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Holy crap, make that shitty minigame skippable, completely ruins the game...
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Hey guys, I wanted to keep the mini-game as simple as possible. Unfortunately, I have some bad news — I’ve added a version where it’s skipped. I’m also testing the Android build.
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are the people saying the game is impossible for real? you just need to follow the circle for a few seconds, and you don't even have to be precise about it
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xXwankerXx
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Holy shit, what a shitshow of an update.
I bet the romance fans are sooo gonna love it and insta subscribe to support the dev after this one. Got no doubt about it.
Master-level storytelling right there. Congrats, dev.
Ranting above aside, I see you added an updated tag list too and appreciate that, but the million-dollar q here is, is there any reason why the game has to almost inevitably go down the cuck path without the player being able to counter-cuck the cucker trying to cuck him or just let the player make a different choice allowing the MC to get the girl (Fabiana, Daniella, or whoever else they want) and walk away with her afterward without having to deal with too much complicated bullshit drama, or not ??
Do we even have LIs here anymore, or is the game turning into one big full-blown cuck fest, where the MC's the only idiot not getting any pussy if the other dudes don't want it ??
It's in your best interest to be completely honest and transparent about the direction you want your story to head into now than to make promises you can't keep and later wonder why you don't get more subscribers like others devs do and why most reviews are negative.
I bet the romance fans are sooo gonna love it and insta subscribe to support the dev after this one. Got no doubt about it.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content.
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Master-level storytelling right there. Congrats, dev.
Full disclosure time now so everyone can decide if they stick around for more content in the next updates or delete the game, wish you the best and move on. Trust me, it's the best option in the long run.
Ranting above aside, I see you added an updated tag list too and appreciate that, but the million-dollar q here is, is there any reason why the game has to almost inevitably go down the cuck path without the player being able to counter-cuck the cucker trying to cuck him or just let the player make a different choice allowing the MC to get the girl (Fabiana, Daniella, or whoever else they want) and walk away with her afterward without having to deal with too much complicated bullshit drama, or not ??
Do we even have LIs here anymore, or is the game turning into one big full-blown cuck fest, where the MC's the only idiot not getting any pussy if the other dudes don't want it ??
It's in your best interest to be completely honest and transparent about the direction you want your story to head into now than to make promises you can't keep and later wonder why you don't get more subscribers like others devs do and why most reviews are negative.
It looks like the story itself is about to go to shit too in the next few updates. That one's just a minor, easily-fixable minus.
Why add mini games if there not even an explenation on what to do, just want to surf, YES, then see a wave, timer and green dot that goes like crazy over the map, but not sure what to do. Don't add mini games without tutorial or explenation on what to do.
Edit: this mini game start pissing me off as it an endless loop of tries and can't skip and don't really know what to do
Edit: this mini game start pissing me off as it an endless loop of tries and can't skip and don't really know what to do
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why is the text the same color as the background? Does the dev not understand that AVN's require *reading*?
Edit: Also, what is this?
It's not a "Choice", because that would imply multiple options. So.... what are we doing here, dev? Just a check to make certain I didn't have a stroke while reading your AVN? Like, a wellness check? Or is this to pretend you're not making a kinetic novel, because you have moments in the story where I have to click to confirm the *sole, single option* provided?
Edit: Also, what is this?
It's not a "Choice", because that would imply multiple options. So.... what are we doing here, dev? Just a check to make certain I didn't have a stroke while reading your AVN? Like, a wellness check? Or is this to pretend you're not making a kinetic novel, because you have moments in the story where I have to click to confirm the *sole, single option* provided?
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I came to praise the quality of the visuals. Regarding the minigame, in my opinion the slider moves very quickly, unless, of course, the moment is staged. I wouldn’t even mind going through it, but... This supersonic ball.
By the way, something strange happens to the game window if you try to save during the animation. It... hangs(?), not an animation, but a window, even the cursor disappears from it, along with the credits.
By the way, something strange happens to the game window if you try to save during the animation. It... hangs(?), not an animation, but a window, even the cursor disappears from it, along with the credits.
Okay, tried the version where can skip the mini game, but not sure what to think about it. VN feels to much like rushed. Only 1 day in Brazil and Fab is already your gf, you rent a room at her place, but some other guy ask rent on them, a mini game that can't be played as no real explanation. Then you in a club getting questions geussing will lead to ntr or so. I fear this vn is going nowhere, the story is non excistent and rushed mostly. I don't have high hopes of this one, will try again in future but at state it is now, doesn't promise anything good.
Hey im going to play every game that has an AI art style based on Melkor Mancin, im not that picky!
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At the risk of being being offensive (because you have a disability or something), how on earth did you do the game 20 times and not complete it? I had to try to fail to not complete it.
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Oh wow, this went down quickly.
From the hype this game got on the first two pages down to the rant on the last two ones.
Luckily for me, those last two pages piqued my interest and I'm definitely gonna put this on my list
From the hype this game got on the first two pages down to the rant on the last two ones.
Luckily for me, those last two pages piqued my interest and I'm definitely gonna put this on my list
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Thanks for the feedback, I understand the criticism. Dani's route isn't mandatory, and everything there is intentional the MC isn't a perfect hero, choices have consequences. I want to explore these themes in future updates. Those who prefer a safer romance will also have route options to follow.Holy shit, what a shitshow of an update.
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Master-level storytelling right there. Congrats, dev.
Full disclosure time now so everyone can decide if they stick around for more content in the next updates or delete the game, wish you the best and move on. Trust me, it's the best option in the long run.
Ranting above aside, I see you added an updated tag list too and appreciate that, but the million-dollar q here is, is there any reason why the game has to almost inevitably go down the cuck path without the player being able to counter-cuck the cucker trying to cuck him or just let the player make a different choice allowing the MC to get the girl (Fabiana, Daniella, or whoever else they want) and walk away with her afterward without having to deal with too much complicated bullshit drama, or not ??
Do we even have LIs here anymore, or is the game turning into one big full-blown cuck fest, where the MC's the only idiot not getting any pussy if the other dudes don't want it ??
It's in your best interest to be completely honest and transparent about the direction you want your story to head into now than to make promises you can't keep and later wonder why you don't get more subscribers like others devs do and why most reviews are negative.
It looks like the story itself is about to go to shit too in the next few updates. That one's just a minor, easily-fixable minus.
If you want the game centered towards the ntr route, it's best to do it now and clarify it. Be honest with what you want, don't let yourself be influenced on your vision of the game, its for your own enjoyment in development and story telling..trust me on this, best to stick to your vision because your happiness is most important of all in this context. You'll save yourself incessant whining in the future if you nip it in the bud fast. You haven't made any promises, so you're in the clear towards anyone with nuance due to no one being able to call you out on that. And don't be too hurt over criticisms over your writing talent, your writing talent is fine...it's just that people get heated and emotional with ntr regardless of writing talent. there's such thing as slow burn and fast burn games.
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Yeah, that's too rushed to even make sense making the MC sound like a clingy dumbass. There's a difference between him having a crush on Fabiana and/or her momma too, understandably why so (love Brazilian women and latinas in general myself, no judgement from me on this topic
), BUT as much as a I like her playful teasing, bubbly personality and attractive body, Faby is NOT GF material, not yet at least... things might change eventually, if the devs wants them to. Whenever I hear IRL how a woman likes to be a party girl and do "fun" stuff, especially when going to places like Dubai or Miami, it's an instant red flag that makes it very hard for me to consider her a serious long-term romantic option, for obvious reasons, I'd say... won't say no to some casual dating and fucking, if the spark is there tho. Same goes for a pixelated girl like Faby.
Now, we have two random dickheads popping up trying to ruin things for the MC. Exactly how this is gonna unfold remains to be seen in the next updates. Gonna stay skeptical for now and hope for the best.
Sorry if my criticism sounded too harsh. Sure, there's good and bad things in the story, but the most important one is that it's still good enough to slowly but surely get ppl engaged in praising or criticizing certain things or events unfolding there... that's always a good start for a new dev. How you want to continue from here on out is your decision to make.
Don't feel forced or bullied into having to write it in a way you don't want to, that wasn't the main point of the criticism in my previous reply. The thing I was trying to point out is that, as a romance/netori fan myself, after all the development in the first two updates, that scene left a sour taste in my mouth, more so since it came outta nowhere... can't say it wasn't a lil bit funny too tho, given the circumstances.
So, the MC, a complete stranger in a big city like Rio, not even knowing how to speak a word in Portuguese finding himself get cucked or mentally cucked
like that out of the blue, when he thought he'd score some pussy or at least get a BJ from Daniella in that alley, sounds kinda funny and real weird, if you think about it, but other players might have a big problem with the way it happened and it was written making them instantly delete the game and ignore the thread.So, the question still stands... is Daniella a potential romantic or fuck buddy option for the MC, or is she just some sort of a trigger to get the player on the NTR path ?? Again, not trying to tell you how to run the show, just asking some ontopic questions and hoping to get honest answers to them, cuz I don't think I'm the only one who wants to make the MC clap her cheeks real good and fuck some respect into her disrespectful big ass.
Not entirely yet, but the hints are already there. Question is, how far is the dev willing to go with it, seeing in his reply how there's supposed to be romance in the story too.
Only thing I think they're 'forced', to a degree, to do as devs is to give us all a heads-up on certain make-or-break situations or aspects of the story, like the bar and alley scenes with Daniella. It's all I'm asking for so ppl can decide if the stay for more or not. Hope the dev agrees.
