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Na mate it's not terrible but it isn't great either. You'll most likely improve as you work along this project. It does have it's own charm though, kinda like A Town Uncovered. Anything drawn that isn't stick figure quality bad is more appreciable than the countless DAZ junk.
Night time scenes try to make the character more visible cause Delila blended into the background, and make the mouth more visible cause her standard expression has her mouth invisible. Oh and maybe make the dick flesh colored so if you do any toy scenes in the future confusion can be avoided.
Thank you for the feedback!
You are right, considering the scene, I thought that making the CG dark as well would have been a good idea (considering also that there is the same CG in the morning with lighting) but I did not repeat the same mistake on the following scene in 0.015a (also dark but with light CGs).
As for the blending and less visible mouth, I believe it is because my monitor is set to 100% lighting and I did not think about testing with various light settings, sorry for that!
In the latest versions I am using wider lines albeit with the same color setting rather than the standard color or black; I will be trying them out with a lower lighting setting and if they are visible enough, I will be fixing the old ones as well.
As for the penis, choosing a flesh color would make it look blended/invisible with the rest since it is transparent.
I try to draw CGs in a way/pose that does not cover any female nudity so choosing a strong color for the penis and making it transparent will not cover anything and it will also depict penetration.
If I were to draw toys, they would probably be of a solid color and more "decorated" since toys are a fetish as well, I think.
I listened to your suggestion since in this scene the penis did not cover anything important and therefore could be solid and have an actual color:
I noticed, by playing some hentai games, that the penis is rarely transparent even if it may cover some things so I guess in future games I may just draw both and give the player the option to view either one.
I noticed, by playing some hentai games, that the penis is rarely transparent even if it may cover some things so I guess in future games I may just draw both and give the player the option to view either one.
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Can you set this to completed?
The last and final version is 0.06 which is now public (
Can you set this to completed?
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Great job Winterfire. i have never played pokemon but your story and artwork are original and you finished your game. That is something only a few creators on here can claim. Be proud and ignore the haters. Haters be crazzzyyyy.
Thank you!
I do not ignore them, their feedback was actually useful and made me improve my art although it is still far from what a real 2D artist can do
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i can see you are actually trying, maby if your patreon actually picks up and you dont feel like you can improve your art skills you could try to hire an artist in the future? either way good luck!
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Jap games wont let you name the character because most are voiced, meaning they can't voice the variable name. some are voiced like Imouto paradise, but they will only call you by Onee-chan so it's only really there for you to look at. I guess maybe that some of the other jap vn's are based on some other source material (anime,manga,LN) so maybe that's why non voiced ones have fixed name.