It's a nice game, but I would seriously hire an editor to help with text, the fact it keeps switching between second and third person even within the same sentence is confusing ("You" followed by "he" in reference to the main character, pick one and stick with it)
I like the premise though, a world where males are so rare that most small towns seem to have one or two.
Oh and if I could suggest something else, could you make it so the protagonist was away for 5 years training? He shouldn't need a tour of town to meet people if he was only away for a year. Small towns rarely change in people that much, and the fact he doesn't recognize half the girls is even weirder still since again this is the town he grew up in and the girls seem to have all been here just as long as he has. With the Noble and her guard I could accept that kid MC didn't have access to the castle, but he should know Clarine since she lives by the shore and nothing really stops him from running into her at some point in his life. So yeah extending how long he was away would really help make sense of his sense of "things changed a lot around here!", and might even help explain why he might not know someone all that well because they weren't around when he was a kid or hanged out by different areas.
All that aside, kudos to a good start, but I hope it will only get better from here.
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