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Would you like to see a "Madison Love route" in the game? (Just an enquiry)


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ArmoredCascade

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Sep 27, 2018
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1685733768362.png i dont even know what the hell is going on in this story its jumping all over the place now her and Selina are acting like MC doesnt have a mom
 

7empest5teele

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Dec 23, 2019
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OH, Jesus fcking Murphy!

Hey bro, how are you bro, I am fine bro, how are you doing bro, Bro I am doing cool bro, how is your sis bro, bro she is alright bro, same as my mom bro, BRO? Bro!

And the NEXT full fcking conversation;
HEY Baby, how are you baby, I missed you, baby, oh I missed you too baby, how is everything baby, why haven't you called me baby, OH baby I am sorry baby I was sick baby, I hope you understand baby, OH baby I am so glad you are ok Baby, Oh BABY I am so happy to hear that baby. so how are you baby, I am well baby Mom is here baby, you know how she is baby, Baby I know, I know baby, alright baby talk to you soon baby. you too baby, love you baby, love you TOO baby, aaaww baby.

I am going to go out on a limb here, but in the modern English language, you can actually use their NAMES, instead of stupid titles, I KNOW right, thats just CRAAAAZY!

Using not only a title but a nickname in EVERY SENTENCE is also self-deprecating and self-defeating since it doesn't NEED to be added every 3rd word!!
Try limiting it to every 4th paragraph maybe, or even HEY not at all, since you can (now I know this is crazy but work with me here) you can even SWITCH things up, say their actual fucking NAME once in a while, and the nickname others while STILL limiting them to about 10% of what you are doing NOW!

But thats just MY opinion!
 
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krezi

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Jun 18, 2021
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Cant get it to work, just get stuck st loading screen.anyone know how to fix it? Using android
 

7empest5teele

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Dec 23, 2019
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The dialog was...disturbing in many places but the renders were TOP NOTCH!
The animation flowed seamlessly in every scene.
Wow, I LOVE the Virtual novel that allowed direction for SO many branches in the story, rather than the usual Kinetic novel where its story is linear and set.
I went through this several times to view each and every choice and direction...and its truly remarkable!
The dialog seemed to really curb to a sane level of storytelling, giving it a real immersive feel, rather than near the beginning where the dialog seemed like it was written by a drunken lobster.

I was going to drop this or skip through all of the dialog, yet I am glad I soldiered on through to come out of the swamp into such a paradise, I truly cannot wait for the next update, and will keep this on my radar!
 

karumi56

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Oct 7, 2019
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No. You can check out the progress at
Linking to paywalled content is not very helpful.
yes .. right .. when a new update ???
is it going to be abandoned ??
Looks like the dev has been busy with the Steam release and fighting Itch.io over payment issues. Going from releases every 4-5 months to over a year since the last release is a very worrisome sign. If there isn't a release in the next couple of months, then you can probably chalk this one up to the abandoned stack.
 

Ass Fan

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It's the way the game is found, it's worrying but i still believe in an update in july maybe
 
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Requiem131

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May 19, 2021
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Did 0.12a break all previous saves? Seems like mine no longer work and, seeing as this is a game that I consider so-so, if there is no solution to the issue it'll be a quick drop for me. So, anyone had the problem? Anyone know how to solve it?
 

Snugglepuff

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Apr 27, 2017
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Did 0.12a break all previous saves? Seems like mine no longer work and, seeing as this is a game that I consider so-so, if there is no solution to the issue it'll be a quick drop for me. So, anyone had the problem? Anyone know how to solve it?
Nope. 0.11b did.
Guess you already "dropped" this game if you haven't played since before then...
 

Requiem131

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May 19, 2021
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No, I hadn't, I had actually noted as played version 0.11d and the broken saves should be from that version. Guess they got corrupted or something anyway. Thanks Snugglepuff :)
 
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