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- May 17, 2018
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Honestly I started the game, saw the MC complain about a blowjob and immediately closed it. But after seeing someone call it twisted, I'll just have to give it another go wont I.
- Sep 6, 2018
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Here's my review of the game (version 0.4)
Story - One of the weird, dark mysteries peppered with incest which, frankly for my taste is too dark/weird. It is nice to have 50-60% cocoa in dark chocolate, 80% you could chew paracetamol or eat so much cocoa won't make a difference. That's the feeling I had with the way incest is handled with MC and his mom. This relationship has been exploited in almost all of the games on F95zone but this one takes it a bit too far.
The other characters are thrown at your face without proper introductions and you can't figure out even until the end what role each character plays in the story or subplot. Speaking of which, the subplots are intertwined and don't seem to lead to one solid direction, everything criss-crosses everything.
Points - 1/5
UI - Very poor rendering and for the life of me, couldn't understand the need to use a custom mouse pointer in a Ren'Py game. Does anyone care about the mouse pointer or what the game offers for its intended purpose? The female form is depicted with very strong and bold features, over compensating for the expectations of the players i.e. boobs so big the person may stoop under their weight. I know most games do that but this is the worst of the crop. Some characters like the police officer is just one black mannequin with a voice, seriously?? The light rendering is inconsistent, especially in the ending of this version where you practically don't see anything. Even the MC's house looks like a mansion for a father whose job is clearly not mentioned as magnanimous.
Points - 2/5
i-Events - The most important part for which you might download the game. Sometimes rushed and sometimes very out of place in a subplot, it is as if all females are for the MC's taking without any resistance, conflict or difference. All because the characters are under the lust effect of the devil but the effect is like a light switch going on/off. Dreams of Desire did this to perfection, introducing the corruption/lust effect slowly into the characters and depending on the character, they responded differently. This game tries to do that at warp speed and the steam goes off quickly at many levels (go figure!)
Points - 1/5
4/15 is a real poor score. I suggest the devs focus on writing the complex layers (at least 2-3) of mystery they intend to show, in more detail and give time to develop relationships between 2-3 characters in the beginning. More characters and their dynamics can be explored later - it's not a race, it's a marathon. Dreams of Desire took 12 episodes and yet all in the forum like the game, making it a cult classic of the genre. Good luck.
Story - One of the weird, dark mysteries peppered with incest which, frankly for my taste is too dark/weird. It is nice to have 50-60% cocoa in dark chocolate, 80% you could chew paracetamol or eat so much cocoa won't make a difference. That's the feeling I had with the way incest is handled with MC and his mom. This relationship has been exploited in almost all of the games on F95zone but this one takes it a bit too far.
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Points - 1/5
UI - Very poor rendering and for the life of me, couldn't understand the need to use a custom mouse pointer in a Ren'Py game. Does anyone care about the mouse pointer or what the game offers for its intended purpose? The female form is depicted with very strong and bold features, over compensating for the expectations of the players i.e. boobs so big the person may stoop under their weight. I know most games do that but this is the worst of the crop. Some characters like the police officer is just one black mannequin with a voice, seriously?? The light rendering is inconsistent, especially in the ending of this version where you practically don't see anything. Even the MC's house looks like a mansion for a father whose job is clearly not mentioned as magnanimous.
Points - 2/5
i-Events - The most important part for which you might download the game. Sometimes rushed and sometimes very out of place in a subplot, it is as if all females are for the MC's taking without any resistance, conflict or difference. All because the characters are under the lust effect of the devil but the effect is like a light switch going on/off. Dreams of Desire did this to perfection, introducing the corruption/lust effect slowly into the characters and depending on the character, they responded differently. This game tries to do that at warp speed and the steam goes off quickly at many levels (go figure!)
Points - 1/5
4/15 is a real poor score. I suggest the devs focus on writing the complex layers (at least 2-3) of mystery they intend to show, in more detail and give time to develop relationships between 2-3 characters in the beginning. More characters and their dynamics can be explored later - it's not a race, it's a marathon. Dreams of Desire took 12 episodes and yet all in the forum like the game, making it a cult classic of the genre. Good luck.
So let me get this straight the main aim/plot of the game is to Fuck ur way through a lot of hot women while hopefully establishing a harem (my wish) and beat 2 hard core control freak lesbians antagonists
This game is gonna be an instant favourite for me
Keep up the good work i look forward to the next update
This game is gonna be an instant favourite for me
Keep up the good work i look forward to the next update
- Apr 21, 2017
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I love how the name of the game has nothing to do with the actual game whatsoever, well there is a devil but nobody is making a move on her. No seduction at all, just magic (lazy writing) and poof, everyone is fucking. But i guess thats how it goes, we can't have incest and good story in one game, nu-uh. Shame.
I really don't want to bother myself by explaining the same thing over and over again.
There are pre-determined events that this game is going through now. So like it or not, most of them will be shoved onto your face.
I can't feed everyone the same thing if each and every one of you have different taste in incest.
Now my renders are being judged as very poor, a simple custom mouse pointer is questioned, female bodies are being judged as the worst of the crop. If you can't practically see the last scene then it's not my problem that you have a bad eye sight.
Devil hasn't even gotten her proper intro. Yet you already want me to seduce her while there are games where you can't even dick a girl after 20 freaking updates. I don't like milking for money. Veronica is one of the favorite girls here. I could have gone 10 updates more without the last scene. I still didn't.
This comparison with DOD is so stupid.
Now someone wants me to explain a sex scene when all of them are pov scenes. Like they want me to narrate how Mc's dick slowly touches the clit of Veronica's wet pussy and her whole body shivers for a moment.
Oh god.
There are pre-determined events that this game is going through now. So like it or not, most of them will be shoved onto your face.
I can't feed everyone the same thing if each and every one of you have different taste in incest.
Now my renders are being judged as very poor, a simple custom mouse pointer is questioned, female bodies are being judged as the worst of the crop. If you can't practically see the last scene then it's not my problem that you have a bad eye sight.
Devil hasn't even gotten her proper intro. Yet you already want me to seduce her while there are games where you can't even dick a girl after 20 freaking updates. I don't like milking for money. Veronica is one of the favorite girls here. I could have gone 10 updates more without the last scene. I still didn't.
This comparison with DOD is so stupid.
Now someone wants me to explain a sex scene when all of them are pov scenes. Like they want me to narrate how Mc's dick slowly touches the clit of Veronica's wet pussy and her whole body shivers for a moment.
Oh god.
- Jun 3, 2018
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Deaf, sometimes it's better don't follow what is here, to many guys with various kinks, for me your game is good, sometimes the quicker answer isn't the good one, and for Devil's sake gibe us more Ella and Mads
- Sep 6, 2018
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Instead of blaming your audience about their personal tastes, why not develop something that is so well thought out, it won't give them a chance to complain? Seems you can't take a critic and are a teen blaming everyone's eye-sight for a dimly lit sex scene. Total dick move! I'm not the only one who had that issue many others who played had it, so instead of whining about it why not generate better lighting in your scene?
I don't care if you get to have sex with the devil or not unless it is relevant for the story. No one asked you to rush for hardcore scenes in your first 4 updates mate, unless the story demanded it. One could directly watch online porn for fapping rather than tap their mouse to see animated characters going at it. The difference -- the story and the player's involvement.
Have you even played DoD? If not you're the one who's displaying the stupidity. The comparison with DoD is apt because that game contained a mystic character that makes the MC's lust for the female characters stronger. As I said previously, the lust effect in your game is like an on/off light switch and the exact effect in DoD took a while depending on the character's persona. Had your game missing the mystic element, I'd have compared it against some similar other game.
I just didn't criticise your game for sake of criticising, I won't gain anything from that. Rather you should listen to the feedback of your audience and take on board what you can in a reasonable manner. That's the only way you'd succeed in making your game popular and gain patrons. Good luck!
- May 17, 2018
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It’s your game and ultimately all of choices for it come down to your own vision.
A certain amount of criticism is to be expected but take it as encouragement if it’s genuinely going to help the end result. You get to decide that and don’t get caught up in too many discussions as it may be counter productive. It’s your output and it has to meet your ambitions first.
It’s important to remember that if people didn’t like it there wouldn’t be any discussion at all. Looking forward to the next update when it lands.
Yes I am a 14 years old TEEN and CAN'T take criticism. You are certainly very active on this forum and know what goes on here and make reviews while playing the game thoroughly.
But somehow you've missed this
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You have also noticed how everyone has faced the same issue but somehow missed this
I didn't blame everyone's eye sight. Don't twist my words. I have questioned YOUR eye sight because you've said that "you can't practically see anything" despite the fact that the scene has fair amount of light to make it a night scene with dim light on
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I've even started re-doing this whole scene right after the first complain dropped
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But hey! I can't take criticism and made it so far without listening to anyone here. That's why I didn't redo half of the 0.2 update when people started complaining.
I have put all the hardcore scenes there because they serve the purpose of telling the story.
Comparing this game with DOD is stupidity because we aren't the same. Just because there's a mystic being doesn't mean we have to go the same route. I have my own way of telling story.
I welcome every bit of feedback but there's a fine line between doing fair criticism and criticizing for the sake of it.
Complaining about a simple pointer, calling the girls worst of the crop whereas there are games with girls double the size.
And then Mc's house looks like a mansion. Oh well that's a problem as well. As if people can't be rich. I have to mention the job of father before making them live in a mansion. Point noted.
- May 2, 2017
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All the girls in this game look great
I do not understand who they may not like... The last scene was beautiful and everything was more or less visible, but since this scene was expected by many, I think the best lighting of this scene would be much nicer. And I just can't say anything bad, this update was good.Criticism will always be, no matter how good the game would be, people are always looking for problems. Well, on the other hand it's good, people are beginning to pay more attention to your game.
P.S. and re-doing render looks just what need 10 out of 10
- May 10, 2018
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i like your renders..the story is fine..my only gripe you have seen being the roaming/room lag..which others have pointed out is due to the custom cursor...its your game Dev..do it your way...we are all freeloading complainers..LOL...its our duty to be annoying pains in the ass but hey...can ya give those of us with issues a standard cursor?
but hey...can ya give those of us with issues a standard cursor? 
- Aug 12, 2018
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The negativity here makes DD sad...
- Sep 29, 2017
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Here's kukothemadhatter with aun update from the bitchoftheyear 2018 awards.
In a final rush before the deadline,with the subtlety of a t-rex on steroids, Maddison leaves the competition behind and claims the title. May the regining bitch have everything stipped and taken from her, may her mind be broken and her reign and daughters filled with MC's dick.
happy new year fellow pervs
In a final rush before the deadline,with the subtlety of a t-rex on steroids, Maddison leaves the competition behind and claims the title. May the regining bitch have everything stipped and taken from her, may her mind be broken and her reign and daughters filled with MC's dick.
happy new year fellow pervs
I have to ask, how do the tags work on this site? I'm asking because this game has a harem tag but there is nothing harem about this game just because the MC sleeps with a lot of different women does not mean it's a harem. Also I'm a little surprised by how many people are ok with a wimpy MC and the fact he seems ok with all the sloppy seconds he seems to be getting in this story. I mean none of the girls care for him in any way without having their lust manipulated to even have an interest in him sexually at least. I also hate the fact that not a single women in this story so far has any loyalty to the MC I mean this dude has to fight some supernatural BS and he doesn't even have anyone he can trust to have his back and when he finds out his GF was cheating on him he will either be a wimp and forgive her or he will lose his shit because he will finally realize he is all alone in this fucked up situation (well that is how he acts now at the very least).
- Apr 21, 2017
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The best part was when our aunt tells us what the fuck is going on, then she says:
-"Moving to USA, not my problem anymore, seeeeeya!!"
And then she just bolts as if the Devil would have a problem getting a Green Card or some shit, brilliant storytelling.