- Thread starter BaasB
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- Apr 1, 2020
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I believe it's unofficially called Rookie/New Knight Mina - First Mission of Shame, but as the previous comments said, the game is yet to be translated. However, here is the DL link to it.
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It's rare to find games where FMC got public humiliation (ENF) apart from Aburasobabiyori circle.
More like a little spin-off DLC.
DLSite description gives it a playtime of no more than 20 minutes after all.
Translation Fix for Coffee Soup 's Translation
(it's more or less the same except for lots of spelling corrections and minor changes to some sentences that make them more natural)
(it's more or less the same except for lots of spelling corrections and minor changes to some sentences that make them more natural)
- Apr 1, 2020
- 10
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Is it possible for you to point out where I can double check some of my mistakes, like throughout the story or especifically bad in certain parts? (I'm always trying to impove and studying mistakes is an efficient way to learn)
Don't worry about it, I'm happy to help. All I did was fix some spelling mistakes which I assume were typos, and I noticed you always spell strength as strenght, so that was one of it, also there was a certain passage, I forgot which one but the way you translated it seemed very directly translated, I changed it to something more 'erotic' by saying 'my pussy juice is flowing' or something along those lines. I also added a lot of single quotes for words like dont or wont (making it don't or won't). Anyways, GOOD JOB ON THE TRANSLATION!!! I liked it considering it was one of your first translations.
and the reply u sent, I think u meant 'especially' <-- im not trying to be nitpicky, i just thought that you should know just in case
I'm not sure if you're still into translation, but it would be really cool if you could translate the first game in this series. I could proofread your Translation if you want