Ren'Py - Abandoned - SexNote [v0.23.0b] [JamLiz]

I'm really digging the artwork CoperTeam. I think your game is going to become a strong contender in the incest ( or in patreons case, stepcest) department if you keep developing it.

A few things you need to improve though are the room trancissions of the game. It gets really old fast because the players have to wait for a second or so to get to another room.

Plus, I had no idea what to do during my first playthrough. It would be nice to have a "tasks" menu up on the screen so that we could track our progress and quests instead of just randomly doing shit until something new happens.

Anyway, that's enough of that. I have high hopes for this game. It's a nice death note parody It was a good call to make this game.

The art is pretty nice and original but there aren't any other upsides to the game. I've played a lot of grindfests, but even Innocent Witches feels highly rewarding compared to this game considering clicks to pics ratio.
High potential tho. Lowering the clicks amount and the time u need to learn new spells would greatly improve the game.

Edit: This game has really rose from ashes. It started rather badly but Dev actually listens to the feedback
+ Original characters
+ Great art
+ Not your regular VN as many others

This is based on version 0.0.43
The improvements to this game has been huge. Artwork has been revised, engine changed, overall the game has a better flow. The structure is very familiar, repeat events with various characters to unlock riskier scenes until you finally get laid. It's nice to have a menu tell you what you need to do with each character.
Artwork is great, though the faces for the new characters (why are Belle Delphine and Mia Khalifa in here?) look a little it off sometimes.
Right now the only thing holding the game back is content. Hopefully it won't be a slow drip to get to the good stuff. Sex shouldn't be the end-game with a character. But the structure is sound, art is good. All it needs is more content, maybe some good dialogue between when you upgrade to the sexier events.

The devs have shown a great deal of improvement, and I'm sure after a few content updates this game will be really great.

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This is based on version 0.2.
Good news first, I really like the 2d art.
Then there's the things I hope get improved on. First, the transitions from to room to room is way to slow and everytime you enter a new room you have to go through a dialogue window asking you "what do you want to do". This gets tedious quick, especially since the game this far is a grind. Do away with this so we can just go from room to room with minimal text in between.
Also, the game pretty much opens with spell training grind from the get go. This is a pretty dull way to start the game. Small events are much more fun.

I think this game could be fun in the future, just make transitions quicker and dont rely on grind to get content. No one likes that. If you want us to work for the sexy stuff, make some dialogues or a light gameplay mechanic other than clicking from room to room in loops.