You're doing the Lord's work here valiant solider of the light.
RPGM games are almost always a ballache, loads of sitting around watching punctuation marks appearing over people's heads and other pointless timewasting... I tried playing the original of this one and it was even worse than normal, possibly the slowest game I've ever tried playing with having to watch a slow fade between renders after almost every line of text.
Was a bit odd to have the background generally be just blackness, if you fancied the extra work then it might be worth putting in any generic stock image of a bedroom, school, street, etc. that fits the scene in the background. But other than that I'm glad to see this become something playable and I'll look forwards to the rest of the content being added (no idea how developed the original is now).