Ren'Py Secret Love [v0.0.1b] [Mr. Bille Mille]

[BilleMille]

Hum... Sorry to spoil the mood but there are very concerning points I'd like to share:
- First of all for a first release there's not enough content, less than a minute of dialogue with 9 images going around (not that I mind quality over quantity, but at least don't use a happy face with a revolting tone in the dialogue, seems off)
- The renders are not very good looking and the posing could have more attention, as I said before quality over quantity is good, but there's no quality here.
- You just took the code of My Early Life for the sandbox part (Lucky that I recognized the characters from the images), and it doesn't even work properly because it's bugged.
- Some broken English from the beginning of the introduction makes me wonder if you really wanted to make a game for the pleasure and not for the money.
- Step-family and no incest patch for F95, how dare you.

Thank you for the feedback!

Since this is my first game (and I'm new to coding with Python/Ren’Py), I had no idea where to begin. I used code from My Early Life as a starting point. I’m currently revising the code to make it more original and better suited to the game.

The second update will, hopefully, include more content and renders. However, creating even nine renders takes a lot of time due to my outdated PC. I’m also learning Daz and hope my renders will improve as I gain experience. As you suggested, I’ll spend more time on posing to enhance the overall quality.

I’d also like to apologize for my English—it’s not my first language. I didn’t think the dialogue was that poorly written, but if it feels off to native speakers, I’ll make a greater effort to refine it.

Lastly, the incest patch will be included in the next update—I simply forgot about it.

And I will update my Ren'Py to get rid of that Virus detection.

 

[loqex]

Seems complicated, too many steps in this game...

 

[Belgrath19]

Start the game and it can't find image "P1OU01"? Then try to go out and it can't find image "pool".
Move around the house and it bugs out going down in the lower hallway. and after a complete loop of the house buttons stay on the screen and I can't find anyone.

I'm guessing this is something to do with Linux because running it in WINE I get the same errors so maybe capitalization in paths is wrong!

LOL I found "# Decompiled by unrpyc:

You must be registered to see the links

" in main.rpy

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Kind of a mess right now.
Poor grammar and some misspellings.
There is no prelude to what's going on. I mean, that's okay, but you need to be able to continue playing to understand the reason for the opening. It just dumps you into a freeroam with no goals.
This should have been in the development thread.

 

[CoffeeSaint]

all while his dad should have no clue about anything

is this serious?
his dada is alive?



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Godspeed with your project, BilleMille;
thanks for sharing it.

 

[no_name_742]

i haven't played, and may not touch this version, i may give it a go on a later version but i will say why, the description can describe the vast majority of games on this site and the limited amount of images doesnt help either. sorry to sound like a know-it-all but try to make your game look like it stands out rather then something generic (or be the best generic game ever made).

 

[JennaJJ]

... Thx 4 the share ...

 

[ahxjosu]

harem? jw

 

[Hairy Pussy Lover]

first where is that young boy ? second game is full of bugs ! enter one room have 1 dot and 1 arrow leave enter again in same room i have 2 arrows and 10 dots to move !

 

[cab18+]

I'm glad some of you knew what to do. I wandered aimlessly through the house with nothing to see.

 

[DIKHammer]

Image missing, game crashes on first playthrough, yeah sorry to be a dick but this needs some work

 

[Morbius]

I'm not sure who the son is supposed to be from the sample pictures... Or are they not even pictured and are overhearing conversations?

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[AlexTrem]

I can't play that one, the fucking bitch piss me off right at the start !!!