Well to be fair I'm one of those weird guys who reads ntr for plot (crazy right) I have read or seen many and like it when they switch up the story. Most often I'm indifferent. In this sense my and a few others think similar in that the story is weak as shit. This is just how I feel it could be better and still have the endings we see but, add a little more to it.
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I agree that the story and/or corruption elements felt a little out of place and/or rushed at times. In particular, the mother's easily corruptible nature and her complete lack of hesitancy in getting with her son's bully made it a bit unrealistic so to speak. Like I have mentioned previously, NTRman games are not entirely meant to be slow-burn styled (SBS) experiences. However, I still felt that the pacing of SOL (autumn episode) felt a bit more rushed than NTRman's previous titles he worked on.
However, given all of that, I think we should all just keep in mind that the final version of SOL (autumn episode) is still in the works.
Therefore, there is still an opportunity for the story to redeem itself by introducing those additional scenes that we have not come to witness just yet. So, who knows? Perhaps the pacing will make a lot more sense in subsequent releases of the game.
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I have seen similar comments to this in both the discord and on the patreon and I do get what people sides but I would to stress this is just the first release we still have events we weren't able to choose from the son's side meaning that even the mom will probably get more scenes. You mention that this is going to be a big project like Adeliade Inn (my favorite ntrman game) but if you think back that game felt rushed in its first releases also so if we just wait for the spring chapter which is the final one I'm sure most will be satisfied. Just from the opening the game tells you there will be loss but also acceptance and happiness which will probably not only be for the girls but also satoshi. Who knows maybe he gets the chance to steal them back maybe he gets to just go on and steal others girls starting with the gal. Plus we still don't even know why the mom glitched out early on maybe ever girl is going to see glitches and this is going to be a doki doki thing where we are the mc and the women want us. Who knows I just think that the final product will be really satisfying which is why Im treating this like an alpha and the next release like a beta.
I think you skip alot of the story, but here FYI, the fucking bully is 22 year old, he say it when he first meet the mom.
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For me, the mc is fine, the bully is also fine because asshole supposed to be an asshole, if this guy feel any remorse or awkward/weak its not a good antagonist for ntr story, the mom is kinda bad, fell way to fast/ez and it seems that the bully did nothing, so it makes the story bland, and for the ending, tbh i'm surprised this is the direction we got but sure. conclusion its ok just a little bit meh
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Very true, we only saw a fragment of the story so yeah, this one is going to be wicked
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Yeah, lol that's actually jokes. But the fact of the bully's age, actually lead me to think about something else.
If the bully was 22, that would make Satoshi 21. Now, I am not Japanese, nor have I ever studied in Japan but I'm pretty sure by Japanese standards a 21/22-year-old should have already finished HS, and graduated onto college and/or university by now. But, I don't know? lmao
Perhaps in NTRMan's universe, some students have to be held back a number of years because they're too busy NTRing those hot momma's
That's the main thing. I know that it is a work In progress and that these comments will become obsolete In the end but, from what I see so far this needs more work.
Maybe but, I would think that these characters will return in some way In the other episodes so i would hope that thses characters dont stay one note. Ita only cause its episodic that i say this at all.
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Its to avoid patreons rules when it comes to age. Always remember its minus 5 or 10...so, 22 - 10 = real age or 22 - 5 = real age . Any which way u prefer it makes senseYeah, lol that's actually jokes. But the fact of the bully's age, actually lead me to think about something else.
If the bully was 22, that would make Satoshi 21. Now, I am not Japanese, nor have I ever studied in Japan but I'm pretty sure by Japanese standards a 21/22-year-old should have already finished HS, and graduated onto college and/or university by now. But, I don't know? lmao
Perhaps in NTRMan's universe, some students have to be held back a number of years because they're too busy NTRing those hot momma's
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Soo will anyone mention the "glichy" part in the store? I swear if this is gonna be some 4th wall breaking ntr game, im gonna love NTRMAN even more
First of all, not an NTR hater; infact, some of the best games I played are NTR; and some came from NTRMAN himself. But this is probably his weakest work by far. None of this really hits the NTR points. Maybe its a pre release, and he'll fix these later on? We can only hope.
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Ahh, I see! That makes a whole lot of sense now, lmao. Totally forgot about Patreon guidelines with respect to age.Its to avoid patreons rules when it comes to age. Always remember its minus 5 or 10...so, 22 - 10 = real age or 22 - 5 = real age . Any which way u prefer it makes sense
You learn something new every day, eh? ;D
But, I was also wondering, do you think that the Patreon mods will start to notice these loopholes that content creators try to use to undermine their guidelines about age? Or perhaps, they might get more strict about how they enforce some of those policies?
ok, But what about his presence at school ? And I wrote about how could she leave his son alone at home? He is not an adult
The name on the manga, pleaseYeah, lol that's actually jokes. But the fact of the bully's age, actually lead me to think about something else.
If the bully was 22, that would make Satoshi 21. Now, I am not Japanese, nor have I ever studied in Japan but I'm pretty sure by Japanese standards a 21/22-year-old should have already finished HS, and graduated onto college and/or university by now. But, I don't know? lmao
Perhaps in NTRMan's universe, some students have to be held back a number of years because they're too busy NTRing those hot momma's
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lol, andoryu, i see your style of woman somehow very same as me, bro.Yeah, lol that's actually jokes. But the fact of the bully's age, actually lead me to think about something else.
If the bully was 22, that would make Satoshi 21. Now, I am not Japanese, nor have I ever studied in Japan but I'm pretty sure by Japanese standards a 21/22-year-old should have already finished HS, and graduated onto college and/or university by now. But, I don't know? lmao
Perhaps in NTRMan's universe, some students have to be held back a number of years because they're too busy NTRing those hot momma's
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thanks man, when I know his age is 22, I shock because how the fuck the grow ass like him can be a high schoolIts to avoid patreons rules when it comes to age. Always remember its minus 5 or 10...so, 22 - 10 = real age or 22 - 5 = real age . Any which way u prefer it makes sense
the manga is very good, I still waiting new page from the mangaka, his work so slow.