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is that the MCs girlfriend?
also copied from his patreon :
"
Hey there, I'm Jack! I'm making visual novel.
I like romance and drama novel with a little action, so i'll be making this kind of stuff. Support me on patreon if you can. I'll make sure you get the credit you deserve. Thanks & see you around! "

haha :))
romance :D, he's funny :D
EDIT : in case anyone is wondering this is his patreon :
"
What's new in Ver0.1?

* Interracial scene at the club is now avoidable

* Introducing new characters (Bella, Arman & more)

* No sexual scene added in this update

* Short update about 7-15 mins added at normal reading"
he released a new version on itchio
not the MC's GF just a stripper. really sucks when the vaginal tag or any sex tags added aren't for the MC. it doesn't even show the initial sex act with the GF's mom which is the whole start of their issue. at least show us that:LOL:

ideally an option for MC to bang the stripper would be good to but eh.
 
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not the MC's GF just a stripper. really sucks when the vaginal tag or any sex tags added aren't for the MC. it doesn't even show the initial sex act with the GF's mom which is the whole start of their issue. at least show us that:LOL:

ideally an option for MC to bang the stripper would be good to but eh.
at least that scene seems to be avoidable now,
I have not played the update or anything like that, just going by the changelog,
Though I am curious if it's avoidable (if you stop them) or it's just skippable , like MC says , I'm out I'll see you later, and then the dude continues with the stripper.
 

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at least that scene seems to be avoidable now,
I have not played the update or anything like that, just going by the changelog,
Though I am curious if it's avoidable (if you stop them) or it's just skippable , like MC says , I'm out I'll see you later, and then the dude continues with the stripper.
just checked cause i was curious. the guy says he's gonna bang the stripper right there on the couch and tells mc if he aint fucking he's gotta leave. MC then has the option to stay or leave.

so it's only avoidable in the sense that you dont see it. not in the sense that you can prevent it.
 

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just checked cause i was curious. the guy says he's gonna bang the stripper right there on the couch and tells mc if he aint fucking he's gotta leave. MC then has the option to stay or leave.

so it's only avoidable in the sense that you dont see it. not in the sense that you can prevent it.
you bought the new version?cause the version uploaded here , I'm pretty sure it's the first release, and not the newest release.
and if that is true, then dev needs to learn what the word avoidable means, and not confuse it with skippable.
I never got these scenes, start with X character only to see Y and Z fuck, ....... and this is supposed to be a romance VN... right...
 

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you bought the new version?cause the version uploaded here , I'm pretty sure it's the first release, and not the newest release.
and if that is true, then dev needs to learn what the word avoidable means, and not confuse it with skippable.
I never got these scenes, start with X character only to see Y and Z fuck, ....... and this is supposed to be a romance VN... right...
nah i just clicked download in Itch. it's labled .1 and not demo. didn't ask for payment so figured why not.

and as far as what kind of game it's supposed to be? honestly no idea. i dont see a romance tag or future tags.
 

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nah i just clicked download in Itch. it's labled .1 and not demo. didn't ask for payment so figured why not.

and as far as what kind of game it's supposed to be? honestly no idea. i dont see a romance tag or future tags.
aha , didn't know you could download it from there without paying, sadly I can't download shit at the moment.
but to answer the romance comment it's from his/her patreon :
"
Hey there, I'm Jack! I'm making visual novel.
I like romance and drama novel with a little action, so i'll be making this kind of stuff. Support me on patreon if you can. I'll make sure you get the credit you deserve. Thanks & see you around!"


that's why I'm saying romance, because he/she (probably a He from the name , Jack , ) wrote that they enjoy romance novels, so I'm assuming this one is supposed to be a romance novel as well.
 
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aha , didn't know you could download it from there without paying, sadly I can't download shit at the moment.
but to answer the romance comment it's from his/her patreon :
"
Hey there, I'm Jack! I'm making visual novel.
I like romance and drama novel with a little action, so i'll be making this kind of stuff. Support me on patreon if you can. I'll make sure you get the credit you deserve. Thanks & see you around!"


that's why I'm saying romance, because he/she (probably a He from the name , Jack , ) wrote that they enjoy romance novels, so I'm assuming this one is supposed to be a romance novel as well.
i was too busy looking at the overview for the game didnt even bother with the patreon but yeah i can see where the connection to Romance comes in now.
 

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Yeah /.. .so many assholes playing at making a game but actually like making animated sex scenes only.
What the actual fkk is a stripper not doing the MC any favors
but banging some asshole gonna do to gamers? Make them angry?

MAke them be happy they are back on porn hub while they thought this was a game?

We got no MC, he is a nobody in this game, no actual plot, all the action is of nobodies,
literal nobodies to this story just to cheat and say there is sex in a nothingness game.

not the MC's GF just a stripper. really sucks when the vaginal tag or any sex tags added aren't for the MC. it doesn't even show the initial sex act with the GF's mom which is the whole start of their issue. at least show us that:LOL:

ideally an option for MC to bang the stripper would be good to but eh.
at least that scene seems to be avoidable now,
I have not played the update or anything like that, just going by the changelog,
Though I am curious if it's avoidable (if you stop them) or it's just skippable , like MC says , I'm out I'll see you later, and then the dude continues with the stripper.
Thanks for link BTLD looks like F95 don't have the updated version.
The dev made it clear we can either go restore love with gf Elly maybe that will be romance route or live a wild life.
At the end of the day it's all choosable. I have the option to reject valeria instead of forcing me have sex with her while i'm pursuing romance. I think you can play game in different style.
I played the new version all i have say is that it will be hard for me to choose the romance route because i want Bella and Zafira. Btw looks like the stripper was made for jay cuz the MC doesn't show interest in her the way i see it.
Who the fukk is jay? NObody to this story. Another asshole dropped pussy on the head by the asshole creator, because you cannot but cheat and lie in the damn desctiption.
You're a very naughty boy
Even movie trailers make some sense about what the MC is doing, not some weirdo randos affairs.

So far MC is the tamest idiot to ever idiotly stumble in a game supposed to be about him.
 
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Oh FFS< can you get an editor that understands the English language, one that can fix the incredible grammatical errors in this...novel??
Sorting through this shiit is painful at best.
GOOGLE Translate really would help, just cross-reference the translation back to your language to make sure it's accurate.
Don't bother with excuses like they will cost too much or you can't afford it, just post an ad on here, then offer either a percentage of the support or start to pay them when you get more publicity, complete with back pay.

Once you have a product that people can understand and actually enjoy, then you will get more support to do bigger and better things...but hey that's just a suggestion.
 

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1. the mc looks like a lopsided douche.
2. not a clear idea of whet is happening here.
good luck with this whatever thing you have.