Played it, enjoyed it. You expanded on the story lore, left the door open for new races to show up, even the coach had a moment to shine. Sera is getting a little more hands on, which is delightful.
About the biggest glaring misstep is it really felt like a good opportunity to have the roomie dress Sera up in lingerie too, even if she's only doing camera work. Ease her in to being a model, bit by bit and all that.
Speaking of bits; the double dildo. Yes, Sera has a fantastic ass. But this is a missed opportunity by far. Plus side; it's not like we can't course correct!
*Slaps a slightly sticky flow sheet on the metaphorical table*
1. According to the lore, Elves and nonhumans have lingering magic.
2. Sera has somehow bonded with a magical manifestation/being that has BOTH bits, and is proving a potent influence on her.
3. Sera is very curious at just how good sex is, especially if you saw the roomie getting banged by the manwhore bf. To the point that it is more than a little distracting and consuming her thoughts.
4. Combine the two threads! Magic and curiosity/envy about how good vaginal penetration would feel (giving OR receiving), Sera is masturbating. Possibly in the shower, where the dildo was discarded to clean it or something. Desires go wild, boom, Sera has throbbing lady bits underneath her generous meat miracle, which she immediately stuffs full of plastic dong, experiencing her biggest orgasm yet.
4A. Spicy alternative: Our favorite goth hears the shuffling and moaning;finds a trembling and needy Sera on the edge but can't quite get over it. Blank stare, heaving bosom, slightly drooling, the works. Goth takes care of the dong while Sera bounces on the dildo, and now she gets to orgasm from both sexy bits at the same time.
Cause 'tis *magic* and transformation: you could even have her decided to keep it the way it is or not. Or the glorious new vag can fade away for another guest appearance at another time.
5. Now we can have that double stuffed double dildo from a front angle penetrating both flowers with them both scissoring, for great justice. This has the extra oomph of Sera either wanking or lifting her heavy sack, revealing the ladybits underneath for the grand and lucrative futa reveal.
6. Also this means for a story of epilogue Sera can get others pregnant, but also end up pregnant too if the player desires it.
The winning is real.