Catares

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Nov 15, 2017
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So regarding game, its kind of mix bag for me, i really like the beginning of the story and setting up the family members and the flow of mother who wants her son "back". Visuals and the animation are good but there are some problems in other aspects in my opinion. There is too many characters and not too much time for them, it would be i think better to focus on few and then expand to give them proper introduction, also i think that MC should start be more open/corrupted to her step-boy before she does it to other characters but thats just my opinion. That would be better to have maybe son more in control if he wants for her to be more slutty for others, unless its story center around Mom, then its doesent matter.
Next is story, there is too much of character for first time and i feel like i skipped something, also random encounter of a teacher and janitor was also quite weird unless she will be typical female slutty character that will drag down MC into slutiness? What was the meaning of gang and their reports? I didnt understand this conversation, did i skipped or didnt played something, since it come out of the blue?
I think that premise and execution is great and other things could be polished, but i hope that there will be not too much characters that will end up with teasing only and then naked > HJ > BJ >Boob >Sex. For me the best thing its relationship between MC and her son and how to build up of this, maybe the sister and aunt will get jelous, MC husband will be maybe in the dark or suspect something. I think i will see in which direction game would be going and the focus of characters to interact.
Regarding game engine, please change fadding black screen its really bad to have it after every render, sometimes even clicking 2-3 times to get to another scene. Regarding navigation dev addresed it will be ok, also idk how i feel about main story and sub-quests and how they are connected or not but we will see.

TLDR: For me i really like the foundation of this game, visuals and premise. There is too much characters for the first time in the prologue. i Would tone down how many characters are and focus more maybe on family aspects and other people would come in the meantime. Some parts of story/conversations are ok,good and some are quite weird(reporting to police about some gang or just scene with janitor).

I really liked the game and will like to see what is going to be next.
Good luck and i will wait for next update.
PS. Sorry, but English is not my native language
 
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sslovoe

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So regarding game, its kind of mix bag for me, i really like the beginning of the story and setting up the family members and the flow of mother who wants her son "back". Visuals and the animation are good but there are some problems in other aspects in my opinion. There is too many characters and not too much time for them, it would be i think better to focus on few and then expand to give them proper introduction, also i think that MC should start be more open/corrupted to her step-boy before she does it to other characters but thats just my opinion. That would be better to have maybe son more in control if he wants for her to be more slutty for others, unless its story center around Mom, then its doesent matter.
Next is story, there is too much of character for first time and i feel like i skipped something, also random encounter of a teacher and janitor was also quite weird unless she will be typical female slutty character that will drag down MC into slutiness? What was the meaning of gang and their reports? I didnt understand this conversation, did i skipped or didnt played something, since it come out of the blue?
I think that premise and execution is great and other things could be polished, but i hope that there will be not too much characters that will end up with teasing only and then naked > HJ > BJ >Boob >Sex. For me the best thing its relationship between MC and her son and how to build up of this, maybe the sister and aunt will get jelous, MC husband will be maybe in the dark or suspect something. I think i will see in which direction game would be going and the focus of characters to interact.
Regarding game engine, please change fadding black screen its really bad to have it after every render, sometimes even clicking 2-3 times to get to another scene. Regarding navigation dev addresed it will be ok, also idk how i feel about main story and sub-quests and how they are connected or not but we will see.

TLDR: For me i really like the foundation of this game, visuals and premise. There is too much characters for the first time in the prologue. i Would tone down how many characters are and focus more maybe on family aspects and other people would come in the meantime. Some parts of story/conversations are ok,good and some are quite weird(reporting to police about some gang or just scene with janitor).

I really liked the game and will like to see what is going to be next.
Good luck and i will wait for next update.
PS. Sorry, but English is not my native language
not everyone like this Chang
but i like his decision this will make him open game with more path
the original game is very complex
and hard get to sex part
but with open relation with stranger there will be story line to creat corruption for her in many way
and by this he will find way to make relation incest path
he very good artist and i like his way
and i believe with his new game be different and not stuck with original story
 

Lgor_and

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Oct 31, 2024
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not everyone like this Chang
but i like his decision this will make him open game with more path
the original game is very complex
and hard get to sex part
but with open relation with stranger there will be story line to creat corruption for her in many way
and by this he will find way to make relation incest path
he very good artist and i like his way
and i believe with his new game be different and not stuck with original story
release date number ???
 

Puckhog27

Member
Apr 26, 2018
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I enjoyed the content that's there. Especially the voyeurism dancing scene. For some reason she looks more attractive when there's animations than images. Her face can look off for some reason. I still like her model though. Will this have blackmail of some sort? It seems like she had done some modeling in the past. Perhaps she will have to do something in class like strip? I've seen the theme before and like the idea.
 
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