Ren'Py Serenia [v1.0c] [OffWhite Studios]

[ChubbyFatBoy]

That balance is definitely one of the issues and early Anno scenes would've greatly lessened the issue.
Anno is also, as intended, kind of a set character and IMO it's not what most people expect in sandboxes. Usually people prefer having a bunch of options to dicate the character/what they would do in the situation.

Like the night Tavern scene would usually have stuff like a very player-centric option where the player basically takes the character for himself before anything happens, and if he does let her go to the alley, he'd have futher options like helping her disguise that she did that, blackmailing her into paying him, or even fucking him, or lying and saying he won't tell, then immediately telling her when they get back. Obviously with how Anno and his relationships are written this has no way of working, but that IS the general expectation of sandbox.

I actually do like Anno's character and agree that most of the stuff is not "by definition" NTR, but it does feel like it wouldn't take much to shift it in that direction as others pointed out.

Ultimately I think Chapter 2-3 will rectify the issues, since Anno will be an actual active initiator, but it's a shame Chapter 1 is going to filter a lot of people out of it.

I have to agree about the balance. Like good lord it was just a bunch of rape and voyeurism back to back. And some of it was really overindulgent. Like the 1st scene for example just kept going.

But thinking about the events I saw. We have rape, voyeur, voyeur, rape, rapeish? with the frog and tadpole thing. Which honestly almost made me clock out right then. Like how it went down was just weird and gross. Though I suppose it was supposed to be funny or something. Then voyeur if you clicked on the side of the waterfall? or somewhere around the place to see those two again. Then back to rape. Now I know some people into it. But I don't know if the birth thing was supposed to be taken that way . But imma go half voyeur to cover my basis because I'm inclusive like that. And then after all that. I managed to get a scene involving MC!.... where we finger blast the rape deer..... well alrighty then.

Then I proceeded to just unlock the gallery to see what else there was. Though the MC does get a morsel of action. Mostly just more of the same. Some court mandated early game snu snu could've done wonders. I mean even if later chapters were to bring things around. That was uh.... definitely an intro to a game alright.

 

[OffWhite Studios]

I have to agree about the balance. Like good lord it was just a bunch of rape and voyeurism back to back. And some of it was really overindulgent. Like the 1st scene for example just kept going.

But thinking about the events I saw. We have rape, voyeur, voyeur, rape, rapeish? with the frog and tadpole thing. Which honestly almost made me clock out right then. Like how it went down was just weird and gross. Though I suppose it was supposed to be funny or something. Then voyeur if you clicked on the side of the waterfall? or somewhere around the place to see those two again. Then back to rape. Now I know some people into it. But I don't know if the birth thing was supposed to be taken that way . But imma go half voyeur to cover my basis because I'm inclusive like that. And then after all that. I managed to get a scene involving MC!.... where we finger blast the rape deer..... well alrighty then.

Then I proceeded to just unlock the gallery to see what else there was. Though the MC does get a morsel of action. Mostly just more of the same. Some court mandated early game snu snu could've done wonders. I mean even if later chapters were to bring things around. That was uh.... definitely an intro to a game alright.

Thanks for sharing your feedback. Scene order is something I did want to change but since so many events are woven together, it became a really heavy lift to change without breaking things and I had to live with keeping them as they appear.

I agree the non-con comes at you hard and fast right at the start (no pun intended). I was worried it would turn a lot of people off, but then I figured - if you don’t like the first scene, there is a good chance you won’t like the following scenes.

In the end, I thought it may be good for players to filter out there early, and that they might appreciate knowing the tone of the game up front and not waste time or feeling like they got bait and switched.

I also added some notes on the main post regarding themes and put in some thumbnails which show those scenes.

Chapter 2 will have much more MC action, but probably keep a similar tone. It’s not going to be a dating sim, etc.

Edit - I’ll also add I made the early scenes like 2 years ago and are not as well done as I’d like. The final scene of Chapter 1 is one I made recently and is a better reflection of how I’d do a scene today with my current skill level. (E.g. Many animations but quicker transitions, does not jump right into sex, more set up, etc)

 

[OffWhite Studios]

By the way — if anyone wants to share their opinion on what they’d like to see in Chapter 2, I’ve put up a few polls on my Patreon.

The game itself and the Pateron will stay 100% free — I’m not charging for it. (It’s just for those who want to support and follow)

The Patreon is just where I’m collecting votes and feedback in one place. Check it out if you like. I’ll have polls on things like game content, girls to see more of, etc.

If you’d like to vote, that’s the best spot:

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[Grimreaper24]

So going to stop bothering you dev but I have three questions the first question is I talked to the ghost dude and he said something about a ring in a crack but I can't find it and second question is how to find shock spell and thirdly on the quest I have one that asked to hunt with orcs but I didn't talk to any of them

 

[TPX/Kuro]

By the way — if anyone wants to share their opinion on what they’d like to see in Chapter 2, I’ve put up a few polls on my Patreon.

The game itself and the Pateron will stay 100% free — I’m not charging for it. (It’s just for those who want to support and follow)

The Patreon is just where I’m collecting votes and feedback in one place. Check it out if you like. I’ll have polls on things like game content, girls to see more of, etc.

If you’d like to vote, that’s the best spot:

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He's a Saint...

 

[OffWhite Studios]

So going to stop bothering you dev but I have three questions the first question is I talked to the ghost dude and he said something about a ring in a crack but I can't find it and second question is how to find shock spell and thirdly on the quest I have one that asked to hunt with orcs but I didn't talk to any of them

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The good news is nothing is broken in your game, you just need to visit the Orc camp and you will be back on track. The quests will clear themselves. I apologize it was just confusing and inconsistent to have the quest trigger before meeting the Orcs.

This is the initial release so some minor bugs remain - There are hundreds of event triggers in the game as well, so if you spot anything odd please share! I'm trying to tighten it up as much as possible.

 

[PirahnaMetroid]

I have a quest about confronting a pixie at her tree, but I haven't come across any pixie. Also, when Fawn was captured by goblins, it assumed I'd met the pixie and said she lied about something. Can anyone help me with this?

 

[DizZert]

looking for

 

[OffWhite Studios]

I have a quest about confronting a pixie at her tree, but I haven't come across any pixie. Also, when Fawn was captured by goblins, it assumed I'd met the pixie and said she lied about something. Can anyone help me with this?

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[OffWhite Studios]

Hotfix v1.0c

• Fixed some quest triggers that were activating at incorrect times
• Corrected minor typos and text errors
• Removed some dialog menu choices that did not meaningfully change scene outcomes
• Reworked the opening dialogue of the Rabbit scene
• Pixie & Fawn scene now auto-plays when entering the Enchanted Forest for the first time.

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[DragonkingKyo]

Sorry you are having trouble with it here is how it works:

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so you can't stop the Fawn from being raped?

 

[OffWhite Studios]

so you can't stop the Fawn from being raped?

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[Hefiron]

I'd like to know if I locked myself or if I'm missing something.

So, after climbing down the trap hole near the door, I explored all of the zones, killed all the enemies and still can't get back to the main dungeon.

In the zone with three branches, the middle one with the minotaur girl says to search for another way but I can't seem to find this. Any help appreciated.

 

[OffWhite Studios]

I'd like to know if I locked myself or if I'm missing something.

So, after climbing down the trap hole near the door, I explored all of the zones, killed all the enemies and still can't get back to the main dungeon.

In the zone with three branches, the middle one with the minotaur girl says to search for another way but I can't seem to find this. Any help appreciated.

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[krinekron]

By the way — if anyone wants to share their opinion on what they’d like to see in Chapter 2, I’ve put up a few polls on my Patreon.

some more creative plots like a scenes with hot slime girl(but not scene when she have big belly and frog fuck her mouth, because she fat and ugly in this scene) and statue girl...i very like game

 

[rockerdark665]

+1

 

[th3n]

ntr bait game, don't know why devs do this shit and don't tag these type of game properly. People who read this and don't like ntr don't play this, is the same shit with extra steps to avoid netorare tag.

 

[Hefiron]

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Thanks for the response, how do I teleport? There's no enemies left to die in combat.

Before diving down there, I already helped Gup but haven't obtained the key from the mushroom.

 

[KurodaYuki]

just downloaded 1.0c but still dont know what to do to progress.
not sure what cell or what creature is referred to and the priestess doesnt do anything.


tldr: I'm lost and dont know what corner i have yet to look into or backtrack.

 

[KurodaYuki]

Thanks for the response, how do I teleport? There's no enemies left to die in combat.

Before diving down there, I already helped Gup but haven't obtained the key from the mushroom.

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