Hello, I would like to say that I really like your game, even though I don't speak English. I use Google Translate in this message.
All I'm putting is my impression and not an order or request for change.
The writing style where the MC doesn't speak directly is still a bit strange to me, and this is the first time I've read a story in this format. It gets a bit tiring when there's only the MC and an NPC, it feels like a monologue and unnatural. The same doesn't happen when the MC is NPC + NPC. The dialogue between the NPCs becomes much more fluid. In terms of the game in general, your game is very good and very enjoyable. The models are very beautiful. Regarding the mystery of the world, I haven't gotten into the story yet, it's very recent. MAYA, the AI, I'm curious if she's going to disappear or materialize into a person, or if she's actually an angel, demon, or goddess. The MC is a bit neutral, he wants to change his life path and get away from the MMO game. The MC in the routes I chose is a good MC. He is not stupid or incapable, he is not passive about what happens around him and he reacts naturally in most situations and does not give off an air of submissive obliviousness. The impression I have of him is that he is a little withdrawn but not shy, careful and affectionate and trusts the people around him a little too much, he tends to be dominant in relationships but not aggressive.
Luna is a tomboy "I didn't know the term, I had to research it to find out that it is not simply the invention of femboy pornography is also culture" She is a perfect representation of a tomboy, I really like the evolution of a lost and insecure girl who seeks to change herself for the approval of the MC and her "friends" but with the return and support of the MC she becomes more confident and accepts her personality and her characteristics. Misty is very good for Luna's growth, the relationship of control over Misty and the control of the relationship between MC and Misty, I feel that this has made her more confident and less jealous. I think she likes Misty but not sexually, but likes to take care and control. Emily was not really friends with Luna, but she changes her view of MC and Luna after what happened on the beach. Now with the trauma, MC and Luna become Emily's ideal couple, she ends up developing an emotional and affective dependence on MC and Luna as the leadership figure she can trust, despite challenging Luna, he has shown himself to be increasingly submissive. The threesome showed interesting signs for me and what to expect in the relationship between Luna and MC and other girls, Luna seems comfortable sharing MC as long as the girl is willing to follow her rules, and she shows a slight dominant side emerging over other women, Emily accepts and submits to Luna in the end despite her marked insecurity when she trusts her to be her girlfriend. I hope Luna becomes a "cuckold queen" it was an excellent start.
Oliver is an insecure boy and is lost, a typical femboy. His route has more options. I chose the route I followed the art teacher's route. He has a needy and insecure personality, is very attached to MC, likes to be submissive and is the character with the most feminine behavior in the game. Now with a competitor, let's see how he will behave. The art teacher still doesn't have an opinion, but I don't trust him, but I don't think he's completely sincere.
Date is a good character. He's here to make the story happen. He's Oliver, but he's confident and older, but I don't see how a boyfriend like Oliver can be a more open relationship. I would like it to be more of a friends-with-benefits path and moral support for MC, but I like him.
Linda is a woman who raises her son alone. She had a troubled childhood. She has problems with alcohol and work. She's emotionally unstable. She blames herself for her son's mistakes and thinks she wasn't a good mother. Her personality is needy, a bit submissive, and clearly in a midlife crisis. Linda's route starts very quickly and ends up not exploring the Taboo of the route very much. I thought it was due to the Patreon rules and the excuse that Linda was emotionally unstable and the MC was too. And since humans, when they are excited, don't stop to reflect until something calls them back to reality, which would be Natalie's arrival, but it went down a path I didn't expect and in a very accelerated way. I don't feel any character development or logical evolution.
I don't like to write, but I really liked your game and I wanted to express my feelings about it. I like Oliver and Luna and Fall in Love. You've done a great job on this game so far. I hope you continue. I'm curious to see where the story goes.
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