moonblackhen
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- Jan 25, 2022
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Due to real-life distractions I skipped 0.06, so I got to play 0.06 and 0.07 just now. A few small typos:
1)
"thoughts" should be "thought".
2)
"then" should be "than"
3)
It should be "having" or "getting", not both
4)
"then" should be "than"
5)
"mans" should be "man's"
6)
"that don't feel" should be "that you don't feel".
7)
"might to not get you fuck you" should be "might not get to fuck you"
1)
"thoughts" should be "thought".
2)
"then" should be "than"
3)
It should be "having" or "getting", not both
4)
"then" should be "than"
5)
"mans" should be "man's"
6)
"that don't feel" should be "that you don't feel".
7)
"might to not get you fuck you" should be "might not get to fuck you"