Unity Completed Seasons of Loss [v1.031] [NTRMAN]

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Elmanoloca

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NTR-Lord said:
Just cause something happens a lot, in this case the woman falling for the bull instantly, it doesn't mean it's good. But that isn't the issue with this game, at least not in it's entirety. It is fine if you want to make the woman fall to the bull fast, but everything after going at lighting speed too is what harms the writing and game. The mother-son bond being broken so quickly, the shifting of priority between Kujo and Satoshi. Azusa wanting Kujo's baby instantly after the first fuck. All this happens in a couple days, the person that beats up her son regularly gets her to want his baby all cause of a sob story and a few nice words.


Again it is fine if you want to start this way, but your game need to be longer for it. And you need to have your characters interact more, show more scenes, it can even be non-sexual CGs, or scenes of Azusa putting Kujo more and more in the forefront and Saotshi in the back of her heart.

Her reaction to Satoshi calling her a slut was not proportional either. Especially based on what we had seen. She simultaneously "fell" to Kujo on her first day, but also still didn't because her interactions with Satoshi and Satoshi's pov was anemic.

I disagree with you saying that there was build up. We essentially got the following:

Azusa falls for Kujo and ways his baby on the first day - > Continues to not care for Satoshi - > leaves after being called a slut -> Hates Satoshi and an abrupt ending with her.

but given the events of her quick fall on the first day what are we suppose to feel. During the first scene of them fucking she even says something like " I know he is your bully but he is impregnating me right now and I don't care"

It pretty much all comes down to length. The length is just not there for the stories that NTRMAN wishes to tell.

Everything here has already been said I think at one point. The best we can do is move on and hope and pray for the future. I hope NTRMAN finds his footing again in the future.
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Exactly the hatred he felt for beating his son and becoming his wife was so quick and unbelievable that it ruined everything. But in most cases, this is how it happens; they don't escape abuse or blackmail. But it continues to sell and be profitable, which is why I find this genre a little boring.
 
Elmanoloca

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Ma Junior said:
I don't agree with you.
The idea that Satoshi would ever come around to accepting his mother lying to him so she could fuck the guy who violently bullied and traumatized him for years, and even upload humiliating sex tapes online — that's not kindness or emotional growth, that's being a doormat. Everyone would have a violent reaction.
As for Azusa wanting to have a baby with Kujo while abandoning Satoshi for being "weak" — that’s exactly the point. She's looking for stronger genes, and considers Satoshi as a failure with weak genes.
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YIn short, it's not Satoshi's fault that he's weak, it's her fault that with one fell swoop she falls in love with her son's abuser.
For me, there were many ways to improve this story, but they were wrong decisions and rushing the work that ended up screwing it up.
Now I'll wait for a fan to make their reimagined version with all the good comments and ideas that were given in this thread. Except for the dog thing, I'm not a fan of animals, I'm not crazy and alone enough to see that xD
 
Reven23

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No more Medieval or Futuristic setting? Damn.
(Season 4 prolly has more vanilla than netorare)
 
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distro003 said:
Cool ideas, but he doesn't think about going back to the fantasy NTR theme, man, it's so good, it's a shame
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He's a shadow of his former self. Will still play but it won't hit the same.

This is what hiring idiotic writers do to you, it kills your imagination. We were robbed of the fantasy and futuristic settings.
 
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I think Christa and Tonyo is from the Philippines since it's a Southeast Asian country. Those slippers and a Mary picture above supports it. Could be wrong. "Tonyo" sounds like a Filipino name, too.

Does anyone know what Southeast Asua countries use that calendar design? That's pretty common in the Philippines.
 
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Reven23 said:
I think Christa and Tonyo is from the Philippines since it's a Southeast Asian country. Those slippers and a Mary picture above supports it. Could be wrong. "Tonyo" sounds like a Filipino name, too.

Does anyone know what Southeast Asua countries use that calendar design? That's pretty common in the Philippines.
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It is 100% Philippines, look at the the pic with Mary, mother of Jesus, the Philippines was a colony of Catholic Spain
 
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