I like the general premise of that plot, though I'd say I'm not a big fan of the idea of Jason getting in her ear about cuckold and BBC. It's a bit too direct. I'd prefer it if she were to warm up to Jason over time through acts similar to the pool saving one you mentioned earlier where Fred isn't able to do it. Basically showing to her that Jason would be a better "protector" so to speak, which would emasculate Fred in the process. If he were to just outright mention cuckold and BBC, that's just grounds for Camilla getting upset at Jason and pushing him away for trying to get in between her and Fred and questioning the relationship that Jason and Camilla have. If she were to act ok with him mentioning it without any form of pushback, it would just show that she's basically a disloyal person right out the gate. As for BBC commentary in the game, as goofy as it is, I'm ok with how it's brought up in this game. Like the whole scene where they were saying things like "BBC means "Very Big Corporation" ... but where's the V?" sort of stuff. It's goofy, but I like it.Yah I agree with you. Aside from Melissa the rest are getting or are already kind of ruined because of the HARD force scene or 180 flip in their characters. Honestly I think I can write a better story than Shamantr. I just don' know jack about animation and game making. But check out my revise.
Camila the most important one is a easy fix.
Cheating route is fine up to the third act. But change the last act entirely or refine it. Give Camila a oh its just the tip or at least vagina rubbing scene in end of chapter one. Its already heading there. Then by chapter two they bang. Easy.
The cuckold route will just follow some of the Red room idea. During the first act, when Camila shows up to school late, she tells Fred she wants him to be the lifeguard like already in the story. Fred decides to go with Camila to try out. Teacher Ella asks Fred to demonstrate but he is mediocre at it. Ella rejects Fred and Camilla is sadden by this. However Jason uses opportunity to get close to Camila, and convince teacher Ella to that he will teach Fred as a back up lifeguard. This ways we get Fred, Camila and Jason a reason to be in the same place. Ella accepts because she likes Jason. By now were in the mid first act. Camila excited from the idea that Fred can become a life guard, jumps in pool to congratulate Fred. But she forgets that she is still fatigue from her morning sickness, Camila struggles and almost drown as Fred panic helplessly. Jason swoops in and saves Camila, full body contact, arms wrap around each other, her legs wraps around Jason waist as he lifts her outta of the pool. Camila blushes. Fred watches all of this with a hard on.
By evening and the end of the first act Fred, Camila and Jason ask teacher Ella to practice swimming after school to get Fred up to speed. Ella accepts but won't supervise. At the swimming pool Fred determine to save Camila in the future, swim vigorously. Jason outside of the pool flirts with Camila and gets in her ear about cuckold and BBC. Fred seeing them conversate jealously swims even harder and drowns. Jason jumps and saves him, but Fred is unconscious. Here the dream sequence begins but is strictly Camila and Jason related. While this is going on, Jason refuse to give Fred mouth to mouth but will teach Camila how to using her own mouth as an example. Camila rejects it, but gives in out of desperation. So they mouth to mouth and it turns into a passionate kiss instead. It at this moment Fred wakes and catches them. Camila pushes Jason away and explain herself, but they both notice Fred has a hard on.
Honestly I would write more but I don't want to be wasting your time lol. So that the kind of the idea I would of went with. And don't even get me started with Blackmail.
I gave this game a try because of the many good reviews, but I just can't get through the RPGM engine hell. Hopefully we could get that Renpy remake at some point in the future. <3I hope there will be a renpy remake for this one
You have to remember that the setting only has two days to set up Fred's birthday. Actually a day and the night if you don't count the prologue. The cheating path already has Camila cheating on Fred on the first day the moment she sent him to go work. She stay with Jason at school gambling aka the lap dance. It may have not happen in this route but its all the same time linear and can be theorized. It is just that Fred left differently in this route. This is why I don't like the blackmail route because that route stray way too far from this linear. Honestly I think the creator originally thought to connect all these route in some ways without diverting too far but probably forgot it about lol. I don't even know if the Blackmail route reference Fred's birthday lol?I like the general premise of that plot, though I'd say I'm not a big fan of the idea of Jason getting in her ear about cuckold and BBC. It's a bit too direct. I'd prefer it if she were to warm up to Jason over time through acts similar to the pool saving one you mentioned earlier where Fred isn't able to do it. Basically showing to her that Jason would be a better "protector" so to speak, which would emasculate Fred in the process. If he were to just outright mention cuckold and BBC, that's just grounds for Camilla getting upset at Jason and pushing him away for trying to get in between her and Fred and questioning the relationship that Jason and Camilla have. If she were to act ok with him mentioning it without any form of pushback, it would just show that she's basically a disloyal person right out the gate. As for BBC commentary in the game, as goofy as it is, I'm ok with how it's brought up in this game. Like the whole scene where they were saying things like "BBC means "Very Big Corporation" ... but where's the V?" sort of stuff. It's goofy, but I like it.
Its probably a promo. It has the tag below. If that was in the folder, that image name tag would not be there. Maybe future scene. Who knows.is this camila? what scene is this in? i can't found it? View attachment 3467980
Its the premise. Its literally an interracial BBC cheating NTR blackmail tagged game. A bit racism? Yes? Do I care? No. Its porn man. If I can wank off to ugly bastard banging hot girls, I can wank of too this. If I can wank of to hentai tentacles, I can wank of to thiss too. Shota. Horses. Incest. Goes on.I have a question, why are there only pumped-up black guys in the game, hello)(
Tbh, I don't remember many of the details of how things went down in the game since I played them months ago at this point. How things are addressed, their timelines and whatnot are quite a bit hazy for me. I'm more just speaking in a broad sense that I find the idea of voicing the idea of cuckoldry and BBC directly to Camilla to be a heavy handed approach, and that I'd prefer it to be a corruption by acts rather than directly voicing it. I liked your scenario overall, just that one aspect I'm not a big fan of personally.You have to remember that the setting only has two days to set up Fred's birthday. Actually a day and the night if you don't count the prologue. The cheating path already has Camila cheating on Fred on the first day the moment she sent him to go work. She stay with Jason at school gambling aka the lap dance. It may have not happen in this route but its all the same time linear and can be theorized. It is just that Fred left differently in this route. This is why I don't like the blackmail route because that route stray way too far from this linear. Honestly I think the creator originally thought to connect all these route in some ways without diverting too far but probably forgot it about lol. I don't even know if the Blackmail route reference Fred's birthday lol?
Then Camila came home with Jason back to Fred's house. When Fred comes back home from work and ask why Jason is there, she tells Fred that she and Jason is playing a trick on Fred when she is in fact dressing up with Jason in a skimpy outfit in Fred's own bedroom. She apparently feels bad, decided that she wont wear that outfit, but will wear another evenly skimpy outfit if Fred provides it, or still wear that skimpy outfit because Fred didn't detest. And she leaves with Jason still. Regardless of what Fred says, that is cheating already. And by midnight she makes out Jason willingly. This all within the first day, to the super early morning of the next day like literally after midnight. All of this happens in mid to late first act. Literally on day one.
With my scenario were already at the evening, and I meant to say near the end of the first act. Jason starts by showing Fred how it s done swimming. Camila watches in awe of Jason's body and how much better of a swimmer he is than Fred. Eventually Jason gets out to have Fred do a few a runs. Jason chats and flirts with Camila about cuckold and BBC just like in the original cuckold path. And yes we can say she doesn't understand or rejects but is curious. She will laptop search it later anyways. It gets darker outside. Fred see from a distance jealously drowns. The dream sequences happens, pace out some time. Its late now. The mouth to mouth happens. It be just like the same thing where Camila kiss Jason at the party. Well that had drug and alcohol, but here we can just say desperation and adrenaline took over Camila for a moment. Instead here its not the ass touching that stop Camilla, but Fred waking up with a hard on. Camila explains the situation and Fred believes it because you know, she don't know how to mouth to mouth lol.
And finally you have to remember this is cuckold and not just straight cheating. Cheating would mean Camila will eventually falls for Jason going behind Fred's back. Here in Cuckold Camila can fall Jason but the Fred must aware all the along way. I think my version is a decent start to cucking.
We just had a fat black guy in this latest update, so that is no longer true.I have a question, why are there only pumped-up black guys in the game, hello)(
blackmail path. dont fuck her at home and it will end up with analAnyone know in which path this scene trigger ? How i am going to activate this scene ? I have finished all the paths but still can't get this scene.
This is what i get at the end when i follow your guides. Still can't trigger the scene i mentioned ealier.Blackmail, but during point where Jason is harassing Camila, you must play the mini game until the option of Jason keep your pants on or take off your pants. Now I now you wanna pop em pants off and get down on Camila, but keep the pants on. Then only proceed with the purple text options when she is in Jason room cleaning. If she does not go there, take pictures until she goes there. It will be random. Now I know you wanna nut by now but stay strong keep taking pictures. When she gets there, activate purple dialogue. You have to do this twice. The event will then trigger.
Shaman remade the animations with the new models, that's why you can't see anymore that image you mentioned in the game.This is what i get at the end when i follow your guides. Still can't trigger the scene i mentioned ealier.
Now i know hahaha, thanks...Shaman remade the animations with the new models, that's why you can't see anymore that image you mentioned in the game.