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Sorry for your wasted time. I sent the wrong link when uploading the final update. The correct link is above.
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Time out, it seems I didn't post the wrong link at all. I need sleep!
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Ah, right, I thought so, because the file sizes are the same.
I actually enjoyed the story / game. How the wife transitioned into what was in her and her husband fetish.
The renders need serious fixing and the animations. If the dev can do this and maybe use a different font as appose to the boring default renpy one then I think he's onto something. Can probably take this even further.
PS. Part 3 doesnt work on Linux as previous one's did.
The renders need serious fixing and the animations. If the dev can do this and maybe use a different font as appose to the boring default renpy one then I think he's onto something. Can probably take this even further.
PS. Part 3 doesnt work on Linux as previous one's did.
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This is literally the same plot for A Favor for A Friend by Ntrgames. Even going through a lot of the scenes was damn near word for word what they did and scene for scene.
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Yeah, your right. I'm experimenting with different fonts and hopefully improving on my renders... lighting camera angles etc. Big learning curve for me. Not sure why it doesn't work on Linux though.
Maybe I am old or something but this is nothing more than a repeat of the game "A Favor For A Friend" https://f95zone.to/threads/a-favor-for-a-friend-final-ntrgames.56050/
Which is honestly better written and in the beginning which was a good choice , we don't get to see her naked yet. Thus building up anticipation of what she looks like.
I knew this going in. That this would be a copy and paste of the original, what I was hoping for was that this would be its upgrade! Animations and AI have come such a long way since the release of that game. When you look at the animations of Burning Boundaries , you can only imagine if they took A Favor for A Friend , and updated it to that quality it would be that much better and throw in some mini games as well.
I think its a mis-step showing her having sex with her husband so early and unnecessary, we already know they love each other. She could have done some light seductive work to convince him it would be alright and thus continue with her Idea. Breaking her husbands will to go along with it.
Go read the interaction of A favor for a friend and then go read this games , you will see how the writer in the original builds your anticipation of what is to come.
I believe it is a good attempt and I would give the effort a C+ but far from what it should be and can be.
For example, we already know she needs to take shots for courage, so why not have the NPCs gradually convince her by tactics to drink one after the other? hell make a game out of it. This in turn increasing her lust and reduces her reluctance to go further.
As she moves from guy to guy, each touching her has an effort, causing her to be more in heat, lust, with each touch you can show her will fadding, even by some graphic display which would be good. When she can barely stand it with one guy she leaves to join another, hoping that they will be less passionate and aggressive only to jump into a worse situation. There is allot you cand do with this.
These Mechanics will engage the patreon and keep them playing to find alternate routes. Consider doing this and redo this whole thing please. I believe your on the right track and I wish you well Mate.
Which is honestly better written and in the beginning which was a good choice , we don't get to see her naked yet. Thus building up anticipation of what she looks like.
I knew this going in. That this would be a copy and paste of the original, what I was hoping for was that this would be its upgrade! Animations and AI have come such a long way since the release of that game. When you look at the animations of Burning Boundaries , you can only imagine if they took A Favor for A Friend , and updated it to that quality it would be that much better and throw in some mini games as well.
I think its a mis-step showing her having sex with her husband so early and unnecessary, we already know they love each other. She could have done some light seductive work to convince him it would be alright and thus continue with her Idea. Breaking her husbands will to go along with it.
Go read the interaction of A favor for a friend and then go read this games , you will see how the writer in the original builds your anticipation of what is to come.
I believe it is a good attempt and I would give the effort a C+ but far from what it should be and can be.
For example, we already know she needs to take shots for courage, so why not have the NPCs gradually convince her by tactics to drink one after the other? hell make a game out of it. This in turn increasing her lust and reduces her reluctance to go further.
As she moves from guy to guy, each touching her has an effort, causing her to be more in heat, lust, with each touch you can show her will fadding, even by some graphic display which would be good. When she can barely stand it with one guy she leaves to join another, hoping that they will be less passionate and aggressive only to jump into a worse situation. There is allot you cand do with this.
These Mechanics will engage the patreon and keep them playing to find alternate routes. Consider doing this and redo this whole thing please. I believe your on the right track and I wish you well Mate.
LordyMcLord Are you on planning to split up the married couple if they both cheat? OR maybe have them cheat but then bring/keep them together in an have a kinda harem/sharing orgy type relationship. Which I think I would like.
Or as it is now, she cheats or he cheats or both cheat and in the end they separate?
If you dont want to reveal here and willing to, pls DM me then?
Or as it is now, she cheats or he cheats or both cheat and in the end they separate?
If you dont want to reveal here and willing to, pls DM me then?
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Is this not just a remake of " how far will you go". If I'm not mistaken the wife was Kate. I think there was 3 short stories bout her, the stripper one(that this game is based on), then one with a neighbor and the other is an old black dude.
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Hopefully they don't end up separating. That kinda sucks.
But a couple scenarios could be done: (1)Like they both cheat and still together (2) cheat with each other but tell exactly what happened after they did the deed in exact detail in all honesty. I think it could make their love stronger. Just a thought though. I think this one is a bit better than the original since there is added storyline independent of it, after all, this is a game...
But a couple scenarios could be done: (1)Like they both cheat and still together (2) cheat with each other but tell exactly what happened after they did the deed in exact detail in all honesty. I think it could make their love stronger. Just a thought though. I think this one is a bit better than the original since there is added storyline independent of it, after all, this is a game...
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Traduzione in Italiano
Shaddolands -WHID [v1.0] [Shaddo]
Shaddolands -WHID [v2.0] [Shaddo]
Shaddolands -WHID [v3.0] [Shaddo] FINAL
That is a remake from that theme and creator, it was called A Favor for a Friend. Same character Kate . Red Head. Very good really , wish they remake it with AI Animations. js
The original 2 chapters were fine, enjoyable and well written.
The changes in the script in the update, including that the only way to play Ch3 is to forego the best part of Ch2, are insufferable in comparison.
Ch3 just goes to shit, and turns this into an open, dual-cheating relationship, which is a far cry from the original setup.
If that is what the next game is about, as promised at the end, then that game will not be anything like the script you borrowed, and won't compete, in my view. It is a totally different setup, not any sort of continuation.
You had a great opportunity with a really good premise, and are now blowing that off, all for some run-of-the-mill too-often played out scenario. Its a pity because there were so many ways to extend the relationship dynamics of having a stripper wife and an active thrill-seeking husband.
Thanks, good luck and all, but no thanks.
The changes in the script in the update, including that the only way to play Ch3 is to forego the best part of Ch2, are insufferable in comparison.
Ch3 just goes to shit, and turns this into an open, dual-cheating relationship, which is a far cry from the original setup.
If that is what the next game is about, as promised at the end, then that game will not be anything like the script you borrowed, and won't compete, in my view. It is a totally different setup, not any sort of continuation.
You had a great opportunity with a really good premise, and are now blowing that off, all for some run-of-the-mill too-often played out scenario. Its a pity because there were so many ways to extend the relationship dynamics of having a stripper wife and an active thrill-seeking husband.
Thanks, good luck and all, but no thanks.