:
A few months after the last incident in Grano,
Mina is summoned by the king again and heads to a city where a lewd demo rules as part of a new mission to defeat them.
What awaits her there is a succession of shame that is no less than that of that incident.​

Thread Updated: 2022-01-13
Release Date: 2021-12-21
Developer: Roman -

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Censored: Yes
Version: Final
OS: Windows
Language: English (Fan Translated)
Translator: Coffee Soup
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Thank you for sharing and translating Coffee Soup

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[xmilteach]

thx

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[Rizo]

Oh thanks for the upload and Coffee Soup for the translation! Great work!

 

[El Presidente]

it's a visual novel

 

[I-Love-Adventure]

nice game thank you

 

[kentastic]

i wouldnt term this a game, more like a masturbation aid. i say this bc you have zero choices to make. the game pretty much plays its self and of course the ending is as you'd expect. this is more like a movie than a game, in the sense your just along for the ride. and of course you can play it with one hand.

 

[Lucio54]

This is just an extra content.
The origin game has way more scenes.

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Really hope for this to be translated too.

 

[Ross_69]

From the description, it seems like this is a sequel.

Did first part ever get translated?

 

[throwawaycoom]

and there is no actual description

Uh what? Then what is this body of text it's in? Not every day you see self aware text with an identity crisis.

 

[jaketsu]

oh damn i was hoping someone translates this. thx a lot

 

[Coffee Soup]

This is just an extra content.
The origin game has way more scenes.

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Really hope for this to be translated too.

I mentioned in the TL notes that I wasn't aware there was a prequel before actually looking into the game more. I wouldn't mind translating that game as I quite liked the writing and characters in this one, but since the writing is such an essential part of the experience it would be useful to get some feedback on how my good/bad my writing was. I want to try to offer a translation that is worthy of the game.

 

[jaketsu]

I mentioned in the TL notes that I wasn't aware there was a prequel before actually looking into the game more. I wouldn't mind translating that game as I quite liked the writing and characters in this one, but since the writing is such an essential part of the experience it would be useful to get some feedback on how my good/bad my writing was. I want to try to offer a translation that is worthy of the game.

your translation seems to be pretty good. i have only gone through the intro, but when you actually have coherent subsentences that speaks a lot for the quality of translations. i also read chinese manga before that was translated into english, which was grammatically correct but the vocabulary was weird af. this isnt the case at all here, i think its a pretty well done translation so far.
i will update if i find some bigger mistakes while playing through this game or if i have different feedback after im done

 

[Coffee Soup]

your translation seems to be pretty good. i have only gone through the intro, but when you actually have coherent subsentences that speaks a lot for the quality of translations. i also read chinese manga before that was translated into english, which was grammatically correct but the vocabulary was weird af. this isnt the case at all here, i think its a pretty well done translation so far.
i will update if i find some bigger mistakes while playing through this game or if i have different feedback after im done

I would honestly appreciate that very much! Having another person evaluation your writing is so valuable, since I can only judge what "I" think sounds good from a narrative point of view, but I have no way of knowing if my writing is actually enjoyable to read for someone else so thanks!

 

[Lucio54]

I mentioned in the TL notes that I wasn't aware there was a prequel before actually looking into the game more. I wouldn't mind translating that game as I quite liked the writing and characters in this one, but since the writing is such an essential part of the experience it would be useful to get some feedback on how my good/bad my writing was. I want to try to offer a translation that is worthy of the game.

Oh, sorry for not reading that then, really aprecciate it, i think you are doing good, way better than some MTL, and for me thats whats matter.

 

[BlackElite]

Thank you for the translation! Gonna try but looks like it's a game that focuses on event gathering... I may get bored if it's kinda plain...

 

[lampost]

I remember playing through the first game of this. The developer likes to strip and humiliate the MC and this second game seems to have reused a lot of assets from the first one but used to tell a different story.

This game focuses on the MC being humiliated by women while the previous game focused on her being humiliated by men while also getting fucked a lot.

Personally I prefer the first game more since it had more scenes and also a lot more sex.

 

[The killing Goku]

Didn't know there was a (mini) sequel. I'd encountered the original game in the feeds when it was just released though, so it did look familiar when I opened the thread here.

So yeah ... since the original does seem to be more substantial in what it offers, it'd be nice to get the first game TL'ed for context.

 

[Anonymous fapper98]

Damn, she's thiccer than a bowl of oatmeal.

 

[Agnamer]

This is just an extra content.
The origin game has way more scenes.

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Really hope for this to be translated too.

Here is the game in Japanese

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