There's only 3 scenes right? One with the landlord, a quick mention with the roommate and then a final scene with the landlord (when she's remote).
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I think you have done a great start with diaper punishments, and i believe there are 5 scenes so far. the ones you missed gfdsf where one where Landlord appears to check up on you while you are in Iris room and the other his iris putting it on after the garden event.
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This sounds quite interestingt and right up my alley. However I could not make it past day 1. There is nothing more aggravating to me than playing a complete retard.
Look. I wont kinkshame anyone. There are simply a lot of fetishes I dont get and that is fine. But can someone explain to me what the "Retarded Main Character wants to fap to stolen underwear" thing is all about ?
I guess its supposed to get the ball rolling but there are simply better ways (imo) ?!
How abouta rather cliche scene, where the younger one leaves the bathroom door slightly open the main character cant help but peek but is seen by the older one, leading to the same result ? (again i am guessing on how it goes after the snatching party, since i stopped playing)
Look. I wont kinkshame anyone. There are simply a lot of fetishes I dont get and that is fine. But can someone explain to me what the "Retarded Main Character wants to fap to stolen underwear" thing is all about ?
I guess its supposed to get the ball rolling but there are simply better ways (imo) ?!
How abouta rather cliche scene, where the younger one leaves the bathroom door slightly open the main character cant help but peek but is seen by the older one, leading to the same result ? (again i am guessing on how it goes after the snatching party, since i stopped playing)
That's already in there mate. I can see some of your points, but the intro to such games are always hard. You just have to power through it. Day two is in my opinion faaaaar better, and it seems the quality has picked up a lot. Recommend trying it out.
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Yeah I'm aware the MC's decisions come off as quite stupid. I'm actually in the process of remaking day one , and spreading it out over the course of a few days with timeskips so his actions seem more reasonable.
There are saves in the main post from the start of day two, if you want to skip it entirely.
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One of the advantages of setting the game in a magical and super-fetishistic world is that most players will hold a much higher suspension of disbelieve than in a realistic one. Therefore, I don't mind that much about seeing several cliches in the beginning or the MC being somewhat of a simpleton. I actually really enjoyed the game so far as it is.
Having said that and considering you are in the process of redoing the first day, I'd try to lay out the main paths of the game in a way that the player can easily identify and choose them accordingly. Not knowing what actions or punishments trigger certain kink-paths (ABDL, sissification, etc.) may lead to frustration for both those that don't like them and those that want to pursue them. Being surprised by the story is a good thing, being surprised about what path you find yourself in, not so much.
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Yeah a magic system is forgiving for some things, but I would still like the characters to be believable.
That's a good point. I'll add notices to certain decisions hinting at the fetishes associated with them.
Pretty interesting to see some fetishes that aren't that present in general. The art style is somewhat unique and has a surprising amount of animations. Pretty cool! Having the roomate deviate from the classic 10/10 bombshell is also a nice touch. In the long run I do think it's nice to have that changed hairstyle. The "tomboyish" nature made it a bit much for my taste.
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Yeah I personally don't like when every character in a game looks like either a supermodel or a pornstar. It kind of takes me out of things.
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Nice game! More Femdom is always welcome. One thing, though... despite the option to choose relation of the characters, they are still referred as 'mother', 'sister' and 'brother' in some places. Also, maybe there should be an option to define the relationship between 'mom' and Iris because it might not be the same as relationship between 'mom' and MC (e.g. you make 'mom' your aunt and Iris your cousin, but they would be mother and daughter). Finally, the word 'landlord' has a distinct feminine form, which is 'landlady', just telling 
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Do you remember which areas it uses the wrong name?Nice game! More Femdom is always welcome. One thing, though... despite the option to choose relation of the characters, they are still referred as 'mother', 'sister' and 'brother' in some places. Also, maybe there should be an option to define the relationship between 'mom' and Iris because it might not be the same as relationship between 'mom' and MC (e.g. you make 'mom' your aunt and Iris your cousin, but they would be mother and daughter). Finally, the word 'landlord' has a distinct feminine form, which is 'landlady', just telling
Right, I honestly wasn't thinking too much about it. I've been really surprised by how many people want to leave it as landlord. I just defaulted to that, so patreon wouldn't get angry at me. I didn't really expect people to use it.
Being able to define different relationships for Iris and the mother would be fun, but it would involve going through every line of dialogue in the game. And that's a lot of work for not a huge payoff.
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There were like 5-6 dialog lines... but no, I do not remember by heart, I'm afraid.
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I'm sure 99% of people that say "landlord" in their posts have changed the name to "mom" in the game. I do so too.
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cool game with fun options and fetishes. i really was looking for something like this. though it was short, i really enjoyed it.
hope you make the next day faster
by the way there was a futa option in the but no matter what i couldn't find it. how could i reach the route
hope you make the next day faster
by the way there was a futa option in the but no matter what i couldn't find it. how could i reach the route
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Nah I'd rather keep it as landlord and roomate tbh.
I don't really like incest (what a surprise) so a customizable option for the relationships that worked would've been nice. It's a small thing though so I don't mind it too much.
When is the end of the current version? It at the point where Iris told me to be outside in 3 minutes but when I go to the door it keeps saying I have nothing do to outside.