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On day 15 he had multiple girls having went through the stages of no sexual activity to a strong craving for it over the past 15 days. The 14th day, Mia's sexual frustration was getting really bad. At the end of the 15'th day, it skips to the 42th day. Mia has still not ascended at this point, she is a neko and a nympho who need I remind you, was already sexually frustrated in Serenity where sexual desire is amplified and she probably had to see the mc every now and then throughout those days.

Like WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK? This is a huge leap in time and builds the story up as if the mc was intentionally driving Mia insane! She is suppose to be the nympho here yet she has to wait!
Fucking why, dev!? You really couldn't have put that scene BEFORE the time skip?

Also please for the love of god fix your taste in sex position! It's like more than half the scenes in the game are doggy style, the one position I hate the most! Not to mention the obsession with pubic hair which is also unpleasant. Like yeah, I'm here for the story and those scenes are secondary but still, pretty annoying.

Honestly the doggy style situation is so bad, you should just slap a warning note before people download it or something because this seems like a borderline obsession. You kill the scene instantly for anyone who likes breasts, faces and the front and who don't like asses. Like my mind cannot comprehend this.

Like yeah, I enjoyed the story somewhat. Sat through it all in one go, morning to night, it was only here at the end with the time skip that I felt uneasy enough to comment.

Wow... I wasn't even exaggerating when I said there are more than half doggy style. Okay so in truth, 7 out of the 13 gallery entries include a from behind scene. The more you know. No wonder if felt like half the scenes were doggy style, because in a way, they were
 
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On day 15 he had multiple girls having went through the stages of no sexual activity to a strong craving for it over the past 15 days. The 14th day, Mia's sexual frustration was getting really bad. At the end of the 15'th day, it skips to the 42th day. Mia has still not ascended at this point, she is a neko and a nympho who need I remind you, was already sexually frustrated in Serenity where sexual desire is amplified and she probably had to see the mc every now and then throughout those days.

Like WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK? This is a huge leap in time and builds the story up as if the mc was intentionally driving Mia insane! She is suppose to be the nympho here yet she has to wait!
Fucking why, dev!? You really couldn't have put that scene BEFORE the time skip?

Also please for the love of god fix your taste in sex position! It's like more than half the scenes in the game are doggy style, the one position I hate the most! Not to mention the obsession with pubic hair which is also unpleasant. Like yeah, I'm here for the story and those scenes are secondary but still, pretty annoying.

Honestly the doggy style situation is so bad, you should just slap a warning note before people download it or something because this seems like a borderline obsession. You kill the scene instantly for anyone who likes breasts, faces and the front and who don't like asses. Like my mind cannot comprehend this.

Like yeah, I enjoyed the story somewhat. Sat through it all in one go, morning to night, it was only here at the end with the time skip that I felt uneasy enough to comment.

Wow... I wasn't even exaggerating when I said there are more than half doggy style. Okay so in truth, 7 out of the 13 gallery entries include a from behind scene. The more you know. No wonder if felt like half the scenes were doggy style, because in a way, they were
Hey man... easy now. You're going to blow a blood vessel getting that worked up! Do I need to get a medic in here? Seriously though, what I am reading is you only want sex scenes with the girls facing you. Obviously, everyone is different. To be fair, I did do a lot of doggy style scenes back then LOL. They were the easiest for me to learn from. You're getting this pissed over stuff I did 4 years ago when I first started doing this. One day, if I ever have time to, I will probably redo a lot of that first chapter. It's really rough in a lot of places. Honestly, I'm surprised that is the only things you bitched about. There is a lot more wrong with it than that. I've never been one to deny the bad writing and quick progress of chapter 1. What can I say, I was still a complete noob and doing my best. But anyway, thanks for the feedback... maybe no coffee for you for a while though ;)
 

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Hey man... easy now. You're going to blow a blood vessel getting that worked up! Do I need to get a medic in here? Seriously though, what I am reading is you only want sex scenes with the girls facing you. Obviously, everyone is different. To be fair, I did do a lot of doggy style scenes back then LOL. They were the easiest for me to learn from. You're getting this pissed over stuff I did 4 years ago when I first started doing this. One day, if I ever have time to, I will probably redo a lot of that first chapter. It's really rough in a lot of places. Honestly, I'm surprised that is the only things you bitched about. There is a lot more wrong with it than that. I've never been one to deny the bad writing and quick progress of chapter 1. What can I say, I was still a complete noob and doing my best. But anyway, thanks for the feedback... maybe no coffee for you for a while though ;)
Well I decided not to "bitch about" all the other stuff and only point out my main concerns. I always hated time skips and cliffhangers when there is a main concern needed to be covered. Eternum have done that a lot and I hate it. It feels more like a convenient tool for the developer to move the story along rather than to provide immersion and entertainment for the player.

I'm fine with some from behind scenes. It's just not the kind of position that should cover the majority of available scenes unless explicably intended to be that way. It could have been avoided from the start is what I'm saying.

And yeah, I did notice early on that they introduced a bad guy and then quickly settled the situation again way too fast which while somewhat relaxing is just generally not going to work.

I have absolutely no clue how you would fix the pubic hair thing tho... Double the images with some altered text when selecting at start? Some characters just getting rid of it?

I got issues. Also haven't played last human yet and I'm delving into the first episodes of C2 right now.

P.S fuck coffee
 

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Well I decided not to "bitch about" all the other stuff and only point out my main concerns. I always hated time skips and cliffhangers when there is a main concern needed to be covered. Eternum have done that a lot and I hate it. It feels more like a convenient tool for the developer to move the story along rather than to provide immersion and entertainment for the player.

I'm fine with some from behind scenes. It's just not the kind of position that should cover the majority of available scenes unless explicably intended to be that way. It could have been avoided from the start is what I'm saying.

And yeah, I did notice early on that they introduced a bad guy and then quickly settled the situation again way too fast which while somewhat relaxing is just generally not going to work.

I have absolutely no clue how you would fix the pubic hair thing tho... Double the images with some altered text when selecting at start? Some characters just getting rid of it?

I got issues. Also haven't played last human yet and I'm delving into the first episodes of C2 right now.

P.S fuck coffee
FWIW, not all the girls have pubic hair. You're the first person to have ever mentioned that being an issue. I cannot please everyone, but I did my best to have some with and some without. I personally like a little pubic hair, trimmed (not JUNGLE FEVER mind you). In fact, only a couple of the girls have pubic hair in both my games. Some of the things you've mentioned are mostly personal preference stuff and there is no way I can cover every personal preference there is out there (it would take me a year to do an update).

Overall, Chapter 1 was my learning era and I am still learning (I don't think we ever stop learning). As you progress, you should notice subtle improvements in my graphics and story elements, moreso with Last Human I believe. But others might say different because everyone sees this stuff in completely different ways.
 
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FWIW, not all the girls have pubic hair. You're the first person to have ever mentioned that being an issue. I cannot please everyone, but I did my best to have some with and some without. I personally like a little pubic hair, trimmed (not JUNGLE FEVER mind you). In fact, only a couple of the girls have pubic hair in both my games. Some of the things you've mentioned are mostly personal preference stuff and there is no way I can cover every personal preference there is out there (it would take me a year to do an update).

Overall, Chapter 1 was my learning era and I am still learning (I don't think we ever stop learning). As you progress, you should notice subtle improvements in my graphics and story elements, moreso with Last Human I believe. But others might say different because everyone sees this stuff in completely different ways.
I've never understood the hate for pubic hair especially in an AVN. It is the author's/developers vision and decision on how to set up his or her characters. Don't like it? Well tough shit there are a number of other novels out there that will cater to your specific kinks, preference's and need's.
 

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I've never understood the hate for pubic hair especially in an AVN. It is the author's/developers vision and decision on how to set up his or her characters. Don't like it? Well tough shit there are a number of other novels out there that will cater to your specific kinks, preference's and need's.
Jack! You've got my signature! Yay! lol I didn't think anyone used them. I REALLY need to make new ones and update mine. Those things are ancient. But I'm not good at making those things.
 
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Overall, Chapter 1 was my learning era and I am still learning (I don't think we ever stop learning). As you progress, you should notice subtle improvements in my graphics and story elements, moreso with Last Human I believe. But others might say different because everyone sees this stuff in completely different ways.
Given that One in a Lifetime and Eternum is presumably made by the same dev or team, I've seen first hand how graphics and lots of other elements improved from the start of OiaL to current end of Eternum. I'm still baffled by how those sex scene graphics are just one game apart... One thing I keep thinking about is how the dialogue for the scenes are incredibly long in Eternum compared to this game for example. It really puts more value into each individual sex scene
 
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Jack! You've got my signature! Yay! lol I didn't think anyone used them. I REALLY need to make new ones and update mine. Those things are ancient. But I'm not good at making those things.
Ha! Don't sell yourself short. I am sure it will be great. Besides one of the great things about time and repetition is learning patience to persevere.
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Given that One in a Lifetime and Eternum is presumably made by the same dev or team, I've seen first hand how graphics and lots of other elements improved from the start of OiaL to current end of Eternum. I'm still baffled by how those sex scene graphics are just one game apart... One thing I keep thinking about is how the dialogue for the scenes are incredibly long in Eternum compared to this game for example. It really puts more value into each individual sex scene
Once in a Lifetime was done using HS1. Eternum is HS2. So yeah, slight difference I guess. I am using HS2 also, but not quite on Caribdis' level. He does some great work.
 

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Once in a Lifetime was done using HS1. Eternum is HS2. So yeah, slight difference I guess. I am using HS2 also, but not quite on Caribdis' level. He does some great work.
Yeah, you can say that again.
Out of curiosity, is Ch2 meant to be longer than ch1 and by how much would you say 0.3 ch2 currently is compared to the entirety of ch1?


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Oh would you look at that. 4/4 scenes in ch2 have been from behind so far, 2 on the double date as well. When you think there is hope for redemption, it's crushed immediately. I'm quite impressed you managed to get Jasmine to grip the table during the first scene but putting her looking up at the sealing, missionary or whatever was not a possibility. You know, I kinda wish I had more insight on why these scenes are so preferable and how much time is realistically lost making something that's not a from behind or doggy style scene. You could even pose Triss there in the background watching on the second/third scene
 
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Yeah, you can say that again.
Rub it in why don't ya. I can't tell if you're sincere or just being an asshole.

Out of curiosity, is Ch2 meant to be longer than ch1 and by how much would you say 0.3 ch2 currently is compared to the entirety of ch1?
Chapter 2 will be about twice as long.
 

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People are here shitting on my bro N2 for no reason at all, this thread's become hostile.
N2TheFire Love Serenity and love Last Human, keep your amazing work, keep improving.

Also, I found out about OIAL and Eternum because of you, so thanks for that. I found out about Sylphine because of you as well, but you know... you win some you lose some (btw if you ever talk to Glacerose again, tell him to go fuck himself for me would ya)
 
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Once in a Lifetime was done using HS1. Eternum is HS2. So yeah, slight difference I guess. I am using HS2 also, but not quite on Caribdis' level. He does some great work.
Also Eternum has animators that make commissioned animations for the dev. Financial success opens doors. Especially for doing this mostly solo and part time (afaik) Serenity and Last Human are still very impressive in my opinion.

Last Human takes more time with the sexy stuff, which I also rather prefer. The lewd scene dialogues are no longer as rough as in the beginning of Serenity (those sometimes read like 80s porn script, sorry :p). But Serenity S1 could be easily compared to the beginnings of OiaLT, which was quite rough at the start, too.

I also thought that Serenity S2 did not suffer from these "first work symptoms" as much anymore, but Last Human is definitely better on that scale overall. And then of course, it highly depends on taste and some of the previous... *cough* harsh criticism on this page is on points that would not even matter to me in the slightest for example.
 
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Rub it in why don't ya. I can't tell if you're sincere or just being an asshole.
Damnit... this is why I never use the expression "you can say that again" or something similar. What I was referring to was "He does some great work."

Chapter 2 will be about twice as long.
If the current 9 available episodes do indeed exist, I'm inclined to believe this. It already feels long for being a 0.3
 
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