RPGM Ren'Py Shadows of Desire [v0.5 T2] [Shamantr]

[EggplantEnjoyer]

Imma write a longer review but tl;dr: bad english, bad writing, character models aren’t stylistically coherent (Western game models and anime style models), lengthy walls of pointless rambling text which are not skippable, Jason playthrough is pure trash (dont wanna play a NTRer char in a NTR game), fake reviews and bait images that give illusion of a lot of content being present which brings me to the fact that there’s no sex scene and the game just ends with hidden BJ.

For anyone else reading don’t goon to this game, it will easily waste 3-4 hours of your time with no satisfying conclusion or rewatchable scenes. That is inadequate even for a RPGM game.

 

[Doshima]

Imma write a longer review but tl;dr: bad english, bad writing, character models aren’t stylistically coherent (Western game models and anime style models), lengthy walls of pointless rambling text which are not skippable, Jason playthrough is pure trash (dont wanna play a NTRer char in a NTR game), fake reviews and bait images that give illusion of a lot of content being present which brings me to the fact that there’s no sex scene and the game just ends with hidden BJ.

For anyone else reading don’t goon to this game, it will easily waste 3-4 hours of your time with no satisfying conclusion or rewatchable scenes. That is inadequate even for a RPGM game.

1) Text is skipabble (SHIFT)
2) English is not the Dev's main language, and if you think this is bad writing then that's your opinion but allow me to say that there's at least 85% of the NTR games in this site that has A LOT of poor writing compared to this one.
3) I don't really understand what you mean by stylistically coherent.
4) "Jason's playthrough is pure trash" You're making an assumption on something you personally don't like so that's not a valid point.
5) Fake reviews? Bait images? Dude did you actually played all the routes and saw all the content? There's a lot of sexual scenes giving the fact that this game is just at 0.3 and there's only been 3 DAYS in the game.
6) "No satisfying conclusion or rewatchable scenes" There's a gallery with all the sexual scenes of the cheating path that you can access with G. And by satisfying conclusion again you're making a personal assumption.

 

[Karcosa]

Finished the update with 2 diff endings on the tent, love this game and update too, even tho im more into the other 2 paths, i 100% sure know the endings, is a huge bait into "oh, it was her" and not the person you expect on the tent, but it will be incredible if the dev surprise us and its who we think it is, that would be good to see how he can continue with the cheating path if on that tent is "her". I would love a sub path that our boy knows what she is doing and he somehow starts enjoying it or planning some kind of crazy revenge lol or both. Anyway, love this game, amazing art, animations, writing, everything. Rpgm? it is what it is

 

[Rudmi]

Nice update and final part, but RPGM is shit.

 

[123Ins123]

Finished the update with 2 diff endings on the tent, love this game and update too, even tho im more into the other 2 paths, i 100% sure know the endings, is a huge bait into "oh, it was her" and not the person you expect on the tent, but it will be incredible if the dev surprise us and its who we think it is, that would be good to see how he can continue with the cheating path if on that tent is "her". I would love a sub path that our boy knows what she is doing and he somehow starts enjoying it or planning some kind of crazy revenge lol or both. Anyway, love this game, amazing art, animations, writing, everything. Rpgm? it is what it is

I'm just wondering how you ended the game and didn't realize what kind of girl is in the tent with the blacks. Couldn't you see the face of Fred's sister???

 

[lostsoul11111113]

I'm a little bit lost. Where can I have the threesome scene from Camila and Jason and Junior? My save end after seeing Sarah being bound

 

[EggplantEnjoyer]

1) Text is skipabble (SHIFT)
2) English is not the Dev's main language, and if you think this is bad writing then that's your opinion but allow me to say that there's at least 85% of the NTR games in this site that has A LOT of poor writing compared to this one.
3) I don't really understand what you mean by stylistically coherent.
4) "Jason's playthrough is pure trash" You're making an assumption on something you personally don't like so that's not a valid point.
5) Fake reviews? Bait images? Dude did you actually played all the routes and saw all the content? There's a lot of sexual scenes giving the fact that this game is just at 0.3 and there's only been 3 DAYS in the game.
6) "No satisfying conclusion or rewatchable scenes" There's a gallery with all the sexual scenes of the cheating path that you can access with G. And by satisfying conclusion again you're making a personal assumption.

1. The speed is still slow, further slowed down by random parts where the dev has decided to randomly slow the text even further for dramatic effect.
2. I realize he is spanish speaker, but if it's a game made in English I expect a decent english, not this
3. Some characters look like they're from your average WHG, while other have pure Honey Select look to them.
4. I'm not making an assumption, I'm presenting my opinion.
5. There's no satisfying scenes, only some slow burn (done incorrectly) that will waste your time. Reviews don't really reflect the reality of this game, and that makes me suspicious about why they have given 4 to 5 stars.
6. I haven't realized about the G key, but I'm still only presenting my opinion, not making an "assumption". I'm guessing you are the writer .

 

[Doshima]

I'm a little bit lost. Where can I have the threesome scene from Camila and Jason and Junior? My save end after seeing Sarah being bound

You need to save Jessica in the blackmail path

 

[Doshima]

1. The speed is still slow, further slowed down by random parts where the dev has decided to randomly slow the text even further for dramatic effect.
2. I realize he is spanish speaker, but if it's a game made in English I expect a decent english, not this
3. Some characters look like they're from your average WHG, while other have pure Honey Select look to them.
4. I'm not making an assumption, I'm presenting my opinion.
5. There's no satisfying scenes, only some slow burn (done incorrectly) that will waste your time. Reviews don't really reflect the reality of this game, and that makes me suspicious about why they have given 4 to 5 stars.
6. I haven't realized about the G key, but I'm still only presenting my opinion, not making an "assumption". I'm guessing you are the writer .

Welp, it's his first game ever made and the improvements made from the first versions up until the latest one is clearly big. And yes, he payed almost 30 users in this forum to leave high stars reviews on his game.

And again you're wrong about your assumption, because I'm not the writer .

When you say "the game is shit" "Jason's POV is pure trash" that's not an opinion, it's an assumption. By being rude you'll not get what you want.

And I have the best solution for you if you're throwing so much hate in this game. Just leave and put the game on ignore .

 

[Swooosh]

I played 3 hours and it made me remember why I don't play rpgm games anymore. It is WAY too slow an engine. I will go back to Renpy games and I advise you to switch to it if you want more people to play your game. I want to continue your game but not like this.

THIS! Rpgm is unplayable

 

[joshuaalcabar]

THIS! Rpgm is unplayable

I agree before this is my problem I lost lot of time playing games and even lost sleep and need work the next day, you cannot say no to continue playing specially if the story is so good but the problem if you lost control it will affect your daily rest and not good for health that is why now i really set alarm everytime i will play max is 2 hours a day whatever happens I will stop and go back to reality fuck real girl and just continue when im completly alone again LOL

 

[123Ins123]

THIS! Rpgm is unplayable

It seems to me that comics are more suitable for you. Everything is open there at once. Read (if you want) and watch.

 

[P3zz0]

Please go back discussing the game/update instead of getting off-topic and feeding the troll(s).
Failure to comply will result in warnings being issued and the last page being sanitised.

 

[killstorminside]

did the cheating path end? it didnt show any scene with cami/sarah, also is there a way to full unlock the gallery?

 

[Illhoon]

did the cheating path end? it didnt show any scene with cami/sarah, also is there a way to full unlock the gallery?

still WIP it ended at the pool party with the tent scene

 

[HueyFreeman32]

i been trying to play this game and every update i hae to start anew . well i did it again this time for the cheating path. have 5 saves and had shut the game off and came back after some time. well now everytime i load this game up it doesnt see m saves even tho all my saves is in the saves folder with its files .sigh...... imma just delete this and move on.

 

[Doshima]

i been trying to play this game and every update i hae to start anew . well i did it again this time for the cheating path. have 5 saves and had shut the game off and came back after some time. well now everytime i load this game up it doesnt see m saves even tho all my saves is in the saves folder with its files .sigh...... imma just delete this and move on.

That's just a global.rpgsave problem, make a new save in the game and then replace those saves with the ones you have. First make sure to move your saves out of the save folder.

 

[VeggieNeptunia]

so the game is a cuck blocker?

 

[Swooosh]

It seems to me that comics are more suitable for you. Everything is open there at once. Read (if you want) and watch.

Nah, just Renpy that is infinitely better.

 

[ShawnLee95Gamer]

You are correct about me assuming whether you are the writer.
Incorrect about me assuming that Jason's POV is trash. Assumption would mean that I didn't playthrough and experience it, that I'm just feeling like it's trash, but I did experience it, and so I have formed and presented an opinion. Maybe open a dictionary.

Your solution to an interesting game with bad execution is to ignore it. My solution is to give it criticism that can highlight the issues with the game (and if the author is open minden enough, even make it better). Overall, I am doing more for the game and it's developers than you do with your glazing.

Have a good one though.

U are free to make ur own game and make it to your perfect expectations…

The people that make games do it mostly free and at their own free time…if everyone criticizes every game then we wouldnt have this site as their is no perfect game for everyone…