Ren'Py SexNote [v0.24.0c] [JamLiz]

[Jondoen88]

Mia Khalifa is highly overrated, there are lots of adult stars better than her. I don't understand why people were obsessing over her. I mean she is not bad but c'mon give this lady a break

I agree. She was a rare happenstance which to my understand someone quite like her hasn't gotten into the gestalt/zeitgeist since to replace her. Not many of her background would dare step into that sexual space for better or worse.

Then there spiteful people who want to make sure her time as a pornstar isn't forgotten about as 'once a whore always a whore' mentality. (I.e. this update/story's villian)

Then there is her own distancing of her past thus making those who would otherwise be her fans in her new pursuits by default seem just like creepy hangers-on when they might otherwise want to wish her well and succeed.

*cough* back on topic

Jam, to his credit, is doing a fine job of mixing the porn memes, pop culture, and smut without feeling too samey in terms of story (in terms of scenes; well, that critizism has already been levied by others nor do I wish to beat said horse)

 

[sassy_mendigo]

Jesus this Mia arc was dumb, everything about it was dumb.

>sued the company behind it and *magically* everything on the internet was scrapped
>>somehow the antagonist still found it, ON THE FUCKING INTERNET, WHERE HE DOWNLOADED AND ANYONE ELSE COULD ALSO DO IT

>MC that has the personality of watching paint dry is so dumb on so many levels
>>get involved in raping Mia despite the facts; He could keep his boner on his pants while she was masturbating him
>>acts like he is a victim despite he didn't stand to lose anything and he also has no plan
>>he could have become involved with the antagonist to get to the source like a double agent
>>despite MC betraying the antagonist's trust, the antagonist keeps using him even if he being a liability

>antagonist is clearly a cuck, there is no reason for him to be praising MC dick or not fucking Mia himself
Jesus, what the fuck was this plot? Not forgetting to mention that other students also notice her and somehow nobody inquired her about it.

And they ended the story with a literal advertisement for another game and no conclusion. What?

 

[justin 13]

fuck, just saw mia khalifa with bbc same as one of her famous video, lol that was funny hahaha

 

[iron4doves]

Not to jump on the shit wagon but fuck this update lmao. The animations and art were top notch as usual, but fucking hell:

1. the MC/Mia/Antagonist relationship makes no sense, even when stretching the imagination. Dialog/story in this has gone from "okay" to "what the hell am I reading"
2. The arc ends with an advert for their new game, and then completely deletes the Mia character from the current version lmao

I've been waiting for the Mia character's content FOREVER, she was in from the start but dev kept finding more and more random characters to add (idc about mia khalifa, but "corrupting a bitch teacher" is hot, and Mia's model here is amazing). There were SO many better ways to make it happen, and this is it? Dev wanted a cute advertisement tie-in for his new game, and thought this was a clever way to squeeze it in... Big womp, pulling this off my 5 star list

 

[sassy_mendigo]

Not to jump on the shit wagon but fuck this update lmao. The animations and art were top notch as usual, but fucking hell

It really is this dumbfuck arc that is the problem. Aside from the guys complaining about "red noses", I don't think people are dissatisfied with the art and animations.

>then completely deletes the Mia character from the current version lmao
I had to check for myself, holy shit, they actually did it.

 

[Luis Nope]

Well yeah, the story on this update was really weird, only funny things is that the jerk that shows up really looks like the first MC on the beginning of Sex Note, I like the references that they made though, like the famous Mia Kalifa scene (Despite not being a NTR I was ok with this scene) and the obvious connection with the new spider man movie, not gonna throw a lot of shit cause I know for a fact that JamLiz has been focusing much more on creating good animations and bringing us update fast and not creating a really immersive story, but hey, sometimes he still manages to bring something enjoyable, like Hinn for example, on the end it is a porn game and on this case, the story is definetely not the main focus, which is fine, but I hope the team do something better on the future in relation to that.

Something that I'm afraid of is this new game, it really looks good, but knowing that there is a big chance that know they will be spliting their time and not focusing in one game definetely scares me.

Overall, even the story being kinda weird and meh, the animations are amazing, usually the scenes on sex note are really unique mainly for the facial expressions on the characters, at least as far as I see, but this update Mia being more somewhat more normal really went well.

Can't wait for the next update and I still trust the devs to give us a good product!

 

[Luis Nope]

The only thing that I taught that was even more uncalled for is making the principal calling MC and Mia to her office and telling that she was going to private tutor him, but in the end everybody just forgets about Mia... like... why?

 

[Dragon2beman]

I hate the step mother and I really wish we could get a choice to just kick her out or something. The fact she just gets a slap on the wrist for being such an abusive bitch is infuriating. Yeah I get it it's a porn game, but it doesn't take much to write an abusive parent getting their ass reamed for doing something you wouldn't even want to see in porn.

 

[Luis Nope]

I hate the step mother and I really wish we could get a choice to just kick her out or something. The fact she just gets a slap on the wrist for being such an abusive bitch is infuriating. Yeah I get it it's a porn game, but it doesn't take much to write an abusive parent getting their ass reamed for doing something you wouldn't even want to see in porn.

Not sure if it will make any difference for you, but I'm pretty sure we will turn the tables on the future

 

[Dragon2beman]

Not sure if it will make any difference for you, but I'm pretty sure we will turn the tables on the future

At this point I don't even want to make her a sex slave. From outright abusing the MC at the start to flat out verbally abusing his mother. That shit shouldn't be accepted at all. It's not even written off as a joke and is completely forgotten after she comes back with no repercussions...

 

[twichman]

Everything would be fine if not for those ugly noses. This needs to be fixed first!

 

[Deleted member 4406778]

Update was kinda meh tbh. There's an

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so if that's not your thing here's a heads up.

Damn which character was it?

Edit:All good, figured it out

 

[the_observant]

Not agreeing with Denzel, did Mia have the decency to apologize to MC for acting like an asshole?

It is beyond ridiculous to see MC suddenly started defending Mia since she don't even bother to apologize first to MC and instead start whining her sob story to gain sympathy ...

Sure, Denzel is a blackmailing asshole but MC himself is also a moralist asshole just like what he said ...

Mia's mentality is not much different than MC's asshole step mother ...

When will MC stop acting like a cuck abused by asshole bitches ???

That look on MC's face after all he did for Mia ...

What did he receive back from her in the end?

So much for 'morality' shit ...

(Rolling my eyes 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 times)

 

[BBC God]

Great art and animations, my only critique is that I think the developer is putting too much stock into "celebrity" characters. Essentially the game seems like a rule 34 gallery, would be better to focus more on your story/original characters instead of trying to cash in on a popular face.

 

[TheSaltySeaWeiner]

At this point I don't even want to make her a sex slave. From outright abusing the MC at the start to flat out verbally abusing his mother. That shit shouldn't be accepted at all. It's not even written off as a joke and is completely forgotten after she comes back with no repercussions...

boo hoo Chris-chans overachiever stepmom doesn't think high of her stepson who is making bad grades in school and does nothing around the house that she is paying for, and how dare she scold Chris-chans mother for coddling him and undermining her authority, what a horrible woman! No way she's a good person, she is just be an insolent bitch that's making it hard for me to self insert myself in this story! So evil!

 

[Hydra22]

how many times do you have to repeat this event for something to happen ??

 

[uran001]

Where is dr.johnson located&&&

 

[Deleted member 4217339]

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how many times do you have to repeat this event for something to happen ??

you need to keep failing this minigame

 

[DeepSpace_Potato]

So summing up:

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[IXL]

Does anyone know how you complete the Mia scenes, as the phone task is telling me to show progress to Miss Mia, but shes no longer in the classroom, some other teacher is...





and all she says is "this class will start soon"...