VN Ren'Py Shadows of Ambition [Ch.6.1] [AbyssGames]

[Enlight432]

Hey! Thanks for the review. I know that it being a kinetic novel can be a turn off for people and I apologize for that. With my full-time job, I only have a couple of hours to work on the game. Adding branching storylines and choices that actually change the story, which should be the purpose of them, would require a lot more time and planning for every update. It increases the workload by quite a bit and with the amount of time I can spend on working on this game... it would take me 4-5 months per update... which for the people supporting me on Patreon or who are just interested in the game, would be just too long of a wait. I don't want people to wait too long between updates, so this is the best I can do at the moment.

Hello my friend
MC in this game holds the number 1 rank in blueballing users
He neither NTR'd Ruby nor let Alice suck that brother Kate’s dick
Just kidding, these two developer decisions are excellent and increase the sexual and emotional tension
Just two points:
1: The FMC looks incredible when her hair is down. In fact, when her hair is down, she's easily number 1 among all the girls in this game (just a personal preference)
2: Please give the MC some peace; that yoga class is good for him. I think in a few more updates, he might have a heart attack from being shocked so many times in every scene. While the shocks are great for player immersion in this genre, but the MC's reactions are so exaggerated that they make it a bit unbelievable

 

[AbyssGames]

Hello my friend
MC in this game holds the number 1 rank in blueballing users
He neither NTR'd Ruby nor let Alice suck that brother Kate’s dick
Just kidding, these two developer decisions are excellent and increase the sexual and emotional tension
Thanks for making this good game
Just two points:
1: The FMC looks incredible when her hair is down. In fact, when her hair is down, she's easily number 1 among all the girls in this game (just a personal preference)
2: Please give the MC some peace; that yoga class is good for him. I think in a few more updates, he might have a heart attack from being shocked so many times in every scene. While the shocks are great for player immersion in this genre, but the MC's reactions are so exaggerated that they make it a bit unbelievable

Hi! Thank you for your message. Regarding your points:

1. Alice will have lose her twintails. I always had the idea of it being symbolic: When she finally lets go off all her insecurities, she'd let her hair down (literally). So from Chapter 5 onwards, she won't be rocking the classic twintails anymore.
2. It's something I've noticed as well and while doing my rework, I've fixed some of them. Although I do want to include Luke's reactions, but as things progress, he'll be less and less shocked about the things that are happening around him. I thought it was fitting for someone who came from a small town, moving to a big city. Although, I can definitely improve on that still.
   
   This is unrelated, but wanted to show something to look forward to in the rework:
   
   

 

[idkmanerally]

Hi! Thank you for your message. Regarding your points:

1. Alice will have lose her twintails. I always had the idea of it being symbolic: When she finally lets go off all her insecurities, she'd let her hair down (literally). So from Chapter 5 onwards, she won't be rocking the classic twintails anymore.
2. It's something I've noticed as well and while doing my rework, I've fixed some of them. Although I do want to include Luke's reactions, but as things progress, he'll be less and less shocked about the things that are happening around him. I thought it was fitting for someone who came from a small town, moving to a big city. Although, I can definitely improve on that still.
   
   This is unrelated, but wanted to show something to look forward to in the rework:
   
   View attachment 4612358

these animations looks great man

 

[megapokabreaker]

Hi! Thank you for your message. Regarding your points:

1. Alice will have lose her twintails. I always had the idea of it being symbolic: When she finally lets go off all her insecurities, she'd let her hair down (literally). So from Chapter 5 onwards, she won't be rocking the classic twintails anymore.
2. It's something I've noticed as well and while doing my rework, I've fixed some of them. Although I do want to include Luke's reactions, but as things progress, he'll be less and less shocked about the things that are happening around him. I thought it was fitting for someone who came from a small town, moving to a big city. Although, I can definitely improve on that still.
   
   This is unrelated, but wanted to show something to look forward to in the rework:
   
   View attachment 4612358

Yo! i wanted "Alice will have lose her twintails. I always had the idea of it being symbolic: When she finally lets go off all her insecurities, she'd let her hair down (literally). So from Chapter 5 onwards, she won't be rocking the classic twintails anymore." - this for sooo long, good news...on my birthday .

 

[deviousstorm]

Yo! i wanted "Alice will have lose her twintails. I always had the idea of it being symbolic: When she finally lets go off all her insecurities, she'd let her hair down (literally). So from Chapter 5 onwards, she won't be rocking the classic twintails anymore." - this for sooo long, good news...on my birthday .

Oh kind of like the Japanese / Chinese tradition of cutting ones long hair to symbolize a new stage of their life? Yeah that would be interesitng.

 

[pakopakez696969]

soa is quietly getting close to mng as the best ai game in this site... keep up the good work and the update pace man

 

[SIGNATURE]

Which AI you used for the CGs?

 

[Swiver]

Oh kind of like the Japanese / Chinese tradition of cutting ones long hair to symbolize a new stage of their life? Yeah that would be interesitng.

HE DID NOT SAY CUT HER HAIR! Did he? Not yet please she's so hot with loose long hair

then we can shave it

then it'll be long wigs on doll puppet

then we cook her and eat her

 

[Swiver]

HE DID NOT SAY CUT HER HAIR! Did he? Not yet please she's so hot with loose long hair

then we can shave it

then it'll be long wigs on doll puppet

then we cook her and eat her

Sorry, I know it ain't the vibe here. Was watching Mayfair Witches so am on a dark erotica frequency. No idea how that took my mind to this


inspiration for a nightmare scene maybe? idk, nvmd

 

[pakopakez696969]

the goat

 

[Eldtrich]

Hi! Thank you for your message. Regarding your points:

1. Alice will have lose her twintails. I always had the idea of it being symbolic: When she finally lets go off all her insecurities, she'd let her hair down (literally). So from Chapter 5 onwards, she won't be rocking the classic twintails anymore.

NOOOOOOOOOO, i kind of like her twintails, well it is what it is.....sniff

 

[kristo0086]

?

Are you planning a black bull in the future for Alice?

 

[Dealbreaker]

Sorry, this is nothing against you or your game. I don't find Alice especially insecure here at the beginning of the game, but you are the author of course). Especially in the context of porn games, it could better just be seen as a conscious decision of mature adults in both directions.

 

[AbyssGames]

Are you planning a black bull in the future for Alice?

Maybe

 

[AbyssGames]

Sorry, this is nothing against you or your game. I don't find Alice especially insecure here at the beginning of the game, but you are the author of course). Especially in the context of porn games, it could better just be seen as a conscious decision of mature adults in both directions.

Yeah, I do find that hard to portray in a "porn game". Sometimes, to really explain and develop a character, you need a lot of time. I mean the best games that come to mind as an example, have been in development for multiple years and for most of the developers, isn't their first project. I'm still learning as I go. I did notice I tend to bloat text conversations a bit much, which is why I did the rework of Chapter 1. Regarding Alice, using the word insecurities is just what comes to mind. Every person has insecurities, even though they can appear confident in every day scenarios. Alice is someone who is confident when she's together with someone that she knows and trusts, but in situations where she's out of her comfort zone, she struggles, but she's struggling less and less. That's what I wanted to portray and I hope I got that message across. Regarding the writing, it's always going be a work in progress and I try to improve as I go along.

 

[pakopakez696969]

dear abyss, do you have an estimate time of release for today's update? i cant wait to play it

 

[AbyssGames]

dear abyss, do you have an estimate time of release for today's update? i cant wait to play it

Uploading it now.

 

[psypop404]

Should I leak it?

yessssssss herooo

 

[psypop404]

Should I leak it?

dm dm dm

 

[Maxx2265]

Uploading it now.

Do you plan on giving Alice a piercing or a tattoo someday?