Ren'Py Abandoned SexNote [v0.23.0b] [JamLiz]

[RedPillBlues]

Yes, sorry about the bad experience, actually we did the best we can, we are from Latinoamerica, so English isn't our native language, so we have to translate everything, fortunately our English is pretty decent, but maybe isn't enough, we are improving that, and the grindy nature of the game, wasn't our intention, it is actually the first public version, so we didn't know it would be that bad, of course we are fixing that immediately... Thanks to everyone for the feedback that help us a lot to make the game better...

Your English is actually better then a lot of games on this site, especially ones that don't have English as a first language. A proofreader still would be good for you to pickup though. Also you can ask a mod for the game developer badge.

 

[Kir_Laurentis]

CoperTeam, hello.

I played the game, your English is on the high, even for me - the Russian-speaking everything was clear in English. By the way, what is your native language? Why not on the engine Ren'py? However, I digress a little from the topic.

1. What I liked!
If you are satisfied with the unity, then it is your right.
I liked the plot, everything moves smoothly and clearly.
This is taking into account that I rarely play drawn games.

2. What I did not like!
I would like a resolution for a widescreen monitor, without cropping on the sides of the screen.
I would like you to add the ability to play in full screen and in the window.
As I understand it - this is the first release and the save does not work. Please modify this moment. My OS is Windows 10 64 bits.
Mini-games - the ability to either skip, or remove, or facilitate, I did not have time to type the word. Too fast. Slow down the timer.
That's all.

 

[KastGamer]

Well actually the idea is that they are a lesbian couple, who decided to adopt two children, MC and StepSister, that is all about, but it keeps being incest, so we are going to fix that and release an Incest patch in the next version...

So are you gonna rewrite the backstory of the moms ? So it is a incest story where the kids (mc and sister) where born from 1 of the moms and the dad divorced and the mom now is bi and has new wife ?

 

[Jamliz]

CoperTeam, hello.

I played the game, your English is on the high, even for me - the Russian-speaking everything was clear in English. By the way, what is your native language? Why not on the engine Ren'py? However, I digress a little from the topic.

1. What I liked!
If you are satisfied with the unity, then it is your right.
I liked the plot, everything moves smoothly and clearly.
This is taking into account that I rarely play drawn games.

2. What I did not like!
I would like a resolution for a widescreen monitor, without cropping on the sides of the screen.
I would like you to add the ability to play in full screen and in the window.
As I understand it - this is the first release and the save does not work. Please modify this moment. My OS is Windows 10 64 bits.
Mini-games - the ability to either skip, or remove, or facilitate, I did not have time to type the word. Too fast. Slow down the timer.
That's all.

Thanks for the feedback, well I was really worried about the english translation, we really checked a lot the grammar and vocabulary and didn't find something wrong, but well as a non-native speaker is normal to miss some little mistakes, We are from Colombia, so our native language is Spanish and in fact I'm really eloquent on my language of course... We use Unity by the power, unity is one of the most powerful software to develop videogames, so we wanted to have the best tool to make interesting mechanics in the future, but now we are thinking about move to ren'py for better results... And Finally Checked all the advises, thank you and we will correct and improve that for sure! Thank you!

 

[Jamliz]

So are you gonna rewrite the backstory of the moms ? So it is a incest story where the kids (mc and sister) where born from 1 of the moms and the dad divorced and the mom now is bi and has new wife ?

We are planning some different alternatives to make it consistent, it will be fixed at the next version, so we are open to recommendations and all the feedback possible

 

[Jamliz]

Your English is actually better then a lot of games on this site, especially ones that don't have English as a first language. A proofreader still would be good for you to pickup though. Also you can ask a mod for the game developer badge.

You are really helping us a lot, thanks for all the comments and recommendations, seriously we really appreciate it

 

[mrsherb3rt]

So I'm really liking this game so far. Only issue I have (apart from some of the same points getting hammered on in the comments before me) is lack of a "this is the end of this version". Even if the next update fixes how grindy the game gets, just getting a notification that "hey you've done and seen everything in this version" would be amazing

 

[Jamliz]

So I'm really liking this game so far. Only issue I have (apart from some of the same points getting hammered on in the comments before me) is lack of a "this is the end of this version". Even if the next update fixes how grindy the game gets, just getting a notification that "hey you've done and seen everything in this version" would be amazing

Im sorry if that make you have a bad experience, that will be fixed at next version for sure... Thanks for the feedback

 

[Valkynar]

Is there any sex scene or we just can see the 3 of them naked ?

 

[Jamliz]

Is there any sex scene or we just can see the 3 of them naked ?

just naked , Don't worry please check the next update there will be some sex scene, I promise

 

[bigjames1006]

the Game seems pretty cool so far, i understand there is alot to be worked on but the translation is not bad. I hate to beat a dead horse but the mini game is harder than chinese arithmetic. puzzles works best for us simple folks lol. but overall Nice Work

 

[DrNick]

2. What I did not like!
I would like you to add the ability to play in full screen and in the window.

Right now, you can press Alt+Enter to change to window mode.

 

[Ghostly Hale]

Don't Worry, I'm going to answer as many questions as I can
1. We are planning a lot of content, and that's the goal, make a great game...
2. We are working hard (Trust me) and want to dedicate all the time we can at the Art and Coding (Just be patient is the 0.2 version)
3. Well isn't too much, but we are fixing that to improve the experience...
4. Hahaha Is based in the MC of: Hard times of RJ berger, but with the feedback we are planning to change him

Thanks for the feedback. And i'm glade you're changing the MC. I don't want to be what looks like an nerd but still get so-so grades.

 

[BeBusta]

First of all there is no save option in the game. Cant save at any time which sucks.
The game bugged and i had to restart when reaching the eye scene when i entered the bathroom with sweet mom in showing me a yes no option but wasnt responsive.
Its really annoying that the girl always asks what we gonna do and all.
Why do i have to chat with the sweet mom in kitchen when i have to eat. Just put an option to have breakfast.
The game as a whole feels like a grind, i mean its so slow to just even progress one dialog or to move from 1 place to the other. Which is probably the engines fault.
The art is somewhat decent sweet milf should have a different hairstyle imo it doesnt suit her.

 

[nonthisnot]

CoperTeam I love the idea and the art, it's also understandable that it's grindy for the first public release and I'm glad you're working on fixing that. You could probably find people to correct the English mistakes as well, especially since the game doesn't have that much text. Hopefully it comes out nice!

 

[KastGamer]

We are planning some different alternatives to make it consistent, it will be fixed at the next version, so we are open to recommendations and all the feedback possible

like i said i think i speak for evrybody that if this is gonna be incest then i would do it they way i just told you that would make the most sense that would also explain why the moms might be bi and not full lesbo cuz she had a husband before

 

[Shenaniganzz]

PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD...

Add in a slider for volume! Everything was just too loud! I had my headphones on and listening to music and now I have a headache because of the music in the game! You developers really need to consider volume when you make a game. Set the slider on 50 instead of 100 at the very least.

 

[jazz154]

Why even bother using patreon instead of some alternatives like subscribe star? They ban so many things that it just really limiting for porn games. They even banned mind control, so who is to say that more bans are not coming?

 

[KastGamer]

Why even bother using patreon instead of some alternatives like subscribe star? They ban so many things that it just really limiting for porn games. They even banned mind control, so who is to say that more bans are not coming?

i gotta agree with you most incest games just arent the same with all those patches and work arounds i wish games could be the way the dev wanted them to be stupid western rules in place like japan they dont even care what happens in a drawing

 

[Jame8513]

How can i save ? the only button that i can press is restart. And how many time i can start the story, or it's just stop at practice spell ? And i think u guy should put more resolution and skip button. Btw, i like this game art so keep er 'goin